perspective, i think. This is entirely from his perspective, and mostly follows his own inner monologue. We don't have her inner thoughts at all, so it feels unbalanced.
"We keep fucking under the pretense of extra lessons"? I'm glad they have their priorities straight.
I'm actually pretty happy to see that although they can't show their true relationship until she graduates, they've already sworn themselves to each other and she seems perfectly willing and wants to bear his child.
Yes, some sweet, lovely Vanilla baby-making sex and I love it. This release is missing a Vanilla tag that rightfully deserves to be displayed.
Great ending though. Yes, like a pure white Vanilla flower.
The author is intentionally not very subtle in giving us two or three "read between the lines" moments explaining that she's bombing her math exams on purpose, and that the tutoring was always a way to take up his time and attention initially, and afterwards he was in on it when they started them at her parents house.