I this really one of those stories where the girl is saying "no" but really she want it? I guess I will fin that out on the next chapter. Also the artwork was pretty good, and seeing as our female lead was in a maid outfit was very erotic.
It did look like she wanted him, but it didn't look like she wanted to be forced like that. There are plenty of cases in hentai where a girl says no when she's actually happy about the guy taking her but feels like she needs to say no for one reason or another, but this looked like she really meant no even if she probably would have meant yes had he gone about it in a better way. Even in hentai, most girls aren't happy with a guy when he blackmails them into sex.
So the sequel will show if this story can cross the border to vanilla city or if it takes a tour to "I want my friends to Gang Bang you while I film it"-ville...
Eh. Why are you all folk lamenting this is not straight vanilla? If it ain't tagged so, don't expect it to be. Folks like me enjoy some spicy stuff like this, eh?
Oh, don't get me wrong, it was well done. The fact it has me this emotionally invested is a good thing for the mangaka's craft. In fact, have an up vote just because your opinion should be up here too.
Also, there have been works not tagged vanilla myself and others note have given us to 'good feels' in the end, but we also felt were rightly not marked vanilla. With such an emotion based tag, these things happen.
Well...He was kind of an ass, definitely.
This could have been something sweet and beautiful and...well, quite nice, and he just had to ruin it by being an ass. If he stopped to think maybe he would have realised the reason why she specifically requested help from him.
Doesn't mean he can't fix it though, makes me want a sequel of some sort.
That could go in either direction, really. Both have been seen before. I guess it depends a lot on her reaction to this, as well as whether he stays with her right now or runs.
But yeah, if he had actually told her the things he only thought in his head early in the chapter, things could have ended up much different there.
Metamorphosis has me in a mood.