>Avoids the usual setup cliches. >Believable. >Good designs. >Great dialogue. >Great love scene. >Great fashion sense. >Just a hint of deviousness.
Very nice. I'd say towards the middle it fumbles a bit before our two mains get it on. I think her looking at the comments on definitely-not-twitter are all the info we need. Her outwardly expressing how stressed she is isn't necessary IMO since we've already had enough exposure to her as a character to know what she's about. The dialogue before the act slumps a bit in quality and falls into the usual. "I've been holding back." "I'm feeling hot" "make me feel really good" etc. But once our MC starts insisting a bit more and we find out about Nono's preferences the whole scenario is elevated. The aspect of her liking rough sex is very endearing. Though, again, could've been delivered slightly better. I like seeing our MC take delight in "sullying someone else's property" in a way. Kinda kinky but weird considering these two are childhood friends. Hell, the admission from our boy that she's basically never had any other friends is a bold one. You telling me your her entire world? That's some crazy shit. Still, I like that the story maintains it's vanilla veneer and doesn't veer off course too much.
TL;DR Streaming is a good pasttime you and your SO should consider it. Just don't get too crazy about it, it's not healthy. LMAO
Something about this doesn't sit right with me. Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but the power dynamic of their relationship seems off. He seems to hold all the cards and she is completely dependent upon him.
I didn't think of it as a power balance issue, as much as an issue where Noa-chan is getting tired of the demands of online streaming and the persona she is playing. She doesn't want to hide the fact that she and Yoshiyuki are together. For his part, Yoshiyuki is a bit insecure, and it feels like he's adjusting from being a bit overprotective, but he thinks the streaming is still a positive for her, since she's shielding him from the negativity she sees.
Lets figure this one out. Some are saying he is trying to control her. He's the one that gets her into streaming. Were she's making money now. Their busy so they don't see each other alot. Thats not controlling that's normal for some couples. Now we get to her she's hot I'll give you that. Here's the big but she is getting !! SEXY GIFTS !! from randoes online and keeping them. That not all then she where's them to show off to her BF. Okay this is hentai so sure it's fine of course why not. !! YEA HENTAI !! I'm out.
She had better worship the ground this guy walks on. How guys do you know would let their girl get !! SEXY UNDIES !! from some rando online. That's a big !! ZERO !! for me. Don't get me wrong I'll still give this one a vanilla tag... But how long before one of the randoes wants a face to face thank you for his gift. I hate !! NTR !! !! YEA HENTAI !! I'm out.
Let the record show that certain visitors to Nono's stream can dream, fantasize and even speculate as much as they like ... Yoshiyuki has already, so-to-say, "closed the deal".
>Avoids the usual setup cliches.
>Believable.
>Good designs.
>Great dialogue.
>Great love scene.
>Great fashion sense.
>Just a hint of deviousness.
Very nice. I'd say towards the middle it fumbles a bit before our two mains get it on. I think her looking at the comments on definitely-not-twitter are all the info we need. Her outwardly expressing how stressed she is isn't necessary IMO since we've already had enough exposure to her as a character to know what she's about. The dialogue before the act slumps a bit in quality and falls into the usual. "I've been holding back." "I'm feeling hot" "make me feel really good" etc. But once our MC starts insisting a bit more and we find out about Nono's preferences the whole scenario is elevated. The aspect of her liking rough sex is very endearing. Though, again, could've been delivered slightly better. I like seeing our MC take delight in "sullying someone else's property" in a way. Kinda kinky but weird considering these two are childhood friends. Hell, the admission from our boy that she's basically never had any other friends is a bold one. You telling me your her entire world? That's some crazy shit. Still, I like that the story maintains it's vanilla veneer and doesn't veer off course too much.
TL;DR Streaming is a good pasttime you and your SO should consider it. Just don't get too crazy about it, it's not healthy. LMAO
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