Great story and great scenes but, whatever happened with the other transfer? Did I miss a page? Or was he just lost to the void? I’m pretty sure she didn’t hook up with him because it’d really sour the story for me.
While I enjoyed reading this and seeing their relationship bloom, I'm kinda irked that we didn't get any clarifications about Shunko and the new transfer student. I mean, rumors were out that they were walking home together and we don't get answers to what their relationship was in this chapter. What's worse is that this reads like the final chapter in a series, so we will probably never get those answers. I would have appreciated at least a throwaway line. Ultimately, it just feels like the transfer student was just a plot device to make Shunko and Moroboshi's relationship move forward. This is fine I guess but if this was the case then I feel that there are some missed opportunities storytelling wise.
The tomboy who is honest with herself and outgoing when she wants her feelings known to her crush is really sexy to me. She and Kazumi from Tomomimi Shimon's "I Love It Hot" could be sisters or cousins because she acts the same way and is one my favorite tomboy characters too.
Another hot dam release...This series has been something else. I'm hoping for more but this chapter left the story on such a high note so if it ended here, I'd be happy. I wasn't really a fan of how he unnecessarily pseudo-NTR'd her in Chpt 2 but in a way it did show how much he actually liked her and wanted their already established relationship to be exclusive, and that's how she saw it.
On page 12, when Hiro spurts in Shunko's mouth, cum shoots out of her
nose (panel 1) and keeps oozing out as she keeps sucking (panels 3-4).
I haven't seen that gag since Honeybunch Kaminski sucked off
Projunior in Robert Crumb's underground comic "She's Leaving
Home" (Uneeda Comix, Aug, 1970).
EDIT:
After reviewing the first chapter, Sore Loser, Shunko!!, I noticed
that cum dribbles out of Shunko's nose on page 9, panels 2-3.
Nothing cutter then a tomboy in casual clothes.
Page 12 and Page 16 ❤
"She's crude... a real tomboy... I can't date a girl like..." -Bro you don't date girls like that, you WIFE girls like that!
This chapter is without a doubt, one of the GOAT Tomboy chapters!
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