It’s very sweet. I like it. Also the guy despite being tubby is very well-groomed and kind asw. There’s more to being attractive than musculus and a jawline
Perhaps back in their (high) school, many males sensed "a disturbance in the Force", at what took place in these sixteen pages (even if they have no evidence for their feeling), and, if they happen to think of the male protagonist (Mosao-san), the thought flashing across their collective minds is: "You Lucky Bastard, ... GRR!!!!!"
And over in the real world, a legendary male adult film actor, famous for "not having the stereotypical body of a Greek god" might just smile at this as if to say: "I have nothing else to teach you, Mosao-san."
The positioning of the two of them on page 3 was kinda weird...Was she like directly behind him...walking downwards?
'That seems a bit excessive'? I'd think so, except it's Hentai.
Vanilla...Well, the cake is a strawberry one though and a mont blanc is...a mont blanc. Maybe bring her a Vanilla cake the next time?
I'll be honest. This doesn't seem vanilla. She just seems like a desperate slut who will take whatever she can get. She literally had no problems with letting this guy she's never talked to before do her just so she could get off.
I might have to agree with you a bit. This is nice and sweet, but I don't think she really likes him, or even really knew who he was. Seems kind of like she just wanted to get laid. Also she doesn't seem to be losing her virginity. Kind of seems like her throwing him a bone, maybe a relationship will develop, but I've read non vanilla tagged stories with more romance than that. That said, I wouldn't call her a desperate slut though, maybe just hornier than most.
So, I can see your line of thinking however I think that's an interpretive conclusion. Usually when the author intends for a character to appear slutty, they sprinkle hints that she really gets around. Or that she doesn't care whose dick it is. In this case she clearly thinks something of him (pg 10) and she's saying his name over and over. As opposed to being all "I LOVE DICKS". It's not cut and dry but I think that's enough for me to feel that she isn't such a slutty character.
I'll agree that my description of her was probably a bit too heavy, I probably just couldn't find the right words. As for the rest, refer to iceboy's comment to me below you, he summed it up nicely.
4 chapters today. Amazing! and Azuma Tesshin at the end of the day! Thanks! Wait... so making the top girl of the college fall from the stairs, break her arm and leg get's you laid? Why didn't I knew of this before???