The Captive Cheater

Good artwork.

more please

The art is ok imo, good plot but that's about it

Pretty standard ntr chapter. Nothing new but I didn't expect her to fall so hard at the end of the chapter

I was going to let others write a review of this first chapter but since there are none, and the plot creatively thickens at the end of the second chapter, I will go ahead and put in my two cents here.

It basically follows the Fakku description for the story; a trope of the seemly innocent female virgin getting a boyfriend but then discarding her fidelity with him by fooling around with another dude who devises a plan to get the forbidden fruit (her). In this tale, the antagonist creates that plan with the use of the boyfriend's misplaced phone. As the reader gets deeper in the story, the boyfriend will show the typical NTR/cheating story MC(victim) absentmindedness to the point where you'll wonder how the boyfriend ever figured out how to check his texts, let alone find a way to track his phone. His "friend" uses the phone, which has naughty pictures of the couple's private time he uses to blackmail his girlfriend, to play them both like a fiddle, at the expense of their newly formed relationship. She ends up giving herself up and boom, your normal NTR...BUT...there is a couple twists coming down the road. I'm on the edge of the seat of my chair...