I don't really know what to feel about this. I mean, at least he's...somewhat better by the end than he was in the beginning, planning to save her...eventually, anyway. I still feel bad for her though, as she's still suffering while he bides his time.
Hell, I'd have been happier if he just went in there and brutally murdered that douche either at the beginning, or middle, or even at the end, anytime really.
...Makes me curious if there'll be a sequel of any sort. Probably not, but I really do want to see the protagonist saving her properly.
Definitely missing some tags...
I really need to start looking for ones where the protagonist actually saves the girl. These are becoming a huge downer....
Althought I seriously feel sorry for her, this one was great.
By the way, there's a small typo on page 14. In the bottom left text it says "perm" instead of... I think you know what I mean :P