Great character details and posing. Pretty phenomenal proportions overall and good line quality. Maybe I’ve read too much Hentai but the story is pretty meh. I feel like the payoff isn’t all that sexy despite the clear quality on display here.
Like, I understand the “I’ve been holding back this whole time” trope. It’s a classic. I just feel like we didn’t go far enough with explaining why the horny GF is so horny. I’m not asking for a magnum opus just give her one more aspect to her character and don’t give her halo back at the end. Girls can be selfish and horny too, it’s not a big deal. For the guy’s part? I just wish he was more candid in his thoughts. I wanna hear some raunchiness! But then again, it’s vanilla. What do I expect?
TL;DR pretty good/10. Needs a tad more spice to really work imo.
The vanilla Osananajimi circle will be complete.
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