They Formed a Circle, But Not to Dance
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gammenon
Story Junkie
4 years ago
I dunno if it's bc people didn't read the first installment of this series (Love and Peace) but I'm kinda shocked there wasn't more sympathy towards Kayoko. She was drugged before all this started...It's not like when she first innocently visited the club she witnessed a bunch of debauchery going on, stuck around and slowly got turned on by it, and then participated. She drank some "water" given to her, then blanked out, and woke up to find herself unclothed with a penis penetrating her. I have no idea what was going thru Mafuyu's creative mind when he/she had Kayo drink whatever she drank, but it seemed to me that it did some neurological damage to her because of her nutty behavior (and it doesn't matter if they were her ideas or not) toward the end of the Part 1.
Now, I don't blame the boyfriend for dumping her because he obviously didn't know what happened to her...but if you read Love and Peace, I would think the reader would have a different opinion for Kayo. I'm sure she doesn't deserve the THOT label.
Now, I don't blame the boyfriend for dumping her because he obviously didn't know what happened to her...but if you read Love and Peace, I would think the reader would have a different opinion for Kayo. I'm sure she doesn't deserve the THOT label.
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gammenon
Story Junkie
4 years ago
Still kinda amazes me how some cheating characters are relentlessly dumped on for unclear reasons but some of the same commenters seem that they would hi-five other unfaithful characters if they existed, characters who were clearly more unsympathetic. This chick clearly got poisoned to the point of psychological damage, which was evident bc she acted completely out of character after drinking whatever she drank, at least with what we see in the story. smh
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gammenon
Story Junkie
4 years ago
Yeesh. Proper closure? I guess but it's not a happy ending. He loses somebody that would probably been faithful to him under sane, un-evil circumstances and maybe would have gotten married to and had kids...But he's forced to dump her bc he didn't know she got drugged and was transformed into a neurotic cum dumpster.
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MHM-Dono
Person Of Culture
5 years ago
Like the song said: "(You Got To) Know When to Hold 'Em, Know When to Fold 'Em. Know When to Walk Away, Know When to Run."
Protag-kun made his choice by the end ... Deal With It.
Protag-kun made his choice by the end ... Deal With It.
This chapter is part of Love and Peace.
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I must say though...I am really happy he decided to move on, rather than just stay and suffer throughout his college life.
It's honestly one of the best ways this could have ended and I'm happy that he was able to let go. So many NTR protagonists just can't let go and let themselves suffer.
He made his choice and I'm happy for him. Sure he keeps that key around, but he doesn't seem to know what happened to her, or seem to particularly care to find out. And that's perfectly fine. I'm sure he'll do well in college and find someone better eventually.