It kinda triggers me when people write *Then instead of *Than (and vice versa), specially when i pay for a solid translation. And english isn't even my native language.
It didn't annoy me as much but I noticed it as well. But if that's the one flaw we discover in this submission then we should consider ourselves blessed.
Smuggins, please know that I do like and respect you, and the beating with the Carp I'm about to give you is merely my duty. I take (next to) no joy in it.
Hah, that smile her brother gave when she replied that she'd rather stay there a bit longer...He knows, and at least he had the decency to leave them to their date afterwards.
Great ending, too. The next year, then the year after that...Your whole lifetime together would be nice, really.
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