Sequel to Usual Spot Ch.1.
Here's hoping we get a part 3 cause as it stands our MC's mind has been poisoned by the mysterious highschool girl to the point of being obsessed with her and can only think about being with her again. (still waiting for the twist that they've met before but he doesn't remember)
I love the trope of the guy thinking he's having his way with the girl while he sees her as a slutty masochist when in reality, she's the one getting off by using him and has been on the hunt for a guy like him and was the one really in control the whole time.
A+ stuff Dojirou!!
Mess with the bull you get the horns situation. She has become an obsession to him and now that she isn’t around anymore he is having major withdrawals. She totally messed him up!
This story is an illustration of (I think) how we all are trying to navigate within the margins of socially and legally acceptable behaviors while simultaneously being filled with urges that don't fit. The male character is acting out a range of drives that taken as a whole parallel what we think of in legal terms as pedophile rape. The FEMALE character/ object is never given definition or background beyond being the underage focus of his aggression-laden sexuality. Acts that she has seemingly initiated but for which he no less feels guilty about because he knows he is an adult and she isn't and that he never wants to consider those facts until well after his has gotten his nut off or, possibly as another core component of his arousal. Sure, the storyline circles back to the old "she was actually in control" trope but again that doesn't absolve the choices he made indulging his arousal and other urges. Given implied control he opted for full steam ahead which legally makes him a criminal. Laws are drafted by people, fellow human beings who while acknowledging all sorts of things can be imagined, acting on them has been mandated as taboo and wrong for a reason.
While critical of the implications of this narrative, with only a little modification my previous critiques would be moot. This seems like a perfect set up for a "haunted" story where the girl is actually a spectre that drags men through a reenactment of something that happened on the train that led to her tragic end of a succubus story involving a demon spectre trying to fuck and drain enough terrible men to become permanently corporeal, reducing them to old men in the process! In this way the predatory men are punished for what they've done before meeting her or for appetites they indulged because they met her. Morality emerges from a deluge of angry, amoral cum and a nearby retirement home becomes populated by young men trapped in withering bodies!
Here's hoping we get a part 3 cause as it stands our MC's mind has been poisoned by the mysterious highschool girl to the point of being obsessed with her and can only think about being with her again. (still waiting for the twist that they've met before but he doesn't remember)
I love the trope of the guy thinking he's having his way with the girl while he sees her as a slutty masochist when in reality, she's the one getting off by using him and has been on the hunt for a guy like him and was the one really in control the whole time.
A+ stuff Dojirou!!
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