Salty over the story or the character? Hating the story bc of the character, I see your point. But IF...if you think there should no reaction to a loathsome antagonist, you lost me bc definitely should not be expected. As for the length of the opinion, I guess it depends on what exactly is "long".
Salty over the story or the character? Hating the story bc of the character, I see your point. But IF...if you think there should no reaction to a loathsome antagonist, you lost me bc definitely should not be expected. As for the length of the opinion, I guess it depends on what exactly is "long".
would have been far better if the one she was talking to online was actually her bro and they ended up doing it. would have been tons better then this pseudo-NTR shite
You stupid fucking bitch. People like that aren't worth it. Even if there family. She let's any sweet talker fill her head with nonsense, but won't listen to her bother. Not worth the effort.
He's a worrywart for a reason, I'm sure. Sigh, he probably should have stuck around, maybe he could have prevented what was coming, but...Ah well.
I mean, massive props to him where, after finding out what happened, he immediately went over to their place to try and 'save' her and stop what was happening, but...Well, when she herself refused and basically told him to go away, I guess he kind of broke.
And yeah, she got popular in the end, but...Was it worth it? For her, I guess it was, since she was obsessed with having people watch and appreciate her and her streams...She may be happy, but her little brother certainly isn't.
I can also understand why this isn't quite NTR despite definitely feeling like one...Well, first of all, they aren't in a relationship. He's just horrified at the reality of what she's doing and even tries to stop her, and his despair at the end when he finds out she was perfectly willing and wasn't being forced into it is probably a natural enough reaction for a brother who cares for his sister.
Poor guy. He didn't deserve to be subjected to this kind of mental anguish. If only she has decided to rely on him more than go to some random streamer's place.
Idk...He kinda struck me as a little too abrasive to her in the beginning. She was probably looking for attention by streaming bc she didn't get any of it elsewhere. I wonder if he tried himself to get her out the house and ease her into a social setting...And as for the guy she ended up streaming with, she's happy now but with scum like him, she's far from reaching the bottom of that rabbit hole. Waiting for her likely will be a bunch of humiliation of every sort, gangbangs, maybe even public bangs.
Great debut work by Dramus! I really hope we get a tag for face masks cuz I have noticed there are more stories with girls with them recently. After reading this story I finally get why it called “Yomi Country” good title makes sense.
Or it will be a twist and since she IS Yomi, she will become the queen of streaming and the guy will mean nothing and she will gain all the benefits of streaming and he gets caught up in it... “I have created a monster!”
Hey miyuki... yeah it has been a while... I thought you and the girls would like to know I got some fresh meat comin’ your way... [looks at Mao-San tied up and gaged in the bed of the truck]... sounds good. I’ll be right there. *click* I’m grateful to you Mao-san. If I hadn’t found a good catch for Big Momma Futa and her band of carnivorous dickgirls it would be my literal ass on the line. Hehehahahaha! [shuts tailgate, starts engine]
This was a moving, introspective Fakku debut...Welp, this is what happens when you act like you and a loved one are still twelve years old and don't show them much of any support, esp to a female family member. Now, my first inclination would have been that that door is coming off those hinges very quickly but that being said, since she did have his consent, I'd be forced to comply...but I would let homeboy know that if he hurts my sister in anyway there would be a Louisville slugger with an inscription of his name on it.
I’m hesitant to call it NTR. Sometimes a brother just doesn’t want their sister in that kind of situation. And his reaction is very much what a protective brother would do compared to your normal NTR protag. Â Even at the end he wasn’t jerking off or cumming, he just had a horrified look on his face.
Honestly it *feels* like an NTR at first but really re-reading it, it looks more like this could be a normal, semi-vanilla story about a girl doing pervy streaming except for two things: 1) Mao looks like a typical NTR antagonist and 2) lil bro catches on to his sister's sex streams and needs to be told off. She pretty much does everything totally consensually and at worst is just engaging in some poor judgement because she was wrecked emotionally by a bad breakup she talks about on pg11.
Oh yeah and the art style also helps the NTR vibes too.
Definitely a fair point. I knew I was being on the broad side calling this story such but the opportunity to make a general comment about NTR was there so I took it!
Yep, he's just a tad more ornery than most of his NTR'ed bretheren. But man, if there's ever been an NTR story written where the wounded party extracted some sweet comeuppance against his tormentors, I've yet to see it.
Love me some naughty masked streamer girls!
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