Misaki_Chi wrote...
Revelation wrote...
zis is mostly for a school thing, somebody snooped through my journals then talked to the poetry team people at school and now I guess I'm on the team... They hunted me down...
I do have a little something I've written but I don't know if I like it.
Yay to hunting! Post it and
then we'll tear it to shreads we can help critique it for you if possilbe (^^)
sigh... okay
Death,
That which finally ends it all
That which makes people cry
That which separates the strong from the weak, the powerful from the powerless
Death happens to all of us
Those whose lives are taken from them when they are in their prime youth
Those that have lived they're lives in full, who have reached their end
Then there are those who have decided to stop living, those who have lost all hope
I can only hold on to this feeling of hope that one day my dreams and wishes will come true
But until then, I cannot know what it is truly like to live
Rough Draft, dont be too harsh, I plan on changing things
EDIT: Be gentle, its my first draft...