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Basically yeah. Lack of quality. I do give kirby points for perseverance though.

What about me T_T

Jk jk

Yeah, for a new user to stick that long into the business... I are impressed. o-o

I'm still a n00b too

Better than her.

I'm not any better than anyone else though, well I'm just a baka who likes to write things =)

Don't belittle your value like a baka.

Hahahaha I see xD

<--- Jelly.

Ikr

http://www.destinysgateway.com/viewstory.php?sid=3926&warning=4

I'll just leave this here

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Stands out from what I seen. The phrases or actions used to depict the situation are very different, very descriptive. The last sentence makes no sense of course, so allow me to describe one or two examples,

"The 'assignment' the protagonist gave to her teacher."
"The last sentence of the short story. i.e. I guess this assignment was a good thing after all."

The dialogue does not sound like it is made up in Leonard267's mind. In other words, it sounded rather natural.

High, you do know how to recognise quality.

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That said, I skipped the paragraphs that describes in detail about the protagonist's physique. Who would pay attention to that?! A sex-deprived old fart?! (Never mind that it is a given in erotic stories)

And the Japanese - English, a term I coined because I don't want to use the word 'Weeabooism'. Really wish they could speak English. I can't understand Chinese.

I haven't read it fully from what I've seen, as even though the description was pretty nice it's rather normal. No such things as cripple sex and such...that garners my interest lol, but well I will read those later on it might be interesting xD

Oh well thanks for the short review, it might motivate me later to give it a thought about these~

And yeah, weeab languages =)

You ought to play Katawa Shoujo, High. Especially if you are type who would love to skip that sentimental nonsense and jump into the awkward intercourse with let's call them "physically unique" 2d characters. For me, I just downloaded the CG for that game instead of having to go through it.

ED: Why? Why put Chinese in what ought to be a proper story written in English? Or was that Japanese? Either way, they are all the same to me! Both the Chinese and Japanese eat dogs and are responsible for Gangnam Style!

>Katawa Shoujo

That's pretty unique indeed~

I might download it later but I find myself too unmotivated to play VNs atm xD



Idk it might be because those language might appeal to weeabs?

Nonsense aside. As someone of Oriental origin, I apologise for the remarks made against people of Oriental origin. And as someone who will be made a cripple in the very near future, I apologise for the remarks made against crippled people.

Now, on a more serious note, Japanese-English is not really necessary. I believe you might have read "Help, the girl I like is not answering my emails!" Very good translation by VGPERSON and I know that the people in it are in Japan because of their surroundings and environment. Barely any of that Japanese English which leaves me a bit confused as to what is being said.

Well my favorite story based on IRL stuff were Husky and Medley tho~

It's adapted into manga so I could understand the story better as I do not like unnecessary descriptions on the wall of texts and I had very poor imaginations when it comes to overly-detailed writeups

It was a novel that Husky and Medley? And it was based on a true story?

ED: Ahh... It was based off an Internet thread. Someone should make a manga based on "Help, the girl I like won't respond to the 600 emails I have sent in a span of 3 days!"

http://mangafox.me/manga/husky_and_medley/

Well i do not know for sure, it's actually based on some thread on 2ch IIRC, yeah it's true story and the realism behind the characters truly intrigues me lol~



Yeah it's kinda similar, I would be more interested to read it if that one's adapted to a manga =)

I also like disturbing genres. But not your kind of disturbing. 'Help!' appears to fall into that category where our hero acts so irrationally and creepy that it is actually surreal and that makes it funny somehow.

ED: Digressing a little. I am still puzzled about Katawa Shoujo. Our protagonist has a heart problem. If it beats too fast he would kick the bucket. How on earth can intercourse take place?! I am assuming that he recovered?

Well, I can always look to the Internet as a source of reliable information.