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I didn't get far. I'm waiting to see if he will produce anymore before I even give it a chance. I'd rather not waste my time if he's just trolling and mocking the writing community.

chill out man, let's just wait to see what happens ok?

meanwhile I got this story written by one of the fellow authors at another forum I joined, here's to that if you want to find some reading material for a diversion

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8796966/1/Refrain

Read it. Shit's not even a story you know.

A shit writer here actually puts more in between two ***'s than his 3 chapters combined.

I don't think he's trolling, I believe he's simply undereducated about upper-level writing. If he didn't mention he was married, I would have bet that he was under-age. For the most part, he doesn't make too many mistakes. While there may not be too many errors in punctuation, capitalization, or spelling, his grammar is informal and casual. When I was a kid, I probably had chapters that long as well, but you grow through experience in reading and writing more to understand how long a chapter should 'be' (actually, more like 'feel' since it's dependent on the story and flow). He probably discovered a spontaneous interest in writing within himself recently.

Not too many people are doing this, but don't disrespect him or assume anything about him just from a simple copy-paste. I fall back on the golden rule that if you can't say something constructive, don't say anything at all. While it is true I haven't said anything personally, that is not because I don't think he's "worthy," (we're hardly deserving to be elitists ourselves) it's simply because I can't assess his level from what he's given in order to form an appropriate response...so I just lurk, like always. If he's genuine, he'll provide enough to work with. If he's not, he'll sink back into the depths he came from. If he's a troll...well, attention never helps anyways so just avoid posting.

...Oh, hello everyone. How are you all doing?

Doing fine so far. Being nervous as hell and slowly getting back the motivation to write.

And no, I don't think I'm disrespecting him. I was just irritated with what he gave us since I expected quite a bit after his "IT WILL BE EPIC".

Enough banter, how's life treating you?

Yes, I understand, which is simply why I decided to sit back before claiming that he is actually trolling or not. If he does continue to post, I would not mind reading and giving constructive criticism. His desire to create several novels, and then posting very short chapters simply triggered a nerve.



Not particularly bad. I have my classes and a part time job, but I've been meaning to do something with the bit of free time I have in between. Like Mibu, I've building up some motivation to write again. And indeed, following Mibu's question, how are things going for you Xenon?

Yeah, but I can't criticize that. When I was younger, I would orgasm to my own writing ideas as well. Now, I'm just happy to come up with something. Anything. So, I know that feel of a lack of motivation, bro. Good to hear you're getting it back, albeit slowly.

I've been better. Overall, I can't complain. Even sick, I'm very happy.

I got most of my recent inspiration from playing games, and while I'm dreaming, the most vivid ones were the one resembling a game~

that aside, when things could get sorted right, I'm planning to write a fanfiction about a really popular game around here, maybe few months later after I finished some of my other stuff~

Doing so-so.

But I think I might reach the breaking point if things keeps getting worse at this rate though.

I still want to write a fantasy adventure with a clear ending. It's my bane as I can't seem to write a long series, nor can I stray from my romance genre, but I want to write one soooooo bad!

But, rewatching pokemon eh? Good times indeed. I still wonder why pikuchu chooses to reset his level every season.

Edit: oh shit, that doesn't exactly sound welcoming Rise; that's not 'so-so'...

well here's how I did my fantasy adventure one, a bit of a screwed up logic though, if it could do any good to help

https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=89691

that aside, I still have yet to get a grasp while writing normal stories aside from the usual randomness factor that had pretty much becomes a part of my trademark style

https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=89691

>quintuple posts
>tells others not to double post

Lolk.

No, really. I don't know what's the deal as I don't think multiple posting, as long as it isn't excessive, is a problem. But that's not very nice of you.

I split it in multiple parts because it's too many to put them all into one post, besides the lack of replies forced me to do that lol =)

besides I'm talking about replying to stories, not the content of the story itself =)

Lol ik. But I still fail to see what's the problem, it's not excessive by any means and he's still learning his stuff.

Oh and, pdf your work. It's long enough to deserve it.

ah okay, I think I should apologize to him the next time he replied~

which one? I'll get onto it soon~

Brickwork. That's the one I actually cared to follow.

ah okay, though the chapters were basically pretty short lol~

Today has been a great day.

You must be one hell of a bored guy, Mibu.

Hello. Long time no see. What have I been missing?