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good luck for the new collab mang :D

busy with things atm, I'll just read along.

I noticed, I thought it was a pretty good addition. I didn't think he would be hostile at first, but that was a nice and immediate twist. Hope someone can write our protagonist out of that situation somehow.



Very well, but please feel free to join in whenever you feel up to it. Glad you noticed it, at least.

I will do what I did for the Boring Boy sans the Inception nonsense. If you mind my entry, feel free to ignore it.

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added something. if it was quite inappropriate. I can delete my post :D

Bring back the Soviets! Even communists have better tastes in music than the artists you made me suffer through!

what kind of artists? I don't really remember many things I posted.

the national anthem parodies made me laugh a lot tho :D

I was referring to the video in the spoiler. That said I promised I won't do an Inception but I did not say that I won't reach for the kill switch.

I have added an entry to Xenon's thread.

yeah, knew that :D

will go reading it.

I hoped you enjoyed the reference to you and to me. Fancy a L-267 antidepressant?

that was quite a subtle reference for me. I for example, haven't realized it until you told me so =D

I am never going through this 'high time' again! is not really subtle is it?

yeah, but a good one nonetheless =D

Posted.

I have to admit, it got longer than I thought.

Not so good with noir though, excuse me in that regard.

Edit: Lol goddammit High

dem british accente =D

That was actually pretty good for a noir attempt.

I know I say two-to-four paragraphs in the rules, but it's more of a reminder to keep it decently short than a strict demand. So, you're good.

Oh coolios.

Albeit, I'm not sure what to do currently. The personality of her in my mind is sorta derped so... I'll wait till someone performs some miracle writing I guess.

How do see the story continuing? If you ask me to continue the story, I will do what I did before. Woman describes the problem, Smith chickens out by exclaiming that the problem is better solved by calling in the military.

I am sure that you don't want that to serve as the continuation to your story.

For me, I see Smith suffering from some sort of personality disorder and megalomania. Explains the need for anti-depressants. Explains why he hasn't moved out from that part of the city. Explains why he thinks being a PI is the same as being an action hero.

ED: I am under the impression that we approach PIs to find out whether our spouses are cheating on us and the like.

why not? it will be funny! =D personally I think the serious moments are a good start to deliver some punchlines that makes people cringe.

kinda like how you develop things too.

cheating? I think the spouse uses gameshark or cheat engine =)

But how would you want the story to continue personally?

maybe let the woman who's been out of character 'cuz I somehow ruined it try to explain what's going on. I'm not expecting anything though, it can be things with hidden hints (which everyone will be hard to follow) or simply try to come up with things very silly that will lead towards a surreal, nonsensical case =D

on a second thought, I kinda like these games :D

http://www.kongregate.com/games/TerryCavanagh_B/heros-adventure