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I'm just doing nothing beside bumping it once in a while so don't worry 'bout it lol~

That's a great idea btw~

Toshino Kyouko!

Need more readers. ~.~

You have readers! They just dont always leave a message~

It's like neutrino streams, what can't be measured can't be confirmed to exist! :3

Yeah I just went halfway watching the show atm and frankly surprised how she resembles me alot on some aspects~

Mibu, don't worry I am still trying to read your novel. But know this, it doesn't matter how slow I read it, but so long as I read it, there will come one day when I read it in its entirety.

That said, I wish there was some description of our main character. I didn't know whether Mibuchiha and Ryushi are the same person until his full name is spoken. Of course, I am only into the first few pages so I will leave my first impressions in the lounge.

I was a bit confused at the first transition from the classroom to the War Council-ish setting where I am under the impression that Ryushi is transported to another universe or is in a dream. But again, I haven't read enough to find out what on earth has been going on.

High: Tell us more about Kyouko.
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I hope you won't mind if I end this post by typing a bit of nonsense.

Documentary making, documentary publishing, documentary marketing and anything documentary related is quite similar to marketing encyclopedias by going door to door, knocking on them, harassing the occupants who reside beyond the door and risking getting one's face injured as the door slams at a considerable velocity.

To put it in grossly simple terms, nobody cares about documentaries. And this little experiment will prove the point made by the previous sentence.

If anyone reading this thread would put aside time to view these two documentaries posted below:




This would show that documentaries are worth caring about. But considering that the average reader of this particular post would not waste 5 hours of his life viewing them shows clearly in the most unscientifc way that documentaries are not worth caring about.

Where most of the answer lies. :3

Also, it was my first work. So don't expect any fancy planning. XD

Sorry Mibu, I have forgotten to tell you which parts I enjoyed. I did like the chemistry between Sora and Ryushi. If I were to write a novel like this, it will be quite hard for me to write dialogue or come up with motivations or personalities. This requires me to think in the shoes of someone else.

Kinda lazy to explain lol, but when I watched the show I could somehow see myself as her in that world because I kinda like screwing around with various people and make lots of silly jokes~

You really make me wonder how do you read it. o.O Afair nothing about Sora and Ryushi yet, assuming I'm right in that you haven't finish c1 yet.

Ah. She is a troublemaker. That is just like me in a way. I usually get away with writing nonsense because of whenever I troll, I put in effort. Or just enough effort to make it long enough as that people are mislead to thinking that I am being serious. My Contest Entry can be cynically viewed as an attempt to give the judges the bird! Of course, I meant no offense to Pacifica.


That said. You were right about me. Next week term will begin and I look forward to Confucian Studies and of course, my journey into the wonders of Civil Engineering continue.

Mibu: I have read till the end of Chapter 1. For some reason, I was convinced when Sora made it her goal to get Ryushi's attention. Kind of like a little child trying to get the attention of other people and not unlike me.

That is simply a bit too long since the documentaries I watched were mostly range from about 30 mins to 1 hour, which is from National Geographic and Discovery Channel~

It's more about the topic of interest you see, I have little to no curiosity about Philosophy and Financial aspects. But it would make much difference if the documentary was narrated by a porn star with a husky voice that resembles an alto sax playing bass tune~



That is totally different from me, whenever I tried to write normal stuff it always turn out to be an utter nonsense in the end with lots of blatantly offensive content without me realizing it beforehand~

Not especially a troublemaker she is, you see, probably just a bored person with absurd things going around her head~



I've read one of the works by Confucious, though I prefer looking up on Taoism~

High: These are ideas for my next short essay / work. It is keeping in style with the tongue in cheek way of writing nonsense in a rather serious manner; I endeavour to write like Swift, where arguments of cannibalism are put forward, albeit in an extremely sarcastic manner.

Perhaps sometime in the future I can incorporate Confucian, Taoist and Legalist thoughts into my writing. I prefer Legalism to tell you the truth.

I will probably be utterly confused when you tried to write like that, but I might still read it and give my thoughts upon it~

That was good feedback High. I really appreciate it. It is fine writing one sentence like this:

The bloody university bloody has a bloody long bloody vacation that bloody gives me a bloody bloodlust that bloody stayed in my bloody mind to the bloody moment I am bloody typing this bloody story.

in an essay. But if the entire essay is written like that, yes, it is very hard to read.

You might find yourself beginning to speak with a British accent with too much 'Bloody' like that~

Though you can reverse it by the American-style of using 'Fuck' in every sentence which made you speak like the people from the US and A

And if you want to do it Indonesian style, use 'JANCOCK'

High, this is where you don't understand! Any post made by Leonard267 ought to read out in a Standard British accent! Wouldn't you agree?

Hahaha, that would be a truly hilarious spectacle~

Though if I were to read your works in my broken accent it will truly be a lulzy thing to witness of course~

Someone should do a recording and post it here! I have a long day tomorrow High. Love to chat with you tomorrow night. Of course, I will write a little more and post it on the Lounge. I can't write everything in one sitting.