writing a story.

I really want to start writing something. but I suck at English I tried checking out the writing and fan fiction page and just got demotivated. I don't even know how to put colors on the texts... I'm gonna read again my English books again. is there anyway that can make writing in English much more easier? English so complex. sometimes I encountered some words that I'm not familiar with such as whimsical that I need to read a dictionary to identify what's the meaning of that actual word. plus I don't know how to use comma properly I believe comma is being use to make the reader have the time to breathe. hope someone can tell me how to write in the easiest way or form (please don't tell me to start by writing children's book).

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I did try reading some books. but it just doesn't sync on my head.

recently read books:
-les miserables -the enrich classic version
-some filipino books.

old books read
-sweet valley high
-sweet valley university
-Archie comics
-readers digest

well you can say I don't like reading but i love to write does that make sense at all? lol

write your story in your primary language then have someone translate it to English.

are telling in real life? no. that won't work. I'll die from embarrassment. we'll I can hire someone from the net I think maybe that can work.

Read novels... It's by far the easiest way to learn the engrish language properly.

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can you suggest a good one?

Any kind of Mystery Novel can help like Sherlock Holmes~

Isn't that something only done in my RP? Why'd you feel demotivated from just that?

>Don't like reading

Well, during my 'fun English learning' time, I was taught that learning English starts from Reading and finishes at Writing. So guess what?

I suggest learning to go suck a dick.

Told from the expert himself.

Write a story about a traumatized kid who goes deaf, dumb and blind after witnessing his father kill his mother's lover (because she thought the father was dead). His parents unaware of his disabilities, they send him to his relatives where he is tortured and molested by them because of his helplessness. Little Tommy is then introduced to a pimp called Hawker who promises he can cure the dumb, the blind and the deaf. Tommy later meets The Acid Queen and her hallucinogenic drugs to try to treat his disabilities- with no success. Nevertheless, he subsequently gains public attention by his curious interest in pinball.

Now you have copied half the story of Tommy. Congratulations.

I wrote a short novel and a photo tech manual... People found the novel to be too graphic.... fucking guro written dream story.


The manual was an Alt process text for a old professor since coffee process and blood toning was non existent at that time... plus carbon toner.

Actually he's cured from his disabilities after his mother destroys his mirror. After that I think he's sent to a campus. I don't remember. Been a while since I last listened to it.

Hence "copied half the story of Tommy"

I wish I wrote it.

hmm okay L'll try It.

AS Tommy crawled on the floor he simply pause for a second and look at the pinball that was on his hand. he started remembering what was life before this nightmare happened. as snow fell on his head he remembered the day where the three of them was happiest it was christmas eve mom was cooking DAD was seating on the chair smoking while reading the news paper as his dad looks at him with a tender smile
seems like everything was warm before that in tommy's mind he's thinking where did this nightmare start? why is this all happening. as tears shed down to his cheeks. suddenly a sharp stabbing pain in the head came to tommy he agonize in pain and seeing some strange image. he was remembering something. as he remembers more the pain goes far more greater he feel like his head will explode of the pain. as he remember more and more he saw an image of his father and mother arguing of something. his mother was yelling at his father and pointing at a paper his mother cried and his father and mother hugged each other. another image appeared his father sitting on the table which seems like has a ton of problems his father trowed all the things in the table will then crying in tears. then he saw the fighting of his father and mother it seems like he's in to that dream has as a woman came to the house the woman and his father was arguing after that his father pull a gun and shut the woman in the head. then a big tidal wave was destroying the house and then tommy was awakened due a splash of water that came from a carriage wheel.

i really want to put more to it like saying that tommy got mad and clench his teeth but yeah I'm really getting sleepy.. :D lol

@solidshark i wanna join the contest for the horror genre. and still don't know the mechanics but hopefully thesaurus and google will help me you can delete my post if it really unreadable or unbearable to read. :D

If you don't read, you're going to have a horrible time writing. Inspiration, learning how to grammar and english all come from reading.

WRITE FGT.
DON'T BE A BITCH, WRITE. Which reminds me for like the 20th time... I have a story in the writing section I should probably get onto doing something with.

Write them in your language first.