f0dd3r wrote...
Ok here are some thoughts for you
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the most shading/lighting i've done on this pic were on the eyes, so bleah
Fuuko is nearly flat, no boobs (READ: LOLI)
and it's not a hood, i just messed up with the outlines and decided to leave it that way and then abandoned shading/lighting when i noticed it :P
btw, Clannad's girl's winter seifukuu top are intentionally oversized, so besides the sleeves covering the wrists entirely, the line where the cloth of the sleeves and the torso part go down a little lower; and kinda folds up stiff when the arms are raised
the only thing i could have confidence in is her face: i think it's quite accurate
it's a sloppy work
but i'd like to get some more character-specific criticism since i'm trying to draw an anime character