Adventures of dr. Pervert (Completed)

Well here it is what many others had noted to be my 'trademark story'. As you can see, it's already completed as for now, the current version was actually a remake that had started out from the past March 2011~

I'll probably add the Appendix part and do some edits as I felt that it needs some major improvement on the write-up

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Genre : Humor / Fantasy

Synopsis : The story of a perverted protagonist named Arata Shiozaki; following his various adventures that can't really be put into words.

Status : Completed

Warning, the story contains some weird and offensive stuffs that some people might be uncomfortable with, proceed with caution

I feel offended.

:lol:,
Jokes aside ... i think the story really talks about "PERVERT".

and my comment is ...

right FTW!

btw dr. Pervert isn't my alter ego...

sense some lie here LoL,
anyway, keep updating it's funny for me tho

Well, some parts based on daily life if ya know what i mean

Like associating life sciences with perverted objects

Write on!

thx a lot! i started to think this story is a bit weird(science = sex)

but phew...i felt relieved by now

I'm suprised there's really few comments by far, maybe I should increase the 'Lemonade' appael by doing some serious reading

sounds lil bit like me when i was young >.> LOL JK

read through it...

damn, this is perverted alright. I can't take it! XD

Just wait for the next chapter, it's really a depth-plot-twist-you'll never expect

It's the best story I've written so far, don't know 'bout how you're thinking

haha, I'll look forward to the twist.

Already updated, your comments please?

This chapter is really weird, I felt like been put on some kind of curse

u-ugh. what's going in the minds of the characters...

It's really dark isn't it?

Took me a long time to read that ...
Guuu ~~~
the main characters rock ...
but if i met him in the real life, i would assassinate him for sure LoL ...
somewhat similar to this guy ...


OMG ...

Does he resemble Makoto Ito?

Who? Rance or this Dr. Pervert ?
Makoto Ito is a jerk , if i meet him, i wouldn't assassinate him..
it's too kind for a jerk like that. I will make him regret living :evil:

Dr. Pervert is the worst pervert: he's not human anyway.

I just give a spoiler : Dr. Pervert and his sisters were an incarnate of the Archdevils

Gah! I feel so dirty reading it... hahaha. It was great!

Same as my senpai statement above me .....^

I feel dirty and offended LoL ...

I think you lack some comedy at your update :sad: ...

i assume that it will be better if you have some comedy added ..
well it's just me tho .^^