Adventures of dr. Pervert (Completed)
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Old - Jenkins wrote...
Same as my senpai statement above me .....^I feel dirty and offended LoL ...
I think you lack some comedy at your update :sad: ...
i assume that it will be better if you have some comedy added ..
well it's just me tho .^^
I'm updating the new chapter soon enough, it has a bit of comedy there...
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Ugh .. you add some comedy , but it seems ..
i am a bit [size=8]jealous[/h]
Ok ... Good job though ... this story make everyone who read it feels dirty
i am a bit [size=8]jealous[/h]
Ok ... Good job though ... this story make everyone who read it feels dirty
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Old - Jenkins wrote...
Ugh .. you add some comedy , but it seems ..i am a bit [size=8]jealous[/h]
Ok ... Good job though ... this story make everyone who read it feels dirty
It's more dirty if you compared it to my AVI
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And my AVI will make you fear about sin ... Haha
EDIT : Keep posting tho ... i will read it . as same as i read nanaya's
EDIT : Keep posting tho ... i will read it . as same as i read nanaya's
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High_time
OT : Seeing yours and Nanaya's story make me feel want to add my story here T_T ..
good addition tho ..
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OT : Seeing yours and Nanaya's story make me feel want to add my story here T_T ..
good addition tho ..
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high_time wrote...
Just wanted to add some varations, just about sex is plain boringNice thinking ... you know watching the earlier chapter .. makes me dirty like Rance ^^
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Old - Jenkins wrote...
high_time wrote...
Just wanted to add some varations, just about sex is plain boringNice thinking ... you know watching the earlier chapter .. makes me dirty like Rance ^^
Karen Agnesi's the perfect choice to be the tough girl, I think. How 'bout you?
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Old - Jenkins wrote...
Yes.. I think she can be a good supporting character ... or ELSE, be the second main Chara IMO ..Basically this is a battle between Good and Evil, with the perspective from the Evil side.
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...um... yeah, so sorry. I was not paying attention to your updates... I did not know you were doing a different story without pervertedness... for shame... hahaha, just kidding. Though its lack of perversity it is still a good story, hahaha. I like stories like these though, it is quite interesting.
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sepias wrote...
...um... yeah, so sorry. I was not paying attention to your updates... I did not know you were doing a different story without pervertedness... for shame... hahaha, just kidding. Though its lack of perversity it is still a good story, hahaha. I like stories like these though, it is quite interesting.I'm just adding some depth to the characters in non-H scenes. Maybe adding some romance and battle scenes to spice it up.
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mibuchiha wrote...
the speed is getting too scary now...I'm slowing down a lot on the latest chapter lol =)
P.S : I think Zeph is still faster than me about writing =)
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...oh, the 4th chapter is some good stuff. I like it, you are a damn good writer High-san! *thumbs up*
