CHESS (Chapter 5.5) [UPDATED]
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Zandorf wrote...
Owari no Sekai wrote...
I'm starting think that you use way to much dialogue. Is that such a bad thing? Some anime are strictly dialogue.
In fanfic, or writing in general, yes
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Owari no Sekai wrote...
Zandorf wrote...
Owari no Sekai wrote...
I'm starting think that you use way to much dialogue. Is that such a bad thing? Some anime are strictly dialogue.
In fanfic, or writing in general, yes
Not really that much I think. I add dialogues in the middle of some 'narrator's talks' so maybe that's why it looks way too much.
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Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote...
Not really that much I think. I add dialogues in the middle of some 'narrator's talks' so maybe that's why it looks way too much.
In my opinion, it's not a good idea if you let your story flows and be told by dialogue. The reader cannot read your mind, so they don't know about the scenery, the character's emotions, what they were thinking, or even the asmosphere you're trying to build up
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
You gotta write about how the character feels when something happens or they do something... heck, you should describe whatever you possibly can about the said character while narrating, feelings, expressions, reactions, etc. I declare Owari no Sekai to be speaking valid.
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Finally the next chapter! *parties*
It was good, minus the small little grammar things, but still. I think it was cool to learn about Blanc's past. Makes it clearer to understand his motives. ^^
It was good, minus the small little grammar things, but still. I think it was cool to learn about Blanc's past. Makes it clearer to understand his motives. ^^