Ok.. Let me mention some things up.. As I posted in "Learn How to RP" thread..
*Fak_ku* wrote...
"Now, lets get moving. We've finished our mission for today so we should move back to the safe zone and rest. Tomorrow we set out for a overnight expedition right? So we better get some rest." he said after calming his laughter. The group moved swiftly and eliminated all the zombies they encountered on the way. They arrived at the safe zone to find what seemed to be like hundreds of men.
This is one of the godmodding.. Teleport.. Well.. In RP, it seems that we can't do so much action in a post.. Any location change need time to be done.. You can't just say "we're going here, and here we are" in a post.. We have to give other players a chance to react.. For example I think it'll better if you write
"Now, lets get moving. We've finished our mission for today so we should move back to the safe zone and rest. Tomorrow we set out for a overnight expedition right? So we better get some rest." he said after calming his laughter.
end it at that.. With this, if me or other players have something on our way home (I actually got one myself), we would have a chance to write it down.. If not, I'll just continue the story like you did..
If your story will involve my character to act, it's best to stop it at that and give me the chance to react. This isn't a fanfic, no need to unnecessarily lengthen your story.. but if it's not a significant act, you can just do the mod, like this
"I hear that Shinichi Miyamoto is with you." he stares at Shin "Pff, doesnt look like anyone strong. Probably just some asshole that acts a lot." he provoked. Shin completely ignored the comment, which annoyed Lance. Pulling out his sword angrily, he began to attack Shin.
"I don't think thats a good idea...Lance..." Kazuya mutters. Without pausing, Lance swung his rapier swiftly at Shin. The whole tent had become silent. Everyone was watching them. Shin was still showing no emotion, and easily blocked the attack with his Thanatos. Pushing the rapier back with his gun, he disarmed Lance in less than 3 seconds and had his gun pointed at the mans head. Lance glared at the gun angrily.
Even though, I'm not really sure, I think the mod is fine.. Since you're stopping the fight at that.. If things continue a lil bit more, you must have to wait for my act.
Once again let me say this.. This isn't a fanfic.. We don't need to twist our brain to think hard to make an outstanding story.. All we need to do is
be our character and react based on the situation there.. When it involves other player's character, stop, and let them react to your writing..
Okay.. I'll write mine later.. I must be careful of modding tho..
EDIT : Btw did I need to mention that like location change, time skip also need some time to be done..
For example JELR wrote :
Exhausted after today's mission, everyone decided to call it a day and sleep to prepare our mind and body for tomorrow's nightmare... Then the next day..
No.. U can't write like that.. It's best if you write it like
Exhausted after today's mission, I decided to call it a day and get some sleep.. Preparing my mind and body for tomorrow's nightmare..
If you write it that way, If I or other people want to have an act before sleeping, or if we still got something to say/do with your character, we have a chance to write it down.. Or if we don't have anything to say anymore, we can continue the next day arc..
Q: But, what if I still got something on my mind for the next day scenario?
A: That is why we need an OOC (Out of Character) thread for every RP.. You can discuss, asking permission to mod, and interact with other players outside the RP there.. It serves like a chat thread.. So If you got something for the next day, you can just say it in the OoC thread, and we'll let you to take the lead for tomorrow's scenario.. Simple enough..