Ramsus wrote...
Rise told me to come look at your game and I noticed a few problems.
Firstly....why is Boston not included? Really.
The name Boyd sounds really familiar.
Ok now to the game mechanics problems.
Killing off
players is not going to work unless you have a much larger RP community here than I think you do. Character death is usually enough "punishment" as is needed. (As the goal of an RP is not to punish failure and there is no need for time wasting mechanics like in video games.) What you'll end up with is either being too afraid to kill off players even when they should be dying or you'll just be left without the people most likely to care about your game. (As typically the people who care most about a game are those playing in it, not those who aren't.)
Giving your NPCs plot armor to the point of telling your players they can't kill them is ridiculous. That's essentially telling people they can't play the characters they want. Now, you're free to have them fail if they try anyway but, you might want to strongly consider letting some or all the NPCs be killable. If you have immortal NPCs but, not immortal players it's somewhat like you're just writing a story that the players can't control. If people want to play in a story they have no control over....well that's what video games are for.
Sorry for the delay to respond I've been busy making adjustments to the concept in general, however your input is noted and I'll definitely implement quite a few changes which you pointed out. The NPC immortality only allies to the ones that are absolutely necessary, only 5 out of the dozens I already have drafted up, but if they die players will be cut off from supplies and a chain of command. As for player death, I'm only concerned with continuity, however if you have a solution (like an NPC doctor capable of essentially resurrecting characters) I'm all for it and I'd like to let players finish the game with the characters they started with. The name Boyd shouldn't be familiar unless you work at a publisher that rejected one of my books (as that's my pen name). Any suggestions or help would be greatly appreciated, and it would be preferable if you could help me iron out the issues by Sunday, when I intend (however probably won't due to coordinating logistics) to start up the RP. Thanks for your input and thanks in advance for your help (assuming you do help me)
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