Real Haiku

The Chronicler · 2010-11-23T05:23:30-01:00

I am well aware that there is already a haiku thread, but I must simply create my own to instill the real meaning of haiku into the very reasonable people of Fakku!.net, and I hope that some of you may take it to heart and share with me some of your haiku that follow the meaning. If you need and example, take one from my signature. Here, friends, is the true definition of haiku. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons. A poem written in this form

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menolly-hime

13 years ago

i am a machine
i do not feel your heartbeat
empty as they drum

Kaien

13 years ago

Right here is a cat.
Beware of the claws and fangs.
But cute it can be.

Gism88

13 years ago

Your face will be smashed
Your body Will receive Hell Fire
Die you worthless worm.

Kuro vi Lolitannia

13 years ago

I saw the lolis
I go kidnap all of them
Then Chris Hansen Come

imboredd

13 years ago

damn that chris hansen
he stole all my lolicon
sadness and sorrow

Kaien

13 years ago

[align=center]Oh,Hello there sir.
Why don't you take a seat here?
Say Goodbye loli.

Koko7

13 years ago

I dont get
This haiku thing at all
I really dont

Rusty Hammer

13 years ago

Boob tube always on.
Addicted to the TV.
My video drug.

GroverCleaveland

13 years ago

One of my favorites from xkcd goes something like this:

Haiku's are pretty
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator

Kaien

13 years ago

A field, two rocks lay
They lean together but one
rolls away, other cracks

Zeph=3

13 years ago

Instead of the car
Catching a ride with the wind
Gentle, flying breeze

Kaien

13 years ago

Oh, my heart races
it calms down and it beats slowly.
My heart beats for you.

How long can this last?
Its going to break down and
fall to pieces here...

Well look at this now!
Words don't match up to this sight.
But I believed you...

I don't want this shit
Take it out and forget me
You have what you have...

The Chronicler

13 years ago

Kaien wrote...

A field, two rocks lay
They lean together but one
rolls away, other cracks

Wow, well done. Of all the haiku's on this thread, yours was the only one i read which painted a picture in my mind.

animehot2

13 years ago

Fall into darkness
A slave to sadness and fear
The endless abyss

Meowmeow239

13 years ago

Kaien wrote...

Oh, my heart races
it calms down and it beats slowly.
My heart beats for you.

How long can this last?
Its going to break down and
fall to pieces here...

Well look at this now!
Words don't match up to this sight.
But I believed you...

I don't want this shit
Take it out and forget me
You have what you have...

Oh wow, you're good :3

Toxic Influence

13 years ago

The Chronicler wrote...

Kaien wrote...

A field, two rocks lay
They lean together but one
rolls away, other cracks

Wow, well done. Of all the haiku's on this thread, yours was the only one i read which painted a picture in my mind.

This thread was long dead
But you came ambling along
And then revived it

In other news:

The trees sway calmly
A gentle breeze, fluttering
Is this what peace means?

A stream burbling
over stones that wear with time
its patience is strength

animehot2

13 years ago

Freedom from your cage
Now fly with beautiful wings
Careless butterfly

Rip, tear, and destroy
Burn to ash all my sorrows
Water of bliss flows

It is not a sin
or is it? That just depends
if you like murder?

Toxic Influence

13 years ago

Life is whimsical,
today it's here, tomorrow not
Are we so fragile?

Jericho Antares FAKKU Writer

13 years ago

Today has arrived
Under the cover of dark
No greeting but hope

doswillrule

13 years ago

Tried to write something
With a semblance of meaning
Failed miserably

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