The Dreamwatchers

As long as it's released, then it's no problem^^

i agree =]

Not bad at all in fact i was taken by surprised at 1st. The idea is good and it is quite fresh to me but somehow not very alien either :? :?

I can't really give much bad comments on this one except that the characters weren't introduced properly in the beginning. Just pointing out but i think that the story isn't bad at all. By the way i agreee with ultenth, the 1st person point of view is very fresh but you need an incredible amount of skill to succesfully pull up a good fight scene with 1st person point of view in fact in 3rd person/narrative is already difficult enough (trust me i personally experience that.....) might i suggest that you switch between the point of view in between the fights? or that you put the fights in 3rd person/narrative that way the fight scenes can develop much smoother. Or you can put different point of views for one single scene although it means more work but it helps a lot

i rate it 8.5/10 keep it up man!

ReACT... where are you!!! Please continue on with the story!!!!

Heh heh, sorry ever since school started trying to balance school and work and friends have been crazy for me. I've been focusing on school extra hard because i'm trying to switch faculties at the moment. I actually finished chap 4 on paper and just haven't had time to type and edit out the kinks... I'll get on it whenever i have some free time, oh crap I'm later for work -__-...

well its good to know that ur alive lol..still waiting to see it =]

ooh... oh well. As long as you finished the story, it's fine. Take your time^^

Im'ma still waiting for the next chapter of this Awesome story, if anyone cares.