There’s something about this setup that really gets me going. The cheating subject is both integral and incidental. We don’t see the husband, just “the other man” and his dynamic with our FMC. But the fervor with which they both act, their intensity and their feelings it’s enthralling. His outburst upon seeing the wedding ring again, something we focused on in the first page is also really good.
The whole thing slaps. Very tight, focused and sexy. I want more.
Hodaka takes a delightfully light-hearted approach to adultery.
She's clearly having a lot of fun, free of any sense of guilt, and
that adds a lot of spice to the story.
12 pages of hentai greatness!!! Page 6, that erotic look + that ponytail!
We definitely need more context for these two. It looks like obvious cheating but I'm feeling like it's a fake out due to them mentioning them were supposed to go on a date together all while still seeming pretty casual about taking a "cheating vacation trip" together.
My guess is Hodaka-san's husband has passed away and shes now dating Tokita-kun while still wearing her dead husband's wedding ring. Which is why he got jealous.
That's my educated guess, which is why we need that 30 page full color sequel for answers!!!
The whole thing slaps. Very tight, focused and sexy. I want more.
Last Modified Mon Jul 24, 2023, 6:29 am
She's clearly having a lot of fun, free of any sense of guilt, and
that adds a lot of spice to the story.
Last Modified Mon Jul 24, 2023, 11:39 am