I must say, that was quite a great first page. Polinky does some great work.
That ending though. That was quite an interesting revelation...I feel if it was worked in a little earlier it could have led somewhere, but I guess it works well enough as an ending.
While it's not really a story I would place on my favorites due to its themes, I'm highly impressed how well it presents the feelings, especially hers, and how real, how human it makes her seem. Definitely a brilliant work of art, above what most manga, hentai or not, have to offer.
I feel the same way. This is as passionate and emotional of artwork that I've seen. I would have wanted the theme to be different, but those kisses alone showed some serious passion.
That ending though. That was quite an interesting revelation...I feel if it was worked in a little earlier it could have led somewhere, but I guess it works well enough as an ending.