The 5th page is what I like most cuz of the cold af stare he gives her that made me smile laugh and say shit he hates her. Then the next page and it's kaput.
Well, there's no response to the question on page #11, and it goes from a blowjob scene directly into a from-behind scene. Very fast, no transition.
On page #14 she flips around very quickly between panels; normally a transitional dialogue panel like "let's change positions" or action panel showing one character flipping the other over.
Edit: Not that it's bad thing at all, it's just an interesting pacing thing I noticed.
I love this artist's work, so I'm definitely hoping to see more sometime.
Hmm, so him acting like that was just because he considered her an unreachable flower?
With a bit of effort, nothing is unreachable, especially as a Hentai Protagonist.
If only they both actually showed their interest in each other early instead of playing it cool/hiding it, they probably would have gotten together much sooner.