BRILLIANT!!! Cheating and playing hooky is a crazy steamy combination but the characterization here is actually next level. Not only do we have expert flirting, coaching, and perfect escalation! We also have two characters who aren’t intellectually mismatched. MC is just lacking in confidence, both can make really cute quips at one another and play off each other nicely. (Complimentary personalities and all that.)
What really sets me off is the phone scene. Yeah, it’s a classic, sure. Don’t make noise while you’re getting fucked but the writing was so solid we slipped right into it without skipping a beat! That and it works because she’s confident she couldn’t get tripped up while getting fingered but our MC learned too quick for her to completely get away with it!
Oh my god! The gradual build up. She put his hands on her face first then moved to OTHER skin? Like it’s just so good! This is fucking god-tier! I can’t say enough about it! Encore! Or at least, more like this please?!
-got the vanilla tag added.
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