Writing Review Requests Mk.2

Alright, re-creating the thread and all that. I believe the title is self-explanatory and that by now most writers on the forum know my reputation so they know what they'll be asking for in a review.

For any new writers, be prepared for a rough review if you ask.

Anyway, what makes this thread Mk.2 is that I want this to serve as a universal review request thread, meaning that if someone isn't receiving anything about a piece, they can ask for a review here and the community at large can pick and choose what they want to review. I will still review all requests, but I think this opens the system up more.

A stipulation I want to impress, though, is for someone asking for a review to provide one at some point too. Even if the writer in question is bad at reviewing, not ever reviewing anything won't get them any better.

So here goes round 2.

hmm cool, well going to repost mine so i'm requesting for ur harsh but true writing review Sir Jericho.

Sounds good, just link it when it's up.

Also I guess I'm a knight. Sweet.

Really sweet, now it's time for me to get better at reviewing. In case you're wondering, I'm not the type to say something harsh lol

Now where's Xenon

here it is, hope the link works :U
it would be nice if i got lots of ppl to review it :D
Hentai Rangers!

Apologies for bumping another thread off the front page, but for anyone new to the board that desires a review, don't hesitate to ask.

For everyone, this is a chance for you to get your literary pieces reviewed by our very own winner of the Winter Writing Contest.

Anyone up for reviewing this one?

https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=62137#2856209

Don't mind the grammar though, I'm being terribly lazy, and MS word ruined the it. And got RPs to work on, so yeah.

my amateur-ish crtique....

(actually, it reminded me of Hayate, the combat butler.), I would suggest, since the mistress is finding the ideal butler, that you use a first person point of view.
So that we could understand more and feel more the emotion and the need of the main character.
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Though, I enjoyed reading it.

First person POV hates me though. More like, *I* hate it.

And thank you.

Just got directed here :D
anyone wanna lend me their thoughts on this? I tend to just write it down and dont bother to do anything with it afterwards :P so be as harsh as you feel like. i wont mind :P

https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?p=2872951#2872951

All current requests have been fulfilled (to my knowledge).

Haven't done anything else since my entry in the contest. Guess I also want some more experience before starting to work on new stuff :D. So I would appreciated it if someone take minor time to post a review in my entry. Link in signature. Thanks in advance.

Would be nice, if someone would turn this into a sticky.

Jericho, if you may, could you provide a critique of a poem of mine?

I've made the request just now. Here's to hoping that the staff members decides to sticky this.

I already affiliated this thread to the Fakku Writers' Lounge

In case you want some feedbacks in a warm and friendly manner, that involves lot of chats and discussion you can go there instead. You can also talk about general writing issues here, we'll be waiting for your participation!

But you might want to resort to this Writing Review Requests thread if you prefer it to be direct, to the point, and informative, your pick, and we will serve you to your needs =)

Sure, but I can only really say anything about structure. Usually I prefer to remark on content but for poems it's more difficult to do so. I only ask that the poem I'm asked to read has been through a few revisions. I don't want to read raw emotional venting.

Again, as far as I know, all requests linked have been fulfilled.



Thanks for the review offer. I may take you up on such a deal and ask for your thoughts on The March of the Suicide King. It's the most recent longer work I've pushed out that I haven't had to worry about that "internet counts as publishing" shit with (for contests and such). As such it should give you a good idea of my current style--you know, as opposed to some garbage from two years ago.

First 2/3 chapters should suffice.