Fakku You! Rewrite in progress

dude, i want a role in this story too, and it have to be a good one :wink:

Looking and sounding great! Gambatte!

I'm glad Everyone is liking my story that really means a lot to me! I'm so happy I wanna give all my Fakku brothers and sisters a big hug! *^__^*


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but will that really be the end?

i can relate completely york, ttgl is really dramatic and animate with the characters emotions, i got really attached to them too...



i cried over the bastards death. one of my favorite anime characters T_T

Haha York you did an awesome job with this story. It's very fun to read :D You should definitely incorporate more of the FAKKU users into it if you have the chance.

Keep up the good work!

Yeah, great story i would say...

If Jacob give props it must be good! Thanks a bunch Jacob! *^__^*

Fakku You!

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A few days of flying has occurred since the rescue of Jacob. The three seem to get along perfectly. They're currently in the Country of Temaria which is mostly a vast,dry and barren because of rising climates. They're small ship is running low on gas and they don't know if they can make it to a town to refuel. As luck would have it on the horizon a town can be seen. Sadly their ship conks out and crashes. No one is harmed and the Brain core is undamaged, but the ship is totaled. A long walk ensues to the settlement they had seen. They arrive in the town at nightfall. This town seems to have a spectacular night life. They small group looks for an Inn to stay in. They all seem to be full accept one.

Temaria-- A.K.A[America] Renamed after it was taken over by Canada after they produced the first fully functional Mech army in 2075.

When they walk in to inn they found out they've mad a mistake. Instead of walking in to an Inn they've walked into a brothel. They Owner greets the new guests. The Owner is a Older, but still young women with long black/red hair. Jacob hands her a card and says "well take three separate rooms." The Owner complies and many girls arrive to greet them. The girls drag them off into different rooms. Jacob and Noata seem to be calm with this but York yells out like a whinny baby "I'm Too young for this!" to his dismay this only brings more girls toward him. The Owner smiles as they walk off. She says to herself "so they finally showed up."



A many miles from the Town a squad of "Church" soldiers man them selves for battle after the find of the crashed ship. In there ranks are standard Crusader mechs and Scarab droids. The Commanding officer readies his mech. He calls out to his men " Be ready men today we crush two birds with one stone. Death two Rebellion and Sin!" The squad heads toward the town. On the side of the commanders mech the word "Chuu!!" can be seen.

After some "treatment" at the brothel the three men are left alone. Jacob and Noata call out to York "SO HOW WAS IT!"

York replies to his friends "It was....AMAZING!" He then sinks into his bathtub. Suddenly each of them are summoned to the Owners office. When they arrive she asks them to sit.

She puts in a disk and a monitor turns on. She shows them the video footage of the rescue of Jacob. After the film she addresses them " This footage was shown live all over the world. Everyone knows who you are. I'd like to help you... Seeing as I'm a member of Fakku. Just call me Rukia."

When they hear this they're shock and also overjoyed, but mostly shocked. Jacob says "How do you plan to help us?"

Rukia answers " How do I, oh no it's not just me who wants to help, Everywhere people want to help you. All over the world people want to join up with you. You're all an inspiration."

After her answer explosions ring out out side. Cannon, and laser shots can be heard with people screaming.

The commanding officer of the squad orders his troops " Leave none alive finally we will purge earth of this sinful town!" The mechas and droids fire and begin destroying buildings and shooting civilians.

Rukia tells The three of them to follow her. She then yell over the intercom to the girls. "All of you need to get to the basement now! Prep the Valkyrie for battle!" Rushing down flights of stairs the The four of them reach the basement. They men find themselves at a gunship. Rukia calls out to the girls. " How long till it's ready."

One girl answers back "2 minutes malady! We just need to finish arming the weapon systems."

Jacob says to Rukia "Quite an amazing group of girls. Who would of thought a bunch of brothel girls we're actually trained soldiers.

Rukia replies with a quick " They sure are."

When they board the Valkyrie York, Noata, and Jacob notice three 4 mechs loaded in the ship. Rukia ask Noata to pilot if he can Pilot a ship.

He answers Rukia "I've been waiting for you to say that." Noata takes the pilot. " I've always wanted to pilot a gunship!"

Rukia calls out to her crew "All hands to battle stations, this is the real deal."

The ship fires up It's engines and a large hatch at the of tunnel opens up.

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Nice. You fitted Rukia nicely :D

Keep up the workz, York. You're story is Good Stuff :twisted:

*wonders if there's gonna be a gun with "- rep" written on the side that shoots Chuu*

awwwww... i'm not in the story yet, and you're about to leave us :(

but i'm still hoping for the continuation though :roll:

I finally put up titles for the 3 current chapters. (Subject to change)

Chapter 1-- Awakened Dream

Chapter 2-- H-DRIVE FIRE UP!

Chapter 3-- New Heroes

i'm pretty disappointed as well as I was the first to shotgun being awesome in your story...

keep banging them out, they show promise.

I've only announced new people. If you haven't watched TTGL watch it now. most of the people that own don't come in until a few eps in. Really just wait... *HINT HINT HINT*

For some reason I'm just waiting for a "Zero" or "Orange-kun"(code geass) or a "Snake"(mgs) to show up, lol.

Well your SoL, I'm one of those few people you might have heard of that didn't like Code Gease, and no Snake.

well by Zero I think he just means a tactician. You kinda have to have one of those.

yeah, zero=tactician

orange-kun=a "mid boss" of sorts

snake=war hero/veteran

Chapter 4 comes out tonight so if your a fan or just starting to read get ready.

enclosed in the spoiler is a hint to the new special move.

dude what's in that spoiler is awesome.