Fakku You! Rewrite in progress

York · 2008-06-10T15:26:25+00:00

Well I've had some manga ideas recently, and I feel like I wanna say tell you guys about them. Yes it's based off Fakku so please Jacob don't kill me if it seems stupid. Here it is my ideas beginning run-down. Title-- Fakku You! Setting-- Future earth Genre--- Echii, Shonen, Mecha ______________________________________________________________ Title-- Awakened dream Many years in earth future a great religious awakening has happened. All over the world people are being converted to believing in a strict,rigid, religion. Most if not the whole world has been converted. The church has become the government and practically rulers of the world. They rule with an iron fist that controls the world. The church as clean as it seems is actually corrupt. No one dares stand against its tremendous power...accept one man. There's still one place the church can't control and thats the internet. A site appears one day that stands out amongst all the rest. It's name Fakku! It reveals to the world an ancient art form that long ago abolished by the church. Hentai has been released back into the world,but sadly it's short lived. The church hunts/tracks down the maker of the sight. When he is revealed/captured he is sentenced to death in a public execution that will broadcast all over the world. The man refers to himself as "Jacob". One of the few members of the site, is a 17 year old boy who's alias is "York". He is a gifted young mechanic an engineer. He is a big fan and supporter of the site. He feels he can't let the execution happen and is compelled to save "Jacob". Only part is he only has a few weeks to prepare before the execution and he has no help. Later on another member of the sight who goes by"Noatakun" says he wants to save "Jacob" as well. With only the two of them they begin what seems to be a suicide mission to save "Jacob. York begins developing a throw together army of ragtag droids with very little weapons. He then decides to unleash his "dream". His "dream" is a mecha that he's secretly been developing over a few years. They both decide it's there only real hope at saving "Jacob". York begins to feverishly work on it like never before. York the mechanic and wanna-be pilot, and Noatakun the Hacker extraordinaire are going to attempt to take on the largest organization known to man. _______________________________________________________________ Yeah instead of making up names I decided to go with our internet aliases. I don't have a name for "the church" so any suggestions would be nice. I haven't talked Noata about this I just felt like he should be there. If you guys like it I plan to do more, like add more people from our site to the Manga. I'm not a writer, I'm only an artist with a dream. *^__^*

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How do you like it?

Ramsus

16 years ago

*sigh* I hope some of get introduced in the next chapter. Anyway good job.

Waar FAKKU Moderator

16 years ago

i do love to swear...

Chuu !

16 years ago

i think this story would be cool. but i'm wrong. the villain was too weak and the story it's just an imitation to TTGL.

i dont say it's bad at all. but it would be the best if you dont imitate the story of TTGL. it's just suck.

oh yeah. if i would be the tough opponent,the story might not be as suck as this

Nate River

16 years ago

lolz, it's an interesting story, loved it

is it just me, or is York taking all the major actions and heroic scenes and Chuu! seem a bit weak to me, perhaps major characters will appear later on?

gizmo

16 years ago

Nate River wrote...

perhaps major characters will appear later on?

it better be me :twisted:

Tsujoi Social Media Manager

16 years ago

gizmo wrote...

Nate River wrote...

perhaps major characters will appear later on?

it better be me :twisted:

York

16 years ago

Well the fact that you all thought Chuu was weak is expected, but he's not really supposed to be weak. I didn't want to play him off as weak.

Spoiler:

\\HOW THE FUCK DID CHUU GET THAT MANY FUCK'N POSTSS!!

aznstoner

16 years ago

He divided by zero....Or Jacob is probably making a joke on how Chuu posts so fucking much.

Waar FAKKU Moderator

16 years ago

he was banned and it looks like Raze fucked something up, or the Jacob idea...

lol: [100.00% of total / 16777212.00 posts per day]

Tsujoi Social Media Manager

16 years ago

Waar wrote...

he was banned and it looks like Raze fucked something up, or the Jacob idea...

lol: [100.00% of total / 16777212.00 posts per day]

His other accounts post count is like that too.

Aion Crux Banned

16 years ago

nice story york! :D

i wonder if you kind enough to include me in your story..

Ramsus

16 years ago

E.X.A.M wrote...

nice story york! :D

i wonder if you kind enough to include me in your story..

Sorry, limit to 1 character per person.

Tsujoi Social Media Manager

16 years ago

exam, fastest member to reach elite status?

Uzumaki101

16 years ago

tsujoi wrote...

exam, fastest member to reach elite status?

Lol. A new Record. Fastest member to reach elite status in a few days^^

Record: 3 days

Noutakun

16 years ago

tsujoi wrote...

exam, fastest member to reach elite status?

I might have done that. I was a spammer way back when, and the Elite prerequisite was only 100 posts.

Josh, why in the holy hell is a "super hacker" piloting the crapship? >o> I'm going to insert myself somewhere epic in your story, just you watch. Your Norse references won't go soundly.

Waar FAKKU Moderator

16 years ago

Ramsus wrote...

E.X.A.M wrote...

nice story york! :D

i wonder if you kind enough to include me in your story..

Sorry, limit to 1 character per person.

beautiful reply... +rep when i can.

York

16 years ago

I'm starting to draw concept stuff for things in the story already. Right now I'm trying to find pictures to help with a creative jump start. So if anyone wants to post pictures for Ideas it would be most help full.

First thing I actually want to do is draw up the Valkyrie. So I need Gunship designs.

Waar FAKKU Moderator

16 years ago

should be a few so ill place it in a spoiler window.

Spoiler:

all from deviant art, go take a look for yourself.
Awesome art at Deviantart.

Ramsus

16 years ago

damn, I was hoping there would be more of this before I left.

Aion Crux Banned

16 years ago

i'll give some of my concept

Spoiler:

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NOTE : i renamed the unit from it's original concept. feel free to change or do anything to it

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