Fakku You! Rewrite in progress

Lol. The girl had too much protein. :lol:

note to self, do not purse-snatch from a Joshi.

i wonder if this story includes some sort of Giga drill or what..

joking :D

Lulz.

Josh, how do you manage to spell Naota wrong on every possible occasion? And if you're doing the drawing, there's no way in hell I'm letting you do the writing. @_@ I'll do the stuff that requires literacy, linguistics, oration, etc.

hrmm, how can we possible finish the story without Chuu or do you intend to just change the actor playing chuuLOL?

just replace him with reaper. Reaper sounds more menace-y anyways.

i believe he quit, for good; but if we talk about him his internet friends might hack us so we should be wary... I don't want to haxxzored.

then we use that summer person....the one with like -25 rep or something.

he simply isnt bad enough... he was just a speed bump that messed with the most loved member of fakku... I think we should continue on with Chuu myself, in honor of his stupidity.

Why did you lie to me?

I lol'ed.

Cool idea...
I'm late so I'll just sit tight and be good spectator...

@Waar & Ramsus-- I've had to delay do to writers block, since first I didn't quiet know what to do. Then when I did find out what to do and Chuu gets banned. Then I have to change what happens a little. So yeah It will come out soon. I didn't mean to lie.

Josh, just tell them you don't know how to write. >o> Come to my house today. We'll draw crap and write shit. And when we're done practicing with feces, we'll move on to your story.

bump.

Fakku You!

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The Valkyrie and it's crew take to the skies above the besieged town. Burning corpses and destroyed buildings is all that remains. Some villagers are left to fight the "Church" mechs, but their small-arms fire was no match for the Mech armor. The "Church" soldiers stand in victory over the defenseless town.

Inside the Valkyrie rukia talks to Jacob and York.


Rukia-- We can't fight these guys there's too many of them.

York--- You said you were going to help us. So help us destroy them! With this ship and those four Mechs I'm sure we can win.

Jacob-- As much as I hate to say it Ms. Rukia he's right. Whats the point of running away if we're just going to keep being hunted. We have to fight it's the only way to get the "church" off our tails.

Rukia-- There's a problem with your strategy. Those mechs over there have no armor and no weapons. How do expect to win against a trained squadron of soldiers?

York--- Easy we use this.

York pulls out a cylindrical object that glows a teal blue.

Rukia-- What in the Goddess's name is that.

Jacob-- It's his secret weapon...the Brain core.

Rukia stars blankly at them with no clue as to what they're talking about. She the gains a stiff, commanding posture and speaks out to her crew.

Rukia-- Okay women, prepare for battle. All hands to battle stations! Set all weapons to attack positions.

Naota turns the Valkyrie towards the town, and the "Church" squadron.

Rukia, Jacob and York all meet next to the mechs to discuss an impromptu battle plan.

Rukia-- York since your the only one with real piloting experience you'll be leading the attack on the enemy squadron.

Jacob-- I have no objections to that.

York-- Me neither, that just give me first shot at anyone of those bastards.

Rukia-- Well if that's decided I guess we can just...

Rukia is interrupted by a girl with long red hair.

*girl*-- Ms. Rukia I would like to take the other mech out with you and the others.

York remembers this girl from earlier at the brothel. She was of the girls in his room.

Rukia-- Sorry, but you'd only get in the way.

York--- Hold on there Ms. Rukia, I say we let her come. If she wants to fight we should let her fight.

Rukia --- I can't believe I'm going to say this but yes you can come. You'd better stay out of the way though Roco.

York gives the girl a smile. She blushes. York thinks to himself *so her name is Roco*

When York gets in his mech he takes out the CPU Core and switches it with the Brain Core.
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At the village the "Church" troops finish off the rest of the villagers. They cheer over the easy victory.

Commander Chuu-- Good job soldiers we've destroyed the sin of this village. *sigh* If only we captured those damned heretics.

Soldier 1-- Commander look in the sky! Its a gunship!

Chuu seems astonished but, keeps his cool in the surprise attack.

Com. Chuu-- Men open fire on the gunship!

His men acknowledge his orders and begin to fire at the Valkyrie. The Valkyrie Avoids damage and fires back taking out one Scarab. The Valkyrie pass over the "Church" soldiers low and fast. After passing, the rear hatch opens and the four mechs leap out. York's Mech leads the Charge as planed. He runs his mech at them at full speed. Two Mechs charge at York. First he collides with the first one. He then gets up and fights the other one. After a few seconds of Melee fighting York wins and takes the other mech's weapon. While the two mech try to get up York shoots them many times with gun. Both of the mechs explode.

The other "Church" mechs and scarabs fire at York grazing him a few times.

York--- I could use some help over here!

Jacob-- Just waiting for you to ask!

The other three run past him into the battle ahead. They charge under heavy fire. The "Church mechs charge in as well and are also met by heavy fire from the Valkyrie. With the "Church" mechs having to divide their fire they become overwhelmed. More and more "Church" mechs and Scarabs fall and are eventually left with three. After some of the dust clears Rukia, Jacob, and York remain standing around fallen and flaming mechs.

York--- Looks like we've won.

Rukia-- It seems that way, but where is Roco?

Com. Chuu--- I'm glad you asked. She's right over here.

Rukia, Jacob, and York turn towards the remaining three mechs to to see the lead mech standing over Roco's fallen mech. He holds a gun to the cock pit. They look on Helpless at the sight.

York-- Let her go...NOW!

Com. Chuu--- Sorry, but that isn't going to happen. Our leader has ordered us to take you back to the capital to be executed. Your in no place to negotiate so you should surrender. If any of you fire I'll kill her.

Roco-- Don't! There's no point in surrendering if we're all going to die later.

Com. Chuu-- QUIET YOU!

He moves his gun to her mech's Knee and shoots it off.

Com. Chuu-- One more word out of you and I promise I won't miss. Your Situation is hopeless. We have reinforcements on the way. You can't stop the inevitable.

Rukia-- Hold on Roco...we'll think of something.

Jacob-- That's right we'll think of something.

Naota comes on the com-link

Naota--- What the Hell is going on down there. Is everyone all right.

Com. Chuu-- Sorry for interrupting but I'm gonna have to ask you to shut your mouth and stay put.

Naota--- What did you say!?

Jacob-- He's right. Unless you want Roco to die I suggest we all keep our cool.

After that their was a silence.

York--- You there I want to know your name.


Com. Chuu--- My name? My name is Chase Uton Commander of this Outfit, But you can call me Chuu for short.

York-- Well then Chuu I just wanted to get that out of the way. I've never thought it polite to Own somebody without knowing their name first.

Com. Chuu-- What are you talking about!?

York--- ROCO EJECT NOW!

Chuu--- WHAT!?


Roco seems to understand. She ejects from the mech. The pod shoot up sending Chuu's mech off balance.

York--- CHARGE!

Rukia & Jacob--- AAAAAAAARRRRRHH!!!

With all three mech running into battle Rukia and Jacob are met with the other two "Church" mechs. York runs straight at Chuu's mech.

York--- H-Drive FIRE UP!

York's mech surges with power. When Chuu's mech back to normal balance he finds himself helpless to the attack. York first crushes the the head of Chuu's mech with a punch. Then he throws Chuu's mech into the air. York immediately jumps after him with a trail of energy following him. He begins to Wail on Chuu's mech with many rapid punches sending him farther upwards. Then When they begin to fall York's mech grabs Chuu's and goes behind it. They go down in a straight fall.

York-- FINISHING MOVE! FAKKU DIVING SUPLEX!

Com. Chuu-- OH MY GOOOOOOOOD!! AAAAAAAAAAAAARRHHH!!!

They land with a crash and a huge explosion. York's mech jumps immediately out of the explosion. Sliding when he lands. When he lands he extends his hand to catch Roco's parachuted pod. Her pod opens she comes out. York opens his cock-pit. Roco looks at him blankly.

Roco-- WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!

York laughs

York-- I seem to get that where ever I go.

They both get into York's cock-pit. York walks his mech back to Rukia and Jacob who stand over the defeated mech's.

Rukia-- What in the Goddess's name was that.

Jacob-- That Ms. Rukia is the power of one man's fighting spirit.

Everyone on the Valkyrie Cheers for the Victory. Naota comes back on the Com-link.

Naota-- Lets get back on the ship and get out of here.

They all get back on the Valkyrie and Fly off into the night away from the burning town.

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im probably just going to kill you irl if i don't get a cool fucking part.

Don't worry about it Waar. *HINT MOTHER FUCK'N HINT*

I can't help but wonder that maybe you got the name Roco from Yoko.^^