I didn't read the story, in all honesty, because - knowing Fuwaruu - there's probably no seriousness in the writing itself, literally.
And I can make such a guess from the replies he got on his thread.
I mean, sure, whatever writing you wanna post on the Writing forum can be posted there. It's just that, you just can't expect me to read stuff like that.
I did it. Let me know if you think I should change anything or create more or different rules. I kind of like where I see this going, though. Participate at your leisure: https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?p=3708508