FAKKU Writers' Lounge
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Brovo, xnine! I just knew I was going to enjoy your contribution.
Rise...Do it! You know you want to.
Rise...Do it! You know you want to.
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xninebreaker
FAKKU Writer
I was going to turn the story into something out of this world, but the romantic inside of me decide to take over... for this part at least!
Fire away Rise! Writing 3-4 paragraphs actually took surprisingly little time~
Fire away Rise! Writing 3-4 paragraphs actually took surprisingly little time~
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
xninebreaker wrote...
I was going to turn the story into something out of this world, but the romantic inside of me decide to take over... for this part at least!It didn't flow right with the way things were left over by High.
I'm contemplating about not firing something away, honestly. I ought to study more.
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xninebreaker
FAKKU Writer
Hey hey! It's a work in progress. One must make mistakes to learn from them!
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Rise, you're making the assumption that not participating will lead to more studying and not just procrasturbating. Bullshit, I say.
In other news, I've been investigating sources of writing to gain inspiration for my own personal projects and so decided to check out what the hell was up with that 50 Shades of Gray book. I Googled the book's smut chapter, since I heard it had one, and read it. I have to admit, I was reading it and thinking it was damn amateur child's play. I would have said I could do better, but that's pompous.
In other news, I've been investigating sources of writing to gain inspiration for my own personal projects and so decided to check out what the hell was up with that 50 Shades of Gray book. I Googled the book's smut chapter, since I heard it had one, and read it. I have to admit, I was reading it and thinking it was damn amateur child's play. I would have said I could do better, but that's pompous.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Xenon wrote...
Rise, you're making the assumption that not participating will lead to more studying and not just procrasturbating. Bullshit, I say.what
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Cinia Pacifica wrote...
Xenon wrote...
Rise, you're making the assumption that not participating will lead to more studying and not just procrasturbating. Bullshit, I say.what
it's a love confession, he wants to do you sixty-nine
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
high_time wrote...
it's a love confession, he wants to do you sixty-nineI'm just saying he wants to study but we all know will just end up masturbating to our story. Seriously, it's not as if the female role isn't his ideal sex interest.
Also, that video summarizes pretty much everything I discovered, just thankful I didn't buy it.
...Haha, arrested. You come quietly.
Thanks for the laugh/link, high.
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Xenon wrote...
I'm just saying he wants to study but we all know will just end up masturbating to our story. Seriously, it's not as if the female role isn't his ideal sex interest.
Also, that video summarizes pretty much everything I discovered, just thankful I didn't buy it.
...Haha, arrested. You come quietly.
Thanks for the laugh/link, high.
ah yeah I know it, I'm just making silly jokes in a whim lol =D
well here's a fun fact on how I discovered the video : I just typed 'what the fuck' when I was bored and I suddenly came to this one. Hahaha you're welcome, glad you enjoy it =)
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
Shame, I thought of turning that story into one of my classic monologues complaining about a supposedly boring boy leading a supposedly boring life ending up having a boring harem made up of boring women, if that were to be considered boring.
If Xenon, xnine and High object to me doing that then I will see how the story develops.
If Xenon, xnine and High object to me doing that then I will see how the story develops.
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mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Considering that Xenon said it should be a free form writing, why not go for it? No matter how terrible it'll be, just shrug and say, 'it's free writing. I can do whatever.'
On the other hand, this. http://xkcd.com/1210/ So much this.
On the other hand, this. http://xkcd.com/1210/ So much this.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
^ Understood.
I will wait till I get better. I am suffering from fever like symptoms and my brain is in no condition to engage in creative processes.
I will wait till I get better. I am suffering from fever like symptoms and my brain is in no condition to engage in creative processes.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
I am done with my contribution to Xenon's thread!
And as Shiro walked on, and as Yui walked on, and would one suggest that if the hallway were not void of people, many others would have walked on, there was one person who did not walk on.
His face betrayed little emotion and it seems as if he is staring into blank space. He is clothed in the most dullest of colours, easily camoflauging into the environs of a typical outdated, dilapidated, technologically backward, highly maintenanced (in fact the cost of maintenance is so high, they just don't bother!) interior of a normal Japanese school.
It is thus so easy for the layman to dismiss the hallway to be empty, even though it is quite clear that Shiro and Yui are at the hallway and even though it is not so clear that the unnamed person is at the hallway as well.
Indeed, the person is so unobtrusive that his name is rather elusive but if one were to approach him, he would say that he is an exchange student. Since the characters of this story are supposedly in Japan and most people who claim to love Japan don't really understand Japanese, it is most apt to call him Koukansei and fool readers into thinking that it is an actual Japanese name.
It so happened that countless words were spent describing Koukansei that the very few words left to describe what is going on were:
Shiro walked past Koukansei but soon after Shiro was confronted with that question. "This is strange, I would have sworn that you were a woman and the fella you were speaking to just now was a man!"
Shiro might not have understood what Koukansei said, not least of all because he was speaking in English! Most Japanese struggle with that don't they?
And as Shiro walked on, and as Yui walked on, and would one suggest that if the hallway were not void of people, many others would have walked on, there was one person who did not walk on.
His face betrayed little emotion and it seems as if he is staring into blank space. He is clothed in the most dullest of colours, easily camoflauging into the environs of a typical outdated, dilapidated, technologically backward, highly maintenanced (in fact the cost of maintenance is so high, they just don't bother!) interior of a normal Japanese school.
It is thus so easy for the layman to dismiss the hallway to be empty, even though it is quite clear that Shiro and Yui are at the hallway and even though it is not so clear that the unnamed person is at the hallway as well.
Indeed, the person is so unobtrusive that his name is rather elusive but if one were to approach him, he would say that he is an exchange student. Since the characters of this story are supposedly in Japan and most people who claim to love Japan don't really understand Japanese, it is most apt to call him Koukansei and fool readers into thinking that it is an actual Japanese name.
It so happened that countless words were spent describing Koukansei that the very few words left to describe what is going on were:
Shiro walked past Koukansei but soon after Shiro was confronted with that question. "This is strange, I would have sworn that you were a woman and the fella you were speaking to just now was a man!"
Shiro might not have understood what Koukansei said, not least of all because he was speaking in English! Most Japanese struggle with that don't they?