I leave for a weekend and come back to find you guys turned the collaboration story into a jumble of nonsensical mumbo-jumbo somewhat alike a plagiarized, yet obscurely tweaked version of Old Gregg.
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Coming from High and Leonard, I'm not entirely surprised, or even the slightest bit, but if you guys are going to bounce literary insanity off each other, I ask that you at least continue to remember to do so chronologically so that the story progresses and doesn't end in some meta-philosophical monologue where no one would touch the thread with a 50 foot erect penis. I still want xnine, iron man/d/^_^, rise, and even mibu to be able to collaborate, after all.
Indeed. Not gonna lie, I think this just got even harder to follow up. I will pull my cop-out card soon unless someone can continue the story! At the rate this is going not many can compete with High and Leonard, let alone any others.
I don't know, I think the dialogue lax could make it count as 4? ah I see, I think the only thing needed to be understood was only the part about them going home, the rest was mostly some unrelated gibberish =D
lol sorry, it seems I've got carried away with it~
I leave for a weekend and come back to find you guys turned the collaboration story into a jumble of nonsensical mumbo-jumbo somewhat alike a plagiarized, yet obscurely tweaked version of Old Gregg.
Spoiler:
Coming from High and Leonard, I'm not entirely surprised, or even the slightest bit, but if you guys are going to bounce literary insanity off each other, I ask that you at least continue to remember to do so chronologically so that the story progresses and doesn't end in some meta-philosophical monologue where no one would touch the thread with a 50 foot erect penis. I still want xnine, iron man/d/^_^, rise, and even mibu to be able to collaborate, after all.
Not to worry, we barely move the plot forward. In fact, I spent most of my posts describing the new character I have introduced into the story.
and most of the ones I'm writing were just some monologues that were basically unrelated to the story! the main progression could be noted on the final paragraph and that's the only thing I had actually written xD
And I always wanted a cross-dressing Bangladeshi female exchange student in a so called 'vanilla' romance story! It fills me with unreasonable revulsion to see people courting each other, so I want to know what happens if you introduce that type of character into such a situation.
I think we can all agree that this is not your typical love story set in a normal Japanese school.
I have nothing opposed to what you guys added to the story...except perhaps the spontaneous declaration of gender hermaphroditism to our main characters, but that's personal preference. As much as I do enjoy you guys exercising your artistic freedom, the reason I created a two paragraph minimum is because I want to encourage story progression. That is also why I did say dialogue can be more lax, but preferably only in the situation that switching speakers would result in creating a new paragraph and not critically affecting your word count.
I'd just like to make a disclaimer that I'm not upset at all and I have actually laughed and enjoyed what you guys have written, at least the parts I understood that adhered to logic. As a whole, I'm happy with the participation so far.
I have nothing opposed to what you guys added to the story...except perhaps the spontaneous declaration of gender hermaphroditism to our main characters, but that's personal preference. As much as I do enjoy you guys exercising your artistic freedom, the reason I created a two paragraph minimum is because I want to encourage story progression. That is also why I did say dialogue can be more lax, but preferably only in the situation that switching speakers would result in creating a new paragraph and not critically affecting your word count.
I'd just like to make a disclaimer that I'm not upset at all and I have actually laughed and enjoyed what you guys have written, at least the parts I understood that adhered to logic. As a whole, I'm happy with the participation so far.
Xenon, I think you will be infuriated by my latest post on what actually happened in the classroom. I have just committed the gravest crime in writing. I leave it to you to read what I have written.
oh damn it Leonard, you and I must have been thinking about similar things on how to get the story back on track, the only difference between us will be the wording lol~
well let's just hope the story doesn't get turned into some infinite loop when one started screwing things up to the point the authors had to redo this stuff over-and-over
It is funny! It is gut busting funny to pull the kill switch on this story. And the only way to possibly continue the story as well, since you have ended the story by revealing too much about Yui and Shiro. In fact, if you asked me to properly continue the story, I would be as lost as xninebreaker and even Pacifica.
As for redoing the story over and over, why not? The excuse for a movie called Inception is based on that concept! (I enjoyed Inception though)