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I have been trying for some time to come up with some absurd ideas for a fantasy story, so far its just a few names and little things... But the story needs to be crazy from the bottom up...

A detective story wouldn't be complete without one.



Have you considered having it set on a gigantic walrus named Paul who hates pop music?

What's that from, the beatles?

This link might help:
https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/wf-section-story-collaboration-the-boring-boy



The Boring Boy of course is a good example of a story that ran off its rails. I have yet to see you write about your dislike for Paul McCartney but you have played an invaluable role in making The Boring Boy a rather crazy story with the detachable noses.

Actually, John Lennon wrote 'I am the Walrus.'

Goo goo g'joob.

Anyway, high and leonard, the Private Eye is entirely set up at this point to be a hermaphrodite playhouse for the two of you for the next couple posts or so. Consider it a gift from yours truly.

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well I actually kind of preferred it to go in the normal way, but I'll try thinking up a continuation of it. nice job though =D

I think I can safely say that I will FINALLY be adding new Age of Anarchy chapters in the very near future. Just saying in case anyone cares. You know you guys care.





Wait, what?

Oh, absolutely. Good to hear that you'll be adding to it, and I wish you much luck and success.





Now, don't look at me. This was actually the natural progression ever since high turned Rise's wanted man into a wanted woman, then said Jacqueline was hunting gigolos. If gigolos are going to be working in a burlesque house, then a lot of them are going to also be catering to clientelle with more...questionable tastes, and not all of them women. Bound to be a lot of cross-dressing and she-males. The plot makes sense, I just knew high and leonard would have a field day with it because they write about it anyway regardless of if it makes sense or not, so at least it makes sense this time, given the circumstances.

Now you know why you shouldn't be expecting any more contributions from me.

what, so it's actually a wanted man? I thought it haven't been decided yet whether it's a man or a woman lol :D

ah I see, that makes sense somehow. and yet I thought the ones coming to host clubs are all lonely housewifes :)

I will try to go through them even though I have difficulty understanding what is written. I think that only applies to me though seeing that the rest could understand it.




I have to add that no one with the exception of high and me discussed how would the story proceed and what ought to happen next. Given these circumstances, the story can go in any direction it wants to.

Honestly, I think most of your trouble comes from you thinking too hard, searching for meaning in details that have little to none.



Exactly. You not making a post directing the story away from hermaphrodites definitely won't help, Rise.



Thank you.

I'm afraid so:



But, it doesn't really matter too much. After writing with you and leonard, I just sort of assume most side characters, and sometimes our main character have fluid gender ambiguity.



I agree. This has certainly come up more than a couple of times. I honestly have trouble trying to deduce how one who makes sense out of satire and hermaphrodite sex fantasies can have such confusion with basic plot progression points. If you would like me to explain something in more clarity for you to understand, I will certainly do my best in order to protect your sanity. If my writing drives you to madness, I will certainly throw in the literary towel.



Help us, Rice-chan. You're our only hope.

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Dropping by to express my excitement at AoA finally getting out of hiatus.

That is all.

Not exactly though I am sure you got that impression after reading my responses to the things you come up with. After reading through what you wrote, I found myself unable to understand the story properly so I clarified some details which I suspected were minor but could be relevant to the plot.

(An example of this would be my response to The Tempest where I asked whether the security guards were important to the story because it seemed to me that they dominated much of the dialogue in the first chapter.)

It all has to do with me finding your style of writing disagreeable with my tastes and expectations in writing. Most of the details of who the characters are, where the setting is, is established later in the story or in the dialogue instead of being expressed at the point when the story begins (or least when the chapter or paragraph begins.

That explains why I was completely lost when reading the prologue of Age of Anarchy and the first chapter.

well, as long as I'm able to understand the main point, it's fine. I'm not sure if I understood the story properly like the writer's intention though. I mostly just skimmed things through and look up on the key points in which the plot was hinted to progress. for example, the characters' significant actions and dialogues, locations, and some 'topical' sentences.

Personally, I would like it if the main point is expressed at somewhere easy to see like the beginning or at the first paragraph. I blame it on my newspaper reading habits. Everything is in the headline or the opening paragraph!

ah yeah. in essay writing there's something like main points and supporting points. though as I read on and on I noticed that I just read things in entirety without bothering to look at the key points if I understood it easily enough :)

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on a side note, here's a video when I was searching for guy fawkes' night. I kinda wanna write a short essay about it but I kinda find something else.

the wikipedia article is too tl;dr for me. I mainly sum it up as a celebration of epic failure of someone who wants to bomb the house of lords by burning their made-up dolls in bonfire every year.

well that's quite cruel you know, but it also sounds fun. well dunno if it's actually correct or not.

here's the video, at one parts depicting the statue of the pope being burned down lol