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Shikinokami
10 years ago
high_time wrote...
Shikinokami wrote...


I can't recognize anything except Satoshi Kon and h.


the fun thing is, on my h folder there's only futa hentai atm :D

well you know, I enjoyed paranoia agent. the one's in here are millenium acterss.

most of the thing in my folder i haven't even start watching lol


I saw Memories this week and later the same day discovered it was of Kon too. That Magnetic Rose's ending was just beautiful.
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high_time
10 years ago
Shikinokami wrote...

I saw Memories this week and later the same day discovered it was of Kon too. That Magnetic Rose's ending was just beautiful.


i only watched paranoia agent by him, maybe I should follow more of his works. I really liked his psychological take. paranoia agent got me crying bunch of times for the moment of truth it gives :D
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Shikinokami
10 years ago
high_time wrote...
Shikinokami wrote...

I saw Memories this week and later the same day discovered it was of Kon too. That Magnetic Rose's ending was just beautiful.


i only watched paranoia agent by him, maybe I should follow more of his works. I really liked his psychological take. paranoia agent got me crying bunch of times for the moment of truth it gives :D


I used this one

http://kickass.to/memories-1995-magnetic-rose-stink-bomb-cannon-fodder-x264-dvdrip-anime-t8588222.html
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high_time
10 years ago
Shikinokami wrote...

I used this one

http://kickass.to/memories-1995-magnetic-rose-stink-bomb-cannon-fodder-x264-dvdrip-anime-t8588222.html


thx m8
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Xenon FAKKU Writer
10 years ago
Shikinokami wrote...
I can't recognize anything except Satoshi Kon and h.


I'm sure you've heard of something by Studio Ghibli.
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Shikinokami
10 years ago
Xenon wrote...
Shikinokami wrote...
I can't recognize anything except Satoshi Kon and h.


I'm sure you've heard of something by Studio Ghibli.


Ahh, of course, I saw Spirited Away not too long ago. Some of the names on the list I've heard before.

Lemme share these btw.





They require little to no dialogue to understand what's happening and still gives an impact.
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer
10 years ago
xninebreaker wrote...
leonard267 wrote...
Hello, xnine. Have you read my entry for the event?


Not yet, I've been a bit busy. Though I try not to read entries until I finish or at least start on mines anyways. I try to avoid the subconscious influence it would have on my own entry. Or at least that's what I think.


You have the liberty to get other people or work with other people for that event. You can even base your entry on what other people have written so long as it is not a word for word replica of another person's entry.
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high_time
10 years ago
i tried writing a prologue in l-267 classic way :D

Spoiler:

A short prologue.

It can be said as an introduction of the world, the characters, and their motivations. What the story is about, being disclosed at this peculiar part.
The very opening, akin to reading a part of an essay that you most likely won't understand. Essays that fails to get to the point, and instead try to plunder your mind with the words taken straight from elven manuscripts. Instead of waddling around, let's write a prologue about a certain universe long before time, which is the world of fantasma.

The world is divided into four continents, each having a shape of a giant penis, having lakes similarly structured as a vagina and rivers the contour texture of shemale elephants urinating in your asshole. One continent at north pole, with active volcanoes erupting cum and love juices, also known for polar bears having sex with polar bears. The popular sport of north pole being a giant vagina curling across plastic titties. Their inhabitants at least had twelve vaginas, one hundred penises, and one billion nipples in each of their one million titties--the same with every living beings on this planet.

They had sex by having sex--that's all.

At the equator lies two continents: the east part and west part. Both having a strange adoration for nipples, and they ate plastic titties. They like to masturbate using molten cockroaches and eating them raw thereafter, or using pasta sauce or pepperoni carrot. Meanwhile, their luxurious festivals involving plucking their titties using a trampoline inside a crocodile's asshole and fucking every cells inside their body using an uranium turbine latched on each of their vaginas. Each time they ejaculate, their love juices will turn into penguins and they had sex together until the penguins died and the living ones gave birth to penguins.

While on the south pole, there lies the ruler of this world. A futanari queen who likes to be a masochistic pervert. She likes to be dominated by meek looking goth loli girls while getting her nipples pinched with a scrotum. While she lactate through her nipples, the loli girls will just suck them on until each of them turned into burnt corpses, which in turn will ejaculate molten cockroaches crawling its way into each of the queen's nipples. Leaving the queen aside, there's nothing in the south pole instead of scrotum trees.

There's no main character. Only the narrator that's been trolling you all this time. So, goodbye
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer
10 years ago
high_time wrote...
i tried writing a prologue in l-267 classic way :D

Spoiler:

A short prologue.

It can be said as an introduction of the world, the characters, and their motivations. What the story is about, being disclosed at this peculiar part.
The very opening, akin to reading a part of an essay that you most likely won't understand. Essays that fails to get to the point, and instead try to plunder your mind with the words taken straight from elven manuscripts. Instead of waddling around, let's write a prologue about a certain universe long before time, which is the world of fantasma.

The world is divided into four continents, each having a shape of a giant penis, having lakes similarly structured as a vagina and rivers the contour texture of shemale elephants urinating in your asshole. One continent at north pole, with active volcanoes erupting cum and love juices, also known for polar bears having sex with polar bears. The popular sport of north pole being a giant vagina curling across plastic titties. Their inhabitants at least had twelve vaginas, one hundred penises, and one billion nipples in each of their one million titties--the same with every living beings on this planet.

They had sex by having sex--that's all.

At the equator lies two continents: the east part and west part. Both having a strange adoration for nipples, and they ate plastic titties. They like to masturbate using molten cockroaches and eating them raw thereafter, or using pasta sauce or pepperoni carrot. Meanwhile, their luxurious festivals involving plucking their titties using a trampoline inside a crocodile's asshole and fucking every cells inside their body using an uranium turbine latched on each of their vaginas. Each time they ejaculate, their love juices will turn into penguins and they had sex together until the penguins died and the living ones gave birth to penguins.

While on the south pole, there lies the ruler of this world. A futanari queen who likes to be a masochistic pervert. She likes to be dominated by meek looking goth loli girls while getting her nipples pinched with a scrotum. While she lactate through her nipples, the loli girls will just suck them on until each of them turned into burnt corpses, which in turn will ejaculate molten cockroaches crawling its way into each of the queen's nipples. Leaving the queen aside, there's nothing in the south pole instead of scrotum trees.

There's no main character. Only the narrator that's been trolling you all this time. So, goodbye


I want a map of that world!

And when are you going to post it as an event entry? As usual, my imagination or lack of it is making it difficult to understand the entry. You needn't worry though. I could not understand the Game of Thrones because of a lack of imagination.
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high_time
10 years ago
leonard267 wrote...

I want a map of that world!

And when are you going to post it as an event entry? As usual, my imagination or lack of it is making it difficult to understand the entry. You needn't worry though. I could not understand the Game of Thrones because of a lack of imagination.


it's only about four islands. you can make them as ya want :D

well probably going to modify things or writing some other prologue that can somehow be made sense of. dun worry though, it's not like i have some imagination either.
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer
10 years ago
high_time wrote...
leonard267 wrote...

I want a map of that world!

And when are you going to post it as an event entry? As usual, my imagination or lack of it is making it difficult to understand the entry. You needn't worry though. I could not understand the Game of Thrones because of a lack of imagination.


it's only about four islands. you can make them as ya want :D

well probably going to modify things or writing some other prologue that can somehow be made sense of. dun worry though, it's not like i have some imagination either.


Speaking of the Game of Thrones, I intend to do a review of it. 'It' meaning the prologue.
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high_time
10 years ago
leonard267 wrote...

Speaking of the Game of Thrones, I intend to do a review of it. 'It' meaning the prologue.


I guess I can only say good luck as for now :D
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CO2
10 years ago
leonard267 wrote...
Speaking of the Game of Thrones, I intend to do a review of it. 'It' meaning the prologue.


And 'review' meaning slander.
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer
10 years ago
CO2 wrote...
leonard267 wrote...
Speaking of the Game of Thrones, I intend to do a review of it. 'It' meaning the prologue.


And 'review' meaning slander.


That is an accurate statement, I have to say. You should try reading it and see if you come to the same conclusions as me:

http://vk.com/doc-50747477_169577512?hash=add9da39798259c34c&dl=a66d6ae1a02f78d02e

This is of course directed at you and High.
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high_time
10 years ago
well at the prologue, i only like, read few sentences and skipped through the end. i don't feel the writing was all that appealing at all. it was bland to me so to say.
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Xenon FAKKU Writer
10 years ago
Been watching Evo, the international fighting game annual championships here in the US, and spotted this arcade stick someone was using, specifically the familiar sticker on the side:

Spoiler:
Forum Image: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BsXNEkqCEAAsJzB.jpg:large


Between those and the DotA 2 championships raising a $10 million prize pool, it's been a wild week so far.

Dakimakura sighting during the BlazBlue - Chrono Phantasma tournament:

Spoiler:
Forum Image: http://oi58.tinypic.com/345dcsp.jpg
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer
10 years ago
high_time wrote...
well at the prologue, i only like, read few sentences and skipped through the end. i don't feel the writing was all that appealing at all. it was bland to me so to say.


I have mentioned this to you in the PMs and I think I may as well mention it here. For me, it was not so much to do whether it is bland but more to do with me being completely lost with the introduction or rather the lack of it of characters and terms used. Like the Night Watch, Others, who are Gared, Will (who appeared out of nowhere) and Weymar.

Of course I had other problems with the prologue as well in terms of the style of writing. I hope I can elaborate on that as soon as possible, most likely by next week.
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d(^_^)(^_^)d
10 years ago
leonard267 wrote...
high_time wrote...
well at the prologue, i only like, read few sentences and skipped through the end. i don't feel the writing was all that appealing at all. it was bland to me so to say.


I have mentioned this to you in the PMs and I think I may as well mention it here. For me, it was not so much to do whether it is bland but more to do with me being completely lost with the introduction or rather the lack of it of characters and terms used. Like the Night Watch, Others, who are Gared, Will (who appeared out of nowhere) and Weymar.


I feel like I should at least try to defend GRRM since I happen to like those books. First, I'm going to qualify what you've said. There are indeed a lot names and terms thrown at the reader. You'll find that many fantasy stories suffer from a steep learning curve. It's a whole new world, and should the author stop to explain everything the story would get nowhere. Sometimes, us readers can't do anything but press on and put faith in the authors to elaborate later.

Having said that, I don't believe it's as bad as you make it out to be. Will did not appear out of nowhere, at least not any more than Gared or Royce did. He only made his appearance slightly later than the other two. While we initially know nothing about any of these characters, we are given sufficient background on them soon enough.

Until more solid definitions are given, there is plenty of information to infer from what's said in the prologue. For instance, I gather that whatever the Night's Watch is, its an enemy of the wildlings. Also, the Wall sounds very much like some kind of fortress that the Night's Watch is situated at. The Others, definitely magical in nature, are more than likely going to serve as villains though their origins and motives are unclear at this point. However, it would appear that whoever they are, these characters--and the Night's Watch by extension--are unprepared for them. There is recognition, but Will was not expecting them, and his account of there appearance sounds like it's being given by someone who is witnessing them for the first time.

In the end, the prologue can be summed up as thus: Some rangers of the Night's Watch were sent out to track down some wildlings, but it went horribly wrong when the Others showed up unexpectedly.

What does this have to do with anything? The only way to find out is to read on. The next chapter may enlighten us, or we may not find out until page 700. I can definitely see how that could throw someone off who would prefer to have a rundown of the details beforehand.

Spoiler:
As of the end of the fifth book, we still don't know where the Others come from or what they're after.
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high_time
10 years ago
leonard267 wrote...
I have mentioned this to you in the PMs and I think I may as well mention it here. For me, it was not so much to do whether it is bland but more to do with me being completely lost with the introduction or rather the lack of it of characters and terms used. Like the Night Watch, Others, who are Gared, Will (who appeared out of nowhere) and Weymar.

Of course I had other problems with the prologue as well in terms of the style of writing. I hope I can elaborate on that as soon as possible, most likely by next week.


maybe it's most likely not my taste. don't worry 'bout it since I don't have motivation to read most of the books that's out there. except if it seems to stand out completely different or those of my preference, I won't really read it longer than a few paragraphs, sentences or even just the title. even if i liked some books it will take a really long time for me to finish on.

i think you know the reason why.
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer
10 years ago
high_time wrote...
leonard267 wrote...
I have mentioned this to you in the PMs and I think I may as well mention it here. For me, it was not so much to do whether it is bland but more to do with me being completely lost with the introduction or rather the lack of it of characters and terms used. Like the Night Watch, Others, who are Gared, Will (who appeared out of nowhere) and Weymar.

Of course I had other problems with the prologue as well in terms of the style of writing. I hope I can elaborate on that as soon as possible, most likely by next week.


maybe it's most likely not my taste. don't worry 'bout it since I don't have motivation to read most of the books that's out there. except if it seems to stand out completely different or those of my preference, I won't really read it longer than a few paragraphs, sentences or even just the title. even if i liked some books it will take a really long time for me to finish on.

i think you know the reason why.


It is not so much about taste in genres for me. It is rather about how the story is presented. I am sorry to have made you suffer Out Xnining Xninebreaker. That story falls under romance and war.

d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
leonard267 wrote...
high_time wrote...
well at the prologue, i only like, read few sentences and skipped through the end. i don't feel the writing was all that appealing at all. it was bland to me so to say.


I have mentioned this to you in the PMs and I think I may as well mention it here. For me, it was not so much to do whether it is bland but more to do with me being completely lost with the introduction or rather the lack of it of characters and terms used. Like the Night Watch, Others, who are Gared, Will (who appeared out of nowhere) and Weymar.


I feel like I should at least try to defend GRRM since I happen to like those books. First, I'm going to qualify what you've said. There are indeed a lot names and terms thrown at the reader. You'll find that many fantasy stories suffer from a steep learning curve. It's a whole new world, and should the author stop to explain everything the story would get nowhere. Sometimes, us readers can't do anything but press on and put faith in the authors to elaborate later.

Having said that, I don't believe it's as bad as you make it out to be. Will did not appear out of nowhere, at least not any more than Gared or Royce did. He only made his appearance slightly later than the other two. While we initially know nothing about any of these characters, we are given sufficient background on them soon enough.

Until more solid definitions are given, there is plenty of information to infer from what's said in the prologue. For instance, I gather that whatever the Night's Watch is, its an enemy of the wildlings. Also, the Wall sounds very much like some kind of fortress that the Night's Watch is situated at. The Others, definitely magical in nature, are more than likely going to serve as villains though their origins and motives are unclear at this point. However, it would appear that whoever they are, these characters--and the Night's Watch by extension--are unprepared for them. There is recognition, but Will was not expecting them, and his account of there appearance sounds like it's being given by someone who is witnessing them for the first time.

In the end, the prologue can be summed up as thus: Some rangers of the Night's Watch were sent out to track down some wildlings, but it went horribly wrong when the Others showed up unexpectedly.

What does this have to do with anything? The only way to find out is to read on. The next chapter may enlighten us, or we may not find out until page 700. I can definitely see how that could throw someone off who would prefer to have a rundown of the details beforehand.

Spoiler:
As of the end of the fifth book, we still don't know where the Others come from or what they're after.


To steal a quote from you: I hate this kind of prologue. I question whether it is a prologue at all.

I will go into detail about why I dislike the prologue of the Game of Thrones hopefully by next week. Allow me to address what you mentioned about The Others.

I was expecting at least an explanation of what The Others were. What did The Others do that made them so dangerous? I felt that other than a physical description of what they were, I did not get much from the description in the prologue. When I first came across the term, I did not know what to think of them at all! It is just thrown out of nowhere!

Same with wildling. Why can't Martin just use Wild Men like Tolkien did?!
From this dictionary, a wildling is a plant! (It is also spelled as 'wilding')
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/wilding
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