FAKKU Writers' Lounge

On a side note, I'm currently writing Chapter 14 of my dr. Pervert story. Mostly throwing up the ideas I found interesting enough to write about, then assimilate it with the appropriate theme set for the upcoming chapter~

Seems like I'll have to make a thread for judges next month.

Ok now it's my turn to give my story concept. I especially select my current ongoing story titled Adventures of dr. Pervert for this~

There's a really long story behind the making of this peculiar work it basically defines my entire career as an author, but I'll try to make it short. So here it goes...just skip it if you want me to jump directly to the concept~



The story revolves around a perverted protagonist named Arata Shiozaki, which also plays a role as the narrator along with the heroine called 'Tierra' which has the given name Karen Agnesi, she herself hated that name for some reason that's probably described later in the story.

The plotlines are centered around two of them as they interact with each of the other main characters who worked together with them, uncovering the secret of their pasts and finding who they really are. Arata and Tierra will also discover their true identities and finally finding out what is their purpose for living, behind all of these trials and mysteries they faced from the beginning until the end of this story~

I would also spice it up with the addition of conceptual side characters, and antagonists that creates the suspense, developing it along the main figures of the story~

I want to focus on the character development in this story because I find the idea highly interesting. I also made lots of random and weird parts to add another blend of flavor to this story, mostly because I like writing random stuffs too =)

I started out with a vague storyline and developed it along as I wrote more chapters, the ones which I could have comfortable extent in which I experiment on it to make things interesting while I write it. Hopefully by the time this story has been finished, each parts will create an inter-connecting foundation that strengthens the whole atmosphere of the entire scenario~

That's all. Wow that feels really good to describe my own~

I leave this thread for a while and find I've been the topic of some minor discussion.

To clarify, what I told Rise is correct, my uni lets off in June and I graduate by the end of the first week or so. However, I told this to Rise but I am not too keen on having a majority of the previous contest's judges be on the council of the next. This spices up the diversity of perspectives analyzing works and putting their minds together. If Rise and I are on this panel again, then we'll act the same way together we did previously. So, I will step down so someone else may take my spot and offer something different than I can.

Rise asked me who I think would make a good replacement and I suggested mibu, who may or may not have accepted. I also whole-heartedly believe Sam is an astounding editorial mind and would be a great judge. However, I believe he's graduating with me, by which I mean within the next 4 months or so.

I heard from Mibu that he's currently busy on his final year so he probably couldn't participate on judging for this upcoming contest~

He simply told me that when the times comes, he'll look over his schedule.

Glad to see that, I also agreed about Sam and Jerry to fill the positions up~

Jerry already accepted. But we'll have to make sure that he's able to set aside some time as he himself said.

Ok then, all that matters now is about scheduling eh? =)

Yeah. If Mibu tells me that he can't deal with it, then I'll probably have the create the thread for the third judge, obviously if Jerry's schedule turns out to contain no free times, that thread will have to getting me two judges.

Good luck on it, I hope you'll get the most suitable one for this event~

Woah, looks like there's some action brewing! Good luck organizing the event you guys! I'm looking forward to it!



I'll be honest, this was a story that I passed up on merely because I judged the story by its title. Once again, I find myself slamming my head onto the wall for doing such things, ugh. What I thought might have been a simple collection of h-scenes could be much more, considering the concept that you are describing. I started out wanting to read your story in return for you reading mines at first, but now my interest is genuinely piqued. I'll be reading it over the course of the week, and more likely than not, you'll have yourself another reader!

"I want to focus on the character development in this story because I find the idea highly interesting."
I've always felt that character development was a delicate part of the story. For me, it takes alot of time, thought, and effort to do a decent job. Is it something that feels natural for you?

Oh! Thanks for recommending my story, as well as posting a reply on my thread. The pressure is on! And my passion for the story is back stronger than ever! Let's hope I don't disappoint you.

Don't blame yourself.

High is a creep, so he put a creepy title. >_>

Hint: Anything from now to end of May is insta no. I'm being anally raped by my own research now (fuck them for telling me to do the MC analysis WITHOUT providing the MC data needed, oh what, you expect an undergrad to suddenly get access to ZEUS database?) and then I have to submit my research draft (0 word written, deadline 30 Apr oh gawd) and then prepare for my report defense yak yak... you get the idea.

June, I'm mostly available. June is exam month for me and I can't study 24/7, so it shouldn't be hard to read and evaluate the pieces in between studies and exams.

Schedule for July - Sept will depend on my application being accepted or not, decision is in Apr. If accepted, then most likely it's an insta no, but subject to change (idk what it's like in CERN).

Well that's about it~

Well I can only hope for the success of your application, ganbate ne, hope you will get the best results =)



Thanks a lot for taking your time to read my concept, take it easy and have fun on reading teh story. Though I have to warn ya in advance it might contain lots of weird stuffs in it =)

Nah about the character development thingy is mostly from my given weakness when it comes to developing a solid plot. In my opinion the plot might change drastically from when it's originally planned and drafting such a plot concept thoroughly from the start to finish is really painstaking and tedious.

So I figure out that I just build only the necessary amount of story blueprints in my head and focus on developing the characters, because they actually had set personalities. And from writing more chapters I learned more about them and their true purpose of being lol. Developing on a story based by interactions between these conceptual characters also spark multitude of interesting results too~

I believe you will do well, keep on writing and I'll be looking forward to your works =D



Well said, couldn't have done better than that xD

If Jerry is clean on June, maybe we'll be able to work it out.

Lol Mibu getting anally raped. And here I thought that he went inside Miku. XD

Had too much nap and now I can't sleep when I'm supposed to, so let's do this. The story is Kirei na Hoshizora.

It's the first story that I started to write 'seriously'. How I chose to write it was a little random... long ago I had this ex, and she mentioned how guys can't really write romance so this story was born as a reaction to that.

So the story follows the life of this one guy named Mibuchiha Ryushi when he met a girl called Tenjouin Sora. Err damn, I suck at describing things but it's a romance, so they form a relationship, and things go well for a while before troubles start to pop up... you know, usual romance stuff. Talking too much about it will only make me give spoilers and I don't want that.

How I write the story. I simply base some things on the things I've watched/read, as any author naturally does. Then I try to put myself in the position of the characters and feel for them, how they would think about and react to a given situation. That is how I advance the story. It's my first series and while some people told me the script style of it is a bit weird, I prefer that style and I have a lot of fun writing it.

It's in hiatus now because I'm busy with my thesis, but I'll surely continue it whenever I have the time. It's nearing its end now. To the old readers who are waiting for the next part and to those that stopped reading it due to how long I take to update, I sincerely apologize. To the new readers, I hope you'll enjoy it.

EDIT: PALINDROMIC PRIME POST NUMBER AW YEAH.

Character based story development is one of the most interesting things that occur to me and I see that you've done really well on writing it. I also look forward to experiment with those peculiar character-based ones since writing a solid plot is not really my forte. It's nice to have your input here, thanks for sharing~

Well firstly as someone who already read it a long time ago, I think the first 18 Chapters are very nice. And I have to say yours is one of my favorite long-running series in this section. Though as you actually noted before, I had discontinued reading at some point because it's uncertain when you will finish it. But now I'm really glad that you gave us the green light that you'll be ready to continue on finishing this highly-acclaimed work~

===

Also, hump~

Ok it's confirmed. I'm not available end of June - end of Aug.

bump