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randomliner wrote...
Did you know that the reason why you are advised to shower daily is to get rid of the thin layer of dried salt from your sweat!?!?!Actually it's to get rid of the smell from your sweat and also the other microorganism that stuck on your body from all the dust and other stuffs because they make you looks dirty and after they do some fermentation and other biological stuff it'll make you smelly...
Well, yours is a good reason too.
Did you know that in the past, rich people do not take a bath because they say "Bath is for poor people, we're not sweating because all of those brute work after all so we're not smelly" ?
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So yeah I'm currently busy working on various ongoing projects at the same time, which is really a handful to finish~
There was also a future plan of making a sequel of a couple of my one-shot's too, not to mention the plan to extend 'Winter Symphonia Overture' before making its sequel sometime~
Sigh, hopefully I'll get the hang of it~
There was also a future plan of making a sequel of a couple of my one-shot's too, not to mention the plan to extend 'Winter Symphonia Overture' before making its sequel sometime~
Sigh, hopefully I'll get the hang of it~
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Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote...
randomliner wrote...
Did you know that the reason why you are advised to shower daily is to get rid of the thin layer of dried salt from your sweat!?!?!Actually it's to get rid of the smell from your sweat and also the other microorganism that stuck on your body from all the dust and other stuffs because they make you looks dirty and after they do some fermentation and other biological stuff it'll make you smelly...
Well, yours is a good reason too.
Did you know that in the past, rich people do not take a bath because they say "Bath is for poor people, we're not sweating because all of those brute work after all so we're not smelly" ?
Interesting!
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Hmm... I have a concept and idea bubbling up in me for a story. But I can't seem to find the right time for this.
By the way, High, I have something to ask you.
By the way, High, I have something to ask you.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Well... this may be out of topic but it won't be hard to track so here goes:
Name me a VN or two in which the main character you control is a female.
Name me a VN or two in which the main character you control is a female.
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Sono Hanabira series, all of them. And Aoishiro, these are the ones I played so far.
I specifically recommend Aoishiro, if you can afford the large filesize since it's around 6 GB. The story's really good and the artworks are excellent, probably the best shoujo-ai VN I've played up to this moment~
There's one more, but I haven't played it yet. Titled Shikkoku no Sharnoth -What a Beautiful Tomorrow, seems pretty promising though~
I specifically recommend Aoishiro, if you can afford the large filesize since it's around 6 GB. The story's really good and the artworks are excellent, probably the best shoujo-ai VN I've played up to this moment~
There's one more, but I haven't played it yet. Titled Shikkoku no Sharnoth -What a Beautiful Tomorrow, seems pretty promising though~
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Do you mean Otome Games? I haven't played any of these actually. But you might wanna look up to this one. The story's pretty good from what I've heard thus far
You can browse here too for additional resources -> Yup this list
Aoishiro doesn't seem too yuri for me, it focuses more on the story and normal friendship between girls, the yuri is a bit subtle but yeah it's there lol~
You can browse here too for additional resources -> Yup this list
Aoishiro doesn't seem too yuri for me, it focuses more on the story and normal friendship between girls, the yuri is a bit subtle but yeah it's there lol~
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Phew, finishing each chapter surely reduces the mental load piling on my mind, what a sense of relief it is. Not to mention all the fun I got while writing 'em and fixing up the parts, thinking up the concept and finishing it up~
Well then, time to move on into another one =D
Well then, time to move on into another one =D
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Rise-chan wrote...
Sono Hanabira is too yuri. I need something more straight-ish.Hakouki Shinsengumi Kitan is a great psp visual novel. While its not adult, you do play a girl who is under the protection of various samurai warriors. Its story is interesting too.
I don't know many visual novels centered around a heroine, and I don't even know where to start. So if anyone can recommend me some (preferably translated), I'd be most grateful.
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Ok then, to liven things up, let's open up a new topic
Post up a short concept about your story, whether it's your completed, ongoing or your upcoming ones.
Then we can go discuss about it together =)
Let the first interested parties beside me took the initiative this time, I'm also looking forward to talk stuff regarding your story concepts~
Post up a short concept about your story, whether it's your completed, ongoing or your upcoming ones.
Then we can go discuss about it together =)
Let the first interested parties beside me took the initiative this time, I'm also looking forward to talk stuff regarding your story concepts~
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xninebreaker
FAKKU Writer
Mmmm it's so hard to shake off old lurker habits. I read most of the posts and stories, but i always lose my will to post/reply. But, a step at a time eh? Time for some initiative! (How would this even work? We just bust out why we are writing/plan to write, and then discuss(?) it? Nonetheless, here goes.)
So, right now, I'm working on a long running series called "The World of Four." For me, it's more like an experimental bubble. I'm using it to see how far I can carry a long running story, and how well I can keep it up. While I normally write doom-gloom stories, this one's an action adventure.
Anyways, there really isnt a concept behind the story other than a really vague outline of conspiracies between kingdoms that I have in my head. But my main reason for writing this is that I wanted to test a story that utilizes different perspectives. There's supposed to be 4 main perspectives, each with a very different way of thinking. To clear things up a bit, you can think of my idea as looking at the government from different perspectives; how does a poor person view the government? A rich person? A person outside of the system?
I'm trying to see how well I can manage to make every prespective "correct" and thus bring about some sort of conflicted emotions on the readers. If a person dies, one person may be sad about it, others furious, and still others may believe that it was deserved, or maybe it meant a sort of justice for the person that did the deed.
I used the magic/fantasy setting as it gave me a broader scope for events that could occur. Overall, while I like the idea, I'm beginning to think that it's a more work than I had imagined. Especially since I'm going into this story from writing nothing but oneshots, and impulse writing. This seems to take more time, more editting, and a lot of thinking to achieve the multiple "correct" perspectives that I'm trying to create. But, that's the concept of the story I'm writing in a nutshell.
So, right now, I'm working on a long running series called "The World of Four." For me, it's more like an experimental bubble. I'm using it to see how far I can carry a long running story, and how well I can keep it up. While I normally write doom-gloom stories, this one's an action adventure.
Anyways, there really isnt a concept behind the story other than a really vague outline of conspiracies between kingdoms that I have in my head. But my main reason for writing this is that I wanted to test a story that utilizes different perspectives. There's supposed to be 4 main perspectives, each with a very different way of thinking. To clear things up a bit, you can think of my idea as looking at the government from different perspectives; how does a poor person view the government? A rich person? A person outside of the system?
I'm trying to see how well I can manage to make every prespective "correct" and thus bring about some sort of conflicted emotions on the readers. If a person dies, one person may be sad about it, others furious, and still others may believe that it was deserved, or maybe it meant a sort of justice for the person that did the deed.
I used the magic/fantasy setting as it gave me a broader scope for events that could occur. Overall, while I like the idea, I'm beginning to think that it's a more work than I had imagined. Especially since I'm going into this story from writing nothing but oneshots, and impulse writing. This seems to take more time, more editting, and a lot of thinking to achieve the multiple "correct" perspectives that I'm trying to create. But, that's the concept of the story I'm writing in a nutshell.
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It's a really interesting idea, so you put 4 different perspectives into a world with wide variety of things that may happen? That would come up as a really imaginative piece that could be developed apart each a time then reaching out into a grand conclusion, I like that kind of writing style~
Though remember to estimate when it's really going to end or you might be discouraged midway through and drop such promising potential. Even the most ambitious kind of writings needed set bounds for it to turn out into a finished masterpiece, that's my opinion regarding this matter~
Anyway since I'm interested in your ideas I'll be looking forward to give your fic a go so count me in
Though remember to estimate when it's really going to end or you might be discouraged midway through and drop such promising potential. Even the most ambitious kind of writings needed set bounds for it to turn out into a finished masterpiece, that's my opinion regarding this matter~
Anyway since I'm interested in your ideas I'll be looking forward to give your fic a go so count me in
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xninebreaker
FAKKU Writer
Ahaha, it's good to hear that you're interested. But, (perhaps to simply continue the conversation) at first, I started off trying to put multiple perspectives in every chapter. However, this created stroies and chacters that were hard to keep track of, not to mention the chapters ended up becoming really large.
My initial reasoning behind doing this was to make the reader slowly realize that these events are happening at the same time. Meaning... it would be morning in one character's arc, and still be morning in another character's arc within the same chapter. With only 2 chapters out, you can't really tell, but it was supposed to be a gradual realization.
However, I'm starting to think that maybe this is too chaotic? Too unmanageable? I get the feeling that I would be able to create a better "hook" if I only focused on one storyline. But at the same time, it's very important that the reader comes to realize these events are happening all at once. I was thinking of going down a character's arc, and once it reached a certain point, I would swap focus onto another character's arc. Or maybe use timestamps? Not sure what would really be a good idea. I think the current format is something that makes sense to me as the writer, but really confusing to anyone reading it.
My initial reasoning behind doing this was to make the reader slowly realize that these events are happening at the same time. Meaning... it would be morning in one character's arc, and still be morning in another character's arc within the same chapter. With only 2 chapters out, you can't really tell, but it was supposed to be a gradual realization.
However, I'm starting to think that maybe this is too chaotic? Too unmanageable? I get the feeling that I would be able to create a better "hook" if I only focused on one storyline. But at the same time, it's very important that the reader comes to realize these events are happening all at once. I was thinking of going down a character's arc, and once it reached a certain point, I would swap focus onto another character's arc. Or maybe use timestamps? Not sure what would really be a good idea. I think the current format is something that makes sense to me as the writer, but really confusing to anyone reading it.
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Personally, I think it's better to go on with the format that you feel most comfortable and slowly develop the story in the pace that makes you feel at ease~
Or simply, you can just make the chapters based on various themes where all of the perspectives are somehow connected together. The actions of the characters are simply put as the symbolization of the story's intrinsic meaning itself~
Or simply, you can just make the chapters based on various themes where all of the perspectives are somehow connected together. The actions of the characters are simply put as the symbolization of the story's intrinsic meaning itself~
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Here's mine. Its a short part from a mystery/horror i wrote while waiting for my English final to end. It's not something I would make a story out of, but I thought I should get an opinion on explaining the setting and whatnot. Please let me hear your opinions; any feedback would greatly help me improve in my future works.
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Please let me hear your opinions, any feedback would greatly help me improve in my future works
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Wow, I do sense a strong Urobuchi Gen influence in there. It's well written piece and I could not give more words than that =)
Regarding the concept, it does remind me of something like Puella Magi Madoka Magica mixed with some of the Nitroplus works, especially Chaos;Head which gives me the vibe of warfare in a post-apocalyptic world~
Regarding the concept, it does remind me of something like Puella Magi Madoka Magica mixed with some of the Nitroplus works, especially Chaos;Head which gives me the vibe of warfare in a post-apocalyptic world~