Kirei na Hoshizora

great chapter =]
and i hope thats not the last

spoilers!!! everyone ryu-kun is working on the images of the story to give you guys an idea on what the chars would look like ^_^

oh you sora-chan. and here's me wanting to keep it as our little secret until it's done. XP

NUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuuuuuuu...... I thought she was joking T_T

srry i thought the opposite T_T



@GracefulDiscension why nuu~.... ??? are you angry by any chance??

wow, awesome story, almost thought it would turn out like "School Days" or something after chapter 19..., o.o

lol, school days? I'm not really fond of yanderes though... x_x

finally read up to 21, interesting cliffhanger hope to see Ryu's parent's reaction

Call me Grace and no im not angry just surprised is all ^^

where still doing drafts so it will take a while

Finally. After some block, unmotivated days and Ar Tonelico 2, I present the 22nd chapter of this story. I apologize for the super slow updates. v_v

Is it just me or the direction this is taking is really weird now... x_x

When you say really weird meaning, I can't predict the outcome, then yes it's weird. I usually try and be able to spot some sort of cliche' that would hint to the ending. But I'm so torn now on who's relationship to support now... SoraXRyu or SeiXRyu or something so crazily out of hand it would make us the readers go "Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?". I just can't imagine the which ending this will go for...
On another note~

I cried a bit... ;__;

Good chapter Mibuchiha-kun and take it easy dude~

so... now what's going to happen?

uh... what do you mean? >.<

@zai: thanks, and I will take it easy. The line in your sig is there for a reason. ^^

i4got... ._.
i think it was me wondering if there will be any ecchi stuff going on. only chapter that had any was the one with the incest-rape. story is great, just wondering due to my perverted mind >.>

I think it's better if it keep to be a no "perverted" story. Some secks here and there will ruin the entire story..

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But that aside , you really do a good job there, mib. Main climax, eh? I never thought that you could make your character like that. Well, I mean, after read all that story, Ryushi's is seems not "out of character at all. well, a lil' bit, but it's still okay.

The way you build tension between characters is good as usual, and I think you give the readers a good enough clue to imagine what happened in Ryushi's past. And you put a good characterization in Uryuu, his personality really matched Ryushi's, and no wonder Ryushi is grown up like him. But, still, I didn't see much Shizuku in this arc. How's her character, really, i wanna know. lol

and, for this great chapter, here's something from me so your rep can go to the next level.



and, my last word, my impression for the first and second section of this chapter

lol, I told you it's gonna be minor. XD and NO, nothing uke about the whole thing. >.<

@eru: no worries. take your time. ^^

It's super minor. but, well, whatever, at least you managed to put my name in your story as you promised without ruining the whole plot. Should I happy or sad?

[size=7]and now I feel like writing my own arc with Hikari and post it here.. [/h]

Happy, because that shows I'm an awesome writer. XD

and hey, try it. I wanna see how it turns out.