Kirei na Hoshizora

Damn mibu, I really love this story. Those latest chapter almost made me cry. You are going to make more chapters right?

Also i just had to give you another +rep

Mibu read this as "You aren't stupid enough to leave it hanging with no proper end right?"

And he answered, "Of course I'll finish it. =_="

Lol, I'm glad that you like it, greenie.

Good, i don't want to imagine how it could end. I want to know what happens.


Also another question if you don't mind.

Is anything in the story based on something from rl or is it all made up?

Some bits are taken from rl... but most of it were made up. XD

Sorry if I haven't replied, but I might be gone for awhile because I am busy IRL, so I won't be able to read your story for quite sometime. Please also tell Jericho this that I haven't forgotten his story too. I am just quite too busy these days to read long stories, though I am very interested in both of your stories.

I see. Take your time, irl probs come first.

I should hope you prioritize your personal problems before reading the works of a couple people. If you didn't, I'd question your ability to make sound choices.

i had just a little thought but i think this is the the story with the longest & the most chapters in Writing (and Lemons)

just a thought

Phew, finally c23 is up... late as usual. =_=

This sure is one long project.

Not bad bro. Keep em coming.

currently putting it in MS word then printing it since i cant keep my eyes on the monitor for a long time

btw tell me what you think of this?

There wasn't really very much that happened but it was nice to see some of the problems cleared up.

But i feel sad for Sora.



@Sora. Nice picture.

Hmm~
Not really sure on what to say here... I was really hoping Ryushi and Sora would get back together. But it seems Mibuchiha-kun is fan of the childhood friend route (j/k)~

Okay on a more serious note I gotta say twas a kind of a long-wided chapter. You know with all the aimless wandering done by Ryushi and all. But the feeling of melanchony I got throughout the chapter was good. And as most say, if a piece of writing invokes emotions that means it's good. Also the side-chara Satou served as nothing as something to give me mixed feelings about Ryushi's decisions on dropping Sora for Sei. Nonetheless somehow I get the feeling Sora Ending isn't completly out of sight yet (me being hopeful)...

But otherwise I had a kick reading something from you again~

@sora: eh? how do you the pic out of the background? or did you redraw it?

@green: p-prob? o.O

@zai: long winded eh... I kinda tried to show how ryushi tried to... erm, temporarily forget about it and also his desire to 'rest'... DX uh, I guess putting Satou inside wasn't a good decision after all... >_<

about the ending... well, we'll see when the next chapters are out... XD

Hmm didn't see it that way~? My bad... :roll:
But now that you mention I guess Ryushi's logic makes sense now with the wandering and all. But still! I want a Sora ending... ;___;

Oh and didn't notice the picture just then Sora. Somehow I get a feeling it's a combination of Lily Satou (Katawa Shoujo) and Saber Lily~ [size=2]c wut i did thar[/h]
Not that is a bad thing cause I'm rather fond of both characters~ SO a good job there Sora! :wink:

that's the semi/official line art ryu-kun you can take a look at it again i updated it i just finished it but maybe ill edit a little bit if there are any problems



it is from saber lily but didn't know it resembled "satou"
any please bear with it since im still waiting for the back ground im still asking for help from kaho-tama but he wont be back till Wednesday.... and thanks ^^ btw that's Konoe beside her

oh, this one is super epic. can't wait for the final ver... XD

You're not the only one dude. I know how you feel.

@GreenZero
I know right bro!

I am now waiting for the day that Picture is completed with the whole cast of Kirei na Hoshizora on it! It will be awesome~

I don't care, I want to show diz anyway! XD