Kirei na Hoshizora
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i loved it but i didnt expect the last part it was a bit shocking
mibu-kun you are definitely breaking a few sections of my expectations on men ^_^
mibu-kun you are definitely breaking a few sections of my expectations on men ^_^
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mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Sora-chan wrote...
mibu-kun you are definitely breaking a few sections of my expectations on men ^_^This part...contains a bit of sexism...and discrimination. Lol jk.
@all: lol, thanks for the comments...feel free to point out any mistakes or even suggest things...
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GreenZero
Get Jinxed
Nice, now they are starting to show some feelings for eachother and as always looking forward to the next chapter.
+rep for you mibu
+rep for you mibu
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mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
I'm now playing FFX, and damn, putting the controller down is hard...
Lol, after a week full of gaming and some blocks, I present the 7th chapter of this story...
Lol, after a week full of gaming and some blocks, I present the 7th chapter of this story...
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mibuchiha wrote...
I'm now playing FFX, and damn, putting the controller down is hard...Lol, after a week full of gaming and some blocks, I present the 7th chapter of this story...
W00t! Chapter 7 is awesome. ^^ Finished it in 2-5 minutes. I didn't even skim. ^.^
Thoughts on Chapter 7:
I wonder how the concert's gonna be like! Maybe you should add another smooch in there! *Whistles* ;)
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Waii! New chapter new chapter!
Those two are quite the lovey-dovey pair aren't they, and Ryuushi is more timid than he let's out. Getting all >///< after the first kiss and all...
Those two are quite the lovey-dovey pair aren't they, and Ryuushi is more timid than he let's out. Getting all >///< after the first kiss and all...
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im getting excited at the next chapter wonder if mibu-kun will put up a music with it so people who read this can imagine her singing the song ^^
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Nice story!
I like it how at the end of every chapter, you present something to make us look forward to the next.
Looks like their relationship is getting smoother and going uphill :D
I like it how at the end of every chapter, you present something to make us look forward to the next.
Looks like their relationship is getting smoother and going uphill :D
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GreenZero
Get Jinxed
It's so exciting now, this just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for chapter 8
