Kirei na Hoshizora

*kun kun* do I smell a triangle?

Fun chapter, I liked the bed-scene ;)

*reads latest chapter* DUN DUN DUN DUUNNNNNNNN!!!! :3

*reads last chapter too and continues from volt* DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUNNNN!!!

lol, silly you. thanks for all the comments so far...and on a dunno-related-or-not note, I love astronomy.

And that's why I choose the name Hoshimi and Mizuki. Luckily Sora is Sora...so it goes well, lol.

I thought it's finished already..... Wow prediction Love triangle huh!?.......

Figure out what ryushi's hair " doing manga " dark blue hair.... and for sora.... Pink I guess....... i'm on planning stage on the cahracters.....

LoL, kore ga....Mysterious Transfer Student scenario!!

Nice enjoyable chapter as usual, pretty short compared to the previous one

hey, hoshimi is an important one!! not mysterious!

and about the length...well, this is the length I want for every chapters actually...but couldn't do for all past chapters...

Really great story can be a good book(manga, anime?) if you develope the characters and expand the story.

Chapter 10 reminded me of... this pretty much. The confession scene was quite sweet, but in hindsight I kinda wanted to see what Ryushi would do with professing his love to Sora. In my mind it coulda turned out to be a bit more intimate, but then again I still enjoyed the chapter nonetheless.

Now Chapter 11 had me laughing~ [size=4]
I want Mizuki side-story please. She's so cute~[/h]
Anyway,
For a second there I was convinced they actually did it :roll: and it was just you skipping out on the H-scene. But it was another one of Ryushi's situations turned joke. And to see a new character in, Kotonomiya Hoshimi, I'm expecting problems to generate from her for Ryushi and Sora's relationship. But as they say, conflict makes for good stories. A short and sweet chapter overall.

you really should make a manga for this, buccha-san..

working on it~




*stabbed*




my drawings sucks tho...

Yo ho~~~~~~~ new chapeterrrr

Ok, so here's an update to this story...

It's a kind of sub-chapter, no Ryushi and Sora in this one.

Mizuki, Yuan and Konoka needs some time too~

chapter 12 is in conceptual imagining stage, stay tuned!

Oh my g..gah

That....was...un...unexpected

what is?

The first half...you know...@@"...



Disregard the shock, its an enjoyable read...

nice gaiden chapter! the first half is a bit surprising but still liked it. :3

Ahaha~ I knew it.
Now onto this new mid-chapter~
*reads*
...
....:o
I guess that makes up for the averted H-scene. Short as it maybe, and filled with grammar errors. I'm gonna assume it was your first time. So a good pitch with describing the thoughts and feelings going through Yuan's mind while going through the whole thing. Kudos Mibuchiha~

And onto the second part, Tsun-tsun Mizuki-chan~
Eheh, I don't know why but I really love her character. She just appeals to me in a lot of ways~
So thanks for throwing that in Mibuchiha.

Overall, excellent side-story Mibuchiha. Was an enjoyable read.

damn, MS Word grammar check is not really doing its work...and yep, it was my first XD



wah hah ha....Mizuki is appealing to me too. <3

gotta love a sis like her...

Wow. I can believe I read all that xD
Awesome, story I'll make a review later for chapter one since the lazy bum that I am!