Private School for Love

DatYuriThough · 2014-08-07T14:02:08+00:00

And onto the next adventure where I throw a bunch of words together and see what happens. And you guessed it, more romantic Yuri lemons from the Yuri Master herself. Also it progresses towards the lemons, Chapter 2 is a tease for lemons but they will be there eventually. This time the story revolves around a (very) loosely based version of myself and my own girlfriend, last names have been altered for the sake of privacy. Our heroine is the most beautiful and intelligent Danielle, who has just moved to a foreign land new to her as her fathers job demands it of her. Moving has been common for Danni which has made it difficult for her to experience true friendship. But at this new school for either rich or very skilled girls filled with strange and multi-layered individuals that will shock Danni, will she be able to make friends or perhaps, maybe something greater...? I also apologise for the overly generic titling of this story, usually I'm good at thinking of a title but this one not so much. Originally it was 'Love Engraved Upon Her Heart' but that made me throw up from how generic it was. Then it was 'From Friends to Lovers' but that wouldn't be accurate from how the main couples adventure starts. Finally I settled on 'Private School for Love' since its a private school with lesbian couples everywhere! Anyway, two chapters have been written so far as of the creation of this thread, I'll upload the first since I've checked it over and I'm happy with it. The second needs checking over but has been written. The second has now been written, checked and uploaded. I will now include a progress report on future chapters too. Oh and if anyone wanted to know the best representation I can find of our two main heroines Danni and Chloe, here it is: Spoiler: Danni is the shorter one with darker hair and Chloe is the taller with blonder hair. Except Danni looks more like me IRL. Shall we say it looks like her with shorter hair, her braids removed and a much smaller bust than I described? Plus the colourings aren't correct for their uniform but I liked the art. Close enough. And the art is by an independent artist known as MyLovelyDevil. And without further ado...Enjoy! Chapter 1- Chapter 2: Introductions to Love Arc Chapter 1: The Foreigner Spoiler:A family of five (Husband, wife, teenage daughter and two young children of each gender) stood outside a two-floored house in a suburban environment inside a well-populated American city. Moving vans had pulled up beside them and had begun unloading furniture and decorations from the back of the van into the expensive looking house. The house itself was two-storied with white marble walls and flower-hedges lined in front of the house on either side of the doors. It had a path that led up the middle of the front garden, which was plain, and up to several steps that led to the front door. Instead of a roof, there was a floor with deck-chairs, tables and umbrellas used for when the weather was nice enough. The husband and father of the family was Karim Ulistani, a wealthy business man from Saudi Arabia who held a lucrative position in an export company who dealt with metals. He and his family had moved to America due to the demand of his job. He was of dark olive coloured skin with jet black hair that was slightly jelled upwards in the middle. He always wore some kind of black business suit with a white undershirt. He was a calculative business man with a strong and lean physique that was hidden under his clothing. But despite his cynical nature in the world of business he still kept a bright, cheerful and kind disposition for his family. Next to him was his wife Audrey Wakeland, a British woman who had spent her University years with Karim and had married him soon after. Despite her quick marriage and life as a housewife, she had still managed to earn a law degree by the age of 21 and always had a flood of requests from law firms to acquire her abilities. However, she had devoted her life to looking after her children and husband, so they never had to be separated. She had shoulder length, well styled blonde hair with a slim physique. She always wore an everyday dress that was neither too formal nor too casual for everyday usage. Her personality was amiable and affectionate to all the important people in her life, but despite being a housewife and her husband being a business man for a multinational corporation, she had always been more dominant than her husband. That being said, they still took on problems as a couple who always consulted each-other in a fair way. Next were the two children: Samantha and Gideon. Samantha was the older of the two and was known for her tenacious but immature personality, which resulted in her being on the receiving end of more than her fair share of punishments. Gideon on the other hand was an intelligent boy who always obeyed his parents’ rules without question, but his constitution was weaker than the average human, leaving him hospitalised on numerous occasions. Because of his condition his mother and father had decided to move into a house smaller than they had been used to that was located close to a hospital, a sacrifice they were more than willing to make. And onto our heroine, Danielle Wakeland-Ulistani. A girl of 16 years old and unmatched beauty, her pale skin and long chestnut hair that made its way to the small of her back gave her an almost divine glow. She wore thinly rimmed glasses and she had an average height as well as a slim build matched with her perfectly proportioned chest, hips and legs to the rest of her body. She was a naturally nervous girl, due to the excessive moving of her family she had gained very few important friends and the ones she had made were difficult to make contact with given the distance between them. Despite this, she only ever wanted to make friends with others and to have an ordinary life like others, she took nothing for granted and even worked part-time jobs despite her family’s wealth. Like her mother she was a kind and well-mannered girl but lacked her mother’s attentiveness and confidence, but still retained her mother and father’s intelligence. Danielle (Or Danni as she liked to be referred to) had been transferred to an all-girls private school in the centre of the city, ready to start her new school life whilst getting adjusted to her new surroundings too. “Well Danni, what do you think of our new place of residence?” Audrey asked her daughter with a bright and warm smile from cheek to cheek. “It looks amazing!” Gideon expressed with excitement, ready to burst inside and see his own new room, he practically shook with excitement at the idea of exploring a new location. “Nobody asked you Gidiot!” Samantha mocked her brother by standing on her tiptoes to tower even further over him than she already did (Gideon was 6 and Samantha was 11). She always referred to him as †˜Gidiot’ by mixing his name with the word †˜idiot’, one of the few half-intelligent things she had ever done. As Audrey scolded Samantha for her rude behaviour, Danni took a step ahead of everyone else and spun on her heels to face her family “It looks…nice” Danni said timidly, as if even talking to her family took a monumental effort for her. “I’m glad you think so! But it hardly matters, my bosses paid for it themselves so we should all be happy regardless of how nice it looks!” Karim said in response as he folded out the handle of a suitcase and began pulling it along the ground towards the house “Shall we?” The first few days were spent in a simplistic, mundane fashion of unpacking and setting up the furniture in the family’s new house. However, the first Monday back, Danni and her siblings began their first day of school. Danni looked at her image in the mirror: Her perfect physique wore a white polyester, button-upped shirt with a crimson red sweater vest over it, a short black skirt, white socks that made their way up to her knees and black school shoes. She had two braids in her hair, one on each side of her head and resting over her shoulders before falling down her chest. “I hope that I can finally make a permanent friend…” Danni said in a hopeful tone that also sounded resigned to defeat at the same time. Although she accepted her family’s position it was still a difficult task for her to not let the depression over being so alone affect her. A loneliness that had permeated through her entire being, she had considered numerous times to just shut the world out and lock herself away from the emotions that had tormented her by forgetting about such concepts as friendship and love. But nothing is ever that simple, not for Danni, she wanted to experience friendship, companionship and love. Danni found herself on a public bus, despite her personality to never take anything for granted, she had never used a public bus before. Every bump could be felt as if someone was tossing her up in the air, every sensation was as if it were happening to her and not the bus itself. The experience was oddly exhilarating for Danni, it felt so exciting to be doing something that other people would consider an everyday occurrence and yet she was also frightened to be doing something out of her comfort zone. Danni took a quick scan and noticed a girl sat directly opposite from her with the exact same uniform on as her, except she had a multi-coloured scrunchie on her right hand and a guitar case by her feet. In contrast to Danni, who was quiet but wished to talk to others, this girl seemed quiet because she wanted to avoid people. She had short, neck-length, black hair that was combed over one side of her face where it partially covered one of her green eyes. She looked naturally gloomy with her dark expression, skull necklace and black and purple tights. “Excuse me? Do you go to the same High-school as me?” Danni asked but had no response given back to her as the girl bobbed her head to the sound of the music being blared through her headphones that were attached to an IPod in her hand. Danni realised her attempts at communication were fruitless and decided to make the short journey over to the girl. Danni sat down on the seat next to her with her bag by her feet. The girl looked up to see Danni’s nervous expression at making such a bold move and quickly removed her headphones before swaying her head to one side in a resentful way, as if Danni’s presence was enough to annoy her. “Who are you? And why should I care?” She asked in the bluntest manner possible, whether or not this was the cultural difference between America and England the girl’s manners seemed far less refined than Danni’s. The immediate shock of being asked such a peculiar question (For Danni) left her stammering around for answers “Ugh…well…I was wondering…” Danni began to organise her thoughts before the girl snapped her fingers right in front of Danni to gain her attention. “Hey, dumbass, I asked you a question; not the other way around. Who are you?” despite seeming quiet and reserved the girl showed a quick and sharp tongue that spoke in an edgy and commanding voice. “Oh! My apologies! I’m Danielle Wakeland-Ulistani and I’m transferring in to the all-girls private school starting today” Danni began to explain her situation as the girl next to her snapped her fingers again and yawned simultaneously. “Okay, okay I gathered the bulk of it. You want to play †˜Follow the leader!’ with me so you don’t get lost huh?” The girl discerned rather quickly, clearly she was quite intelligent to be able to grasp the situation so quickly. Danni hastily nodded in return and the girl sighed “Fine. But don’t annoy me. And if you can’t keep up then I’ll leave you behind, got it?” she pointed her index finger straight under Danni’s chin like she was brandishing a razor sharp weapon. Danni nodded again and the girl threw her head back with another annoyed expression as she grimaced “So…what’s your name?” Danni asked but the only immediate response she got was a cold stare. “What did I say about being annoying?” the girl complained before dragging her hand down her face to reiterate her intolerance of Danni “If I tell you, you can’t laugh, got it?” again, the razor sharp finger was brandished and Danni nodded without a word escaping her pink lips again “It’s…Suzie…” the girl looked away with a flustered expression and tried to cover her face with her hand “Pretty stupid fucking name right? Doesn’t go well with my personality, just call me Blake instead” Blake appeared overly embarrassed about her name which soon turned to frustration as she grabbed the armrest at the end of the row of seats and began banging her fist gently against it. Danni tried desperately to try and come up with a topic for conversation while she left Blake to brood over her own name for several minutes. Finally she noticed the guitar case again that Blake had by her feet and raised an eyebrow over it “Is…is that a guitar?” Dannie asked as she pointed to the case by Blake’s feet. To Danni’s surprise, Blake didn’t role her eyes or sigh in exasperation like she had done every previous time Danni had ever opened her mouth, instead she looked surprised and almost confused over the case “Oh yeah…forgot about that” her casual attitude over something that had clearly caused such a puzzling response perplexed Danni “It’s the instrument I play for my band. My family isn’t too well off, but I managed to gain a scholarship into the school thanks to my skill with my guitar” Blake explained. “You’re in a band?” Danni asked “And you needed a scholarship?” Danni continued her questions, unsure of why someone would need a scholarship as she had simply been allowed in the school without a second thought from the school’s chairman. “Yep. We play gigs every Saturday at a Nightclub” Blake took out a flask of coffee from her shoulder-slung bag, which was resting on top of her guitar case, and drunk some “Me and my band were scouted by the school because of our †˜talent’ as they called it, and allowed us into the school” Blake explained without much care for detail. “But why do you need a scholarship? I was allowed in without one” Danni admitted and Blake let out a chuckle, something that Danni hadn’t expected from someone like her. “I guess you’re some kind of rich girl then? The school probably let you in because they thought your parents might donate some money to help your education. There are a few people like that, but people like me and my band…” Blake looked Danni deep in the eyes with a piercing glance that made Danni shake with fear “…Are the only people who have actually worked hard and actually deserve to be there. Don’t forget that” Blake lightened up and sat back in her space “As long as you don’t act all high-and-mighty then we won’t have a problem. Got it?” Blake said and Danni nodded again “Good” Blake clearly lacked any care for people who didn’t work hard in life, something that her appearance didn’t suggest about her. But Danni had already learnt that you couldn’t judge Blake by her appearance at all. Danni followed Blake throughout the streets of the city for several minutes. The city had skyscraper after skyscraper, but they moved into a part of the city more populated by housing and apartment complexes that surrounded a large school. It had layer upon layer of floors with a large field surrounding it with other similar but smaller buildings on that field. There was a long concrete staircase that led up to the front entrance with dozens of schoolgirls walking up them. “This is where we separate. Good luck” Blake said as she walked on ahead. “W-Wait! Blake! Where do I go?” Dannie began to call out as something bumped into her back and pushed her over the top of the stairs onto the flat layer at the top of the steps. Her bag spilled open and all her new school items and equipment sprawled out in a mix in front of her as she sat on all fours, helpless. “Oh God…” Danni’s emotions already reached a boiling point, the combination of anxiety over coming to a new school, the fear of not knowing where to go and now this: Caused her to start sobbing quietly to herself. “Ah! I’m so sorry! Are you okay?” Danni turned around to the sound of a sweat and tempting voice to see the source of what had tripped her over: A girl of above average height stood behind her. She brushed a lock of her golden-blonde hair that stopped just below her shoulders out of her face. She was unfairly beautiful, with beautifully plump legs that weren’t too thin or fat, a beautifully sized chest that was just a bit bigger than Danni’s. Her eyes were a pure emerald and all of her face’s features were of perfect proportion and shape. She wore the exact same outfit as Danni but with a blue fleece on over her school shirt. “Here, let me help…” she started helping Danni place her school gear back in her bag, but Danni was mesmerised by her appearance the entire time. Eventually she started speaking again, but Danni only brought herself back to reality towards the end of her sentence “-your name?” she asked some kind of question. “Eh? Um…” Danni didn’t know if asking her to repeat would have been rude, but if she didn’t then she would look stupid just sat there. “Your name! You do have a name right? I’m guessing you’re new since I haven’t seen you before. I’m Chloe by the way” the girl reiterated her question, exposing herself as Chloe. “Oh! Yes I do have a name!” Danni wasn’t coming across as the most intelligent at this point “My name is Danielle Wakeland-Ulistani! Nice to meet you!” Danni introduced herself as they both stood up and Chloe handed the bag to Danni. “So are you new?” Chloe asked. “Yes, me and my parents moved here from England” Danni explained. “England? So you’re foreign then? Interesting, so am I. Well, I’m half French so I’m only partly foreign” Chloe explained herself as something tugged on Danni’s arm, ending their conversation. “Dumbass! I checked the board at the front and we’re in the same classes! Stop chit-chatting with people and act serious!” Blake dragged Danni into the front of the school with an enraged walk and tone. “Blake?! Yay! I have a friend!” Danni punched the air in celebration as she followed Blake down the corridors, full of students, closely. “We aren’t friends! I just hate seeing idiots be stupid!” Blake yelled. They continued onwards until a girl cut across their route and held a hand out to stop Blake. “Stop! Miss Dayle, what have I told you about shouting in the corridors?” The girl was a few inches shorter than the both of them with long brown hair. She had stormy eyes of grey and an athletic body. She wore the same outfit as Danni, but with an armband on her right arm that read †˜Rule-enforcer’. Despite the title of her armband she looked harmless and cute as opposed to someone who could enforce rules over other students. “Oh…it’s you Melanie…what a lovely surprise…” Blake said with a dry taste in her mouth. “Perhaps you would like to answer my question?!” she struck a more impatient mood. “Oh right…’Please in future incidents do not yell or raise your voice in the halls during lesson time…’ or something like that” Blake spoke like she was used to it “But that only applies during lessons, lessons don’t begin for another 15 minutes. You must be here because you like me” Blake smiled deviously. “D-D-D-D-D-D-D-Did you just…?” Melanie took a step back and composed herself “In any case! I was simply reminding you ahead of the new school year! Please try to be less trouble for me this year!” Melanie said and walked off with a flustered expression. “No promises!” Blake raised her voice to annoy Melanie as she walked off before Blake turned back to Danni “Sorry about that. That’s Melanie, she’s a stickler for the rules, but she’s good person at heart. Also, she’s my girlfriend” Blake explained. “Your girlfriend?! You mean…you…and her…” Danni was at a loss for words, she had heard of such things about two women going out but never before had she seen it. “It’s pretty common in this school. Better get used to it” Blake said bluntly and started walking off down the hall. “You don’t seem too close…” Danni said. “She’s just a little nervous. Give her time” Blake said without worry. “Soooo….how does that work? I mean, with two girls?” Danni asked out of curiosity as she tilted her head and raised a single eyebrow. “How? Are you stupid or something?” Danni puffed her cheeks out at that remark “Christ! Like any other relationship, except instead of having a dick she has…whatever” Blake gripped Danni’s wrist slightly tighter as Blake stopped by a door labelled †˜Music Room’ and opened it before entering. Inside was a circular grouping of tables in the centre of the room with instruments of all kinds strewn about against the walls, one of which was laden with windows that overlooked a picnic area. Blake took one of the seats and rested her legs up against the table and let out a sigh. “Are you all-right Blake? And why are we in this room?” Danni asked as she went to touch a drum-like instrument with wires attaching the top of it to its bottom before Blake leaned over and slapped her hand away. “No touching unless I say so” Blake sighed again “This is our tutor room. We attend here once in the morning to get registered and once at the end of the day” Blake pulled out a seat next to her and pointed to it “You look stupid stood there with those puppy-dog eyes of yours” Danni smiled and sat down with great enthusiasm. Her actions only caused Blake to roll her eyes again, much to Danni’s amusement. “Do you like Melanie?” Danni asked as she tapped her finger against her chin quizzically. “What kind of stupid question is that? I had faith you were smart enough to enter this school on merit, apparently I was wrong” Blake insulted. “Oh yeah. There’s something I should probably tell you…” Blake looked as if she was debating with herself to actually finish her thought “Well…maybe it’s best you should find out for yourself…” she finished whilst tapping her fingers with an uncomfortable expression, whatever thought she had clearly had sent her mind racing. “What about? Please tell me!” Danni leaned over towards Blake and seemed to forget about Blake’s dislike of her staying so close. Danni had the look of curiosity written across her face. “Ughhhhh…” Blake moaned to herself and kicked the underside of the table in frustration “Whatever I say, you can’t get mad? And take it as fact from someone who has seen too many people get screwed over in the past” Blake warned and Danni nodded quickly, gesturing for Blake to continue as she tried to keep a straight face, but failed as it quickly broke into a fragmented smile in places. “You remember the girl you bumped into? The one you went all googly-eyed over-” “No, no, no, no, no! I wasn’t like that at all! I mean…she was very pretty…and kind…” Danni blushed remembering the thought and entered a world of her own as her eyes turned slightly glazed over her thoughts, only to be returned by being bumped on the head by Blake. “Shut up! Christ you’re annoying! Just listen!” Blake yelled and sighed before collecting herself so she could continue “To put it quite frankly that girl, Chloe Jean, is a lady killer. She finds unsuspecting girls and sleeps with them in a one-night-stand kind of deal. I wouldn’t get overly close to her, for your own sake” despite the shocking revelation that had been so quickly and carelessly dropped onto Danni that would have sent the average person into a fit of emotional distress, the look of slight embarrassment rested on Blake’s face. The look of feeling vulnerable over knowing you just took the step in order to protect someone when you hate having to show that side of yourself: Blake’s true self. Someone who cares for her friends and the people she cares about; Danni more than appreciated the sentiment and hugged Blake in a tight embrace. “Thank you for looking out for me. You’re a good friend Blake” Friend, not a term Danni was able to use a lot, usually those people would quickly drift away from her because of her social standing and her constant moving, but Blake so easily accepted that and even went as far as to insult Danni over it and then cast it aside as if it had no bearing over the person she was or could be. It showed Blake was the best kind of person that Danni could hope to make friends with; someone who just didn’t care about the extra baggage someone carries, just the person themselves. Blake gritted her teeth back and forth at the idea of being hugged so easily but found herself patting Danni on the back instead of going with her first idea of punching her in the stomach “Don’t make a habit out of this…” she said quietly, but loud enough that Danni caught the message. Danni sat back with a sullen expression afterwards though, she had been certain that Chloe was a kind person from their initial meeting. But she remembered never to judge a book by its cover, in fact she would have expected Blake to be the bad tempered loner who only looked out for herself and not the type of person to involve herself in a romantic relationship or even look after and care about the best interests of someone like Danni. Still, the feeling of having no real definitive answer or closure of the subject of this girl Chloe frustrated her beyond belief. Then Danni tried to consider why it mattered so much? They had only had one conversation together up to this point and it hardly sounded like the most emotionally connecting conversation in all of history, just some simple greetings and yet this girl never left Danni’s mind in the strangest of ways. An odd burning sensation made its way through Danni’s heart whenever she thought about Chloe, perhaps it was just simple idle curiosity but whatever it was motivated Danni to whisper to herself. “Okay, I’ll find her after school and talk to her. I at least want to know if she’s the type of person I want to make friends with…” Danni said and clenched her fists in determination as she would set about the course of events that would engrave strong feelings upon her own heart. Chapter 2: Classroom of Unspoken Love Spoiler:A reasonably simple day passed by for Danni on her first day of school: finding her classrooms, introducing herself to her classmates, eating lunch with Blake who seemed distracted by something but refused to elaborate on what had reduced her to participating in conversation at an even lower rate than usual. The day dragged on longer and longer as it neared its conclusion, and Danni’s heart began to race a little quicker than it had done at the prospect of meeting Chloe and having an actual conversation with her. And even more so, over what Chloe would say in response over the allegations that Blake had made about her. Danni found herself walking down the halls of the upper levels of the school as she left her final class of the day. She spent 10-15 minutes speaking to her teacher, after lesson, who was just making sure she felt comfortable in this school given her movement record between schools. It was a nice change of pace to see a teacher actually have enough courage to take Danni’s feelings into account instead of just leaving her be in case of frustrating her and having her parents pull their funding out of the school. Nothing but paranoia of course since Danni would never ask her parents to do something like that, but that didn’t stop people from keeping their distance from her. Since she was all alone whilst walking down the halls, the emptiness of the place truly set in: The quiet, blank white walls would usually be bustling with noise and the voices of young women who had a bright and exiting future. But now a solemn and depressingly blank girl with no substance walked the halls. Or so she thought at least. She considered how blank the walls were and how blank she was as a person, she probably would blend in so well with these halls that nobody would ever notice her. These halls were a perfect representation of herself, but she kept walking through them as there was no point in giving in to her sadness. She hadn’t given up before and she certainly wouldn’t give up now. This also meant though, that Danni would not get to talk to Chloe on this day, but it wasn’t the end of the world and almost calmed her down slightly. In any case, this meant that Danni now walked the completely empty school halls alone since everyone had left already. However, she heard the distinct voice of Blake come from the end of the hall and another familiar voice that she couldn’t quite place the owner of it. She quietly made her way up against the wall that led into the classroom and peaked inside the halfway open door as to not disturb the conversation. Inside was a girl with neck-length black hair and a characteristic typically broody expression leant against a desk with a girl stood in front of her wearing a sash on her arm whom had chestnut hair. Danni quickly realised it was Blake. “Why is Blake still here?” she pondered before moving her attention on towards the girl stood in front of her “Oh it’s Melanie from earlier!” Dannie whispered to herself as she continued to listen in “She’s dating Blake I think...?” Out of curiosity, Danni decided to stay for just a little longer to see what they were talking about. Upon listening to the initial tone of the conversation, Danni could easily tell Melanie was frustrated with Blake and was scolding her over something while Blake kept giving short answers or acting as if Melanie’s opinion was an over-exaggeration, which only added fuel to the fire that was Melanie’s growing anger and frustration. “What’s got you in such a bad mood?” Blake said as she brought her foot up and rested in on top of her desk as she tilted her head with a blank expression bar her one raised eyebrow. Her disposition was that of teasing, almost mocking Melanie by taking such a carefree position. Despite being so new to the school and knowing all but nothing bar the basics that she had been told about on her first day, Danni could clearly tell that what Blake was doing could be considered taunting an angry bull. Just seeing her like that sent Danni’s heart pounding, praying Melanie wouldn’t flip out on Blake. Before Melanie could even respond with words to convey her frustration, she began furiously pointing at Blake’s now raised foot “THAT! That is exactly why I am in a bad mood! You ignore the rules and do whatever you want without consideration for how much work it is for me or my feelings surrounding it! Do you know how much the other rule enforcers get pissed off whenever I give you special treatment?! A WHOLE LOT!” Melanie yelled and Blake rubbed her face in exasperation at Melanie’s argument “Plus if you sit like that…” Melanie blushed and looked away whilst covering her mouth with the ends of her sleeves “People can see your panties…” Blake smirked at Melanie’s nervousness but that only served to anger her and put her back on track “But that isn’t important right now! You’re incredibly frustrating and have no consideration for anyone else’s feelings but your own!” Melanie yelled and Blake grunted in anger before standing up to meet Melanie face to face even if Melanie was a few inches shorter. “You think I don’t think about you? You think I don’t feel bad when I cause you trouble? Because I do. I hate it when you have to try and defend me but I won’t change how I act just to make your life easier for you. You’re easily the most self-centred girl I’ve ever known. You knew how I would act when we started going out and yet you still blame me for the trouble I cause you? You're so naive it hurts” Blake grabbed her guitar and bag from the floor below “See you tomorrow” she said with a cold indifference and began to walk away before Melanie grabbed onto her red sweater vest and held on whilst striking the nervous look she had moments ago. “Please don’t go…I’m sorry…can we talk a little more? We can work it out…” Melanie begged and Blake dropped her bags before grabbing Melanie by her shoulders and holding her over a desk as she brought their faces mere inches from contact “B-Blake?!” Melanie said in shock at the change of situation. “I’m not in the mood for talking now” Blake stared with a hard look straight into Melanie’s eyes that shook with both fear and anticipation. Melanie’s bottom lip quivered with excitement as she tightly grasped the material of Blake’s shirt and pulled herself into Blake’s chest and rested her face there “This is what you wanted from the start huh?” Blake asked as Melanie refused to even look in Blake's direction out of embarrassment. She gulped at what she expected Blake to do and took a few seconds to finally speak up. “J…Just shut up and do it…” Melanie ordered and Blake increased the distance by laying Melanie down on the desk, stepping back and folding her arms. “Not if you’re going to act all cold and distant” Blake seemed serious, an odd change given how willing she was just a moment ago. In response to the distance made, Melanie tried to reach out and touch Blake the way a baby would at seeing their Mother. She sat up on the desk and placed her hands on her knees before looking to Blake with upturned eyes of desire. “P…Please Blake…” Melanie looked at her dead in the eyes “Make love to me…” she almost began weeping, clearly being so open with her own feelings was difficult for her or perhaps it had something to do with upsetting Blake before. Either way, Blake embraced Melanie in a hug, but unlike with Danni and the hug they had shared: Blake took the lead and held on tightly. Blake looked down at Melanie who leaned forwards with closed eyes and slightly pursed lips, Blake smiled and then did the same as she began to kiss Melanie. A soft touch of their lips with their tongues quickly gliding over one-another before they parted lips to look at each-other again. Melanie was already completely flustered and looked to be shuffling on her behind uncomfortably. Ignoring this momentary distraction, the two of them pressed their lips together once again with Blake taking the lead with her tongue, wrapping hers around Melanie’s, squeezing it and teasing the rest of her mouth with it. After several seconds of this kind of intense swirling that sent Melanie into a euphoric state, they broke apart again. Blake needed to catch her breath but was otherwise unaffected by the kissing bar her quicker breathing and blushing expression. Melanie on the other hand was gasping for air, drool trickled from the corner of her mouth. Her eyes begged for more as they lost all sense of shame. She also began to shuffle more frequently on her behind and looked a little angry with Blake. “You’re really turned on aren’t you?” the look Melanie shot back was of annoyance over how obvious the answer should have seemed. “S…Stop teasing me and get on with it…” Melanie said and Blake immediately started kissing down her neck and softly tracing the areas between kissing with her tongue. The stimulation of this caused Melanie to kick the legs of the desk as she softly moaned in response. Blake grabbed the bottom of Melanie’s sweater vest and began rolling it up as Melanie raised her arms so they could get it over her head. Blake moved her hands under and behind Melanie’s shirt and back respectively as she went about unhooking Melanie’s bra. “Y-You’re really getting bold Blake…” Melanie chuckled as Blake raised an eyebrow in response. “What are you talking about?” Blake said as she let Melanie’s bra fall to the ground below and began unbuttoning her shirt. “Well we’ve had sex in a lot of places we shouldn’t have…school…the club you work at…” Melanie would have named another example but began moaning louder than before at the explosive stimulation of Blake licking her nipples. Melanie had perfectly shaped breasts for her size and Blake went about admiring them like they were some kind of collectable. “Whoa…” Danni whispered as she swung back around the door to completely hide herself from being spotted just in case either of them looked her way at all. Danni found her heart racing and felt hot all over after witnessing what she had just saw. Her legs trembled with fear. Her body seemed to take control of itself as her hands moved between her legs and began to softly stroke her own panties that had become slightly wet from watching the two girls. “What am I doing? I’m touching myself to those two…and one of them is a friend…something must be really wrong with me…” Dannie thought to herself. However, soon after beginning, something grabbed her hand she was masturbating with and another also clasped over her mouth to avoid her from screaming out in fear. Danni wanted to scream but found her voice couldn’t exit her mouth and the grip on her hand was as tight as a metal clamp that refused to budge even the slightest. “Shush! Be quiet! What are you trying to do?” Dannie looked over to see the girl she had planned to see all day long with an angry and curious look written across her face: Chloe. She saw the juices on the tips of Danni’s fingers from where they had leaked through her panties. “Are you really that kind of person? To just touch yourself in school?” Danni shook her head and Chloe removed her hand from her mouth to let her answer properly. “I just…saw two girls having sex and…I couldn’t help it…” Danni pointed to the classroom that she had saw the girls having sex in and Chloe looked through the gap carefully to see Blake pull Melanie’s panties down her legs and then softly lick her way up her legs towards Melanie’s pussy. Chloe shot back around and placed her hand on her heart with widened eyes “Mon Dieu!” she said quietly to herself in French and grabbed Danni’s hand after grabbing their bags and making for the schools exit. Back in the classroom, Blake’s fingers gently traced up Melanie’s body and avoided the folds of her pussy by millimetres, causing her to fling her head back in agony over Blake’s teasing, Melanie breathed silent, stifled and urging breaths in response to the teasing as well. Blake brought herself back up towards Melanie’s breasts to begin admiring their shape and soft texture by rolling her tongue all around them. Melanie gave a wobbly smile from her euphoric state and began to stroke the side of Blake’s head with affection and lead Blake to start thinking about the current situation. “Ah. This is what I love the most” she thought “Making love to her. Not because I can touch her body wherever I want, but because I can have her be honest with her affections towards me. I don't care for sex, but I do care for you: Melanie” Blake rested her chin on Melanie’s stomach looking into her slightly dazed eyes from the positive stimulation Blake had been giving her. “Blake…don’t stop now…please” Melanie begged and Blake’s eyes shot open with surprise at Melanie’s words. “I want more of you…” Melanie admitted and Blake nodded in response, the emotional integrity of both partners broke down at the admission. A tear rolled and dropped off of Blake’s usually stoic or aggressive face and the same happened for Melanie. The droplets of water fell onto the ground below and mixed together, spilling into each-other. Their eyes met and no words were needed. They knew how each-other felt. "I love you..." Melanie thought to herself. "I love you..." Blake thought to herself. Once the act was completed, Blake led against the well with a half-dressed Melanie curled up against her gently snoozing as she grasped on tightly to Blake’s arm and leg while she rested her head on her shoulder. “Hey Melanie…” Blake began but Melanie was in too much of a deep sleep to respond “Did you know I hate the aftermath of this more than anything, but I also love it? Weird. Christ I’m weird. I hate it because I can’t see your affectionate smile to me touching you. But I love it because you curl up to me so easily and your small breaths make you look so cute…” Blake leaned over and kissed Melanie on the forehead and returned to an upright position “I’ll wake you up in a bit…” They (Danni and Chloe) both heaved heavily as they exited the main doors. Chloe sighed in relief and looked back to Danni “Sorry about that, but it would have been bad to involve ourselves with that any more. It wasn’t right to watch them...even if they were breaking the school rules about on sight relations…” Chloe chuckled a little at the whole situation like it seemed a common occurrence. “Yeah I understand” Danni nodded as she attempted to recompose herself. That was her first time seeing such a thing, she had always had a working understanding of sexual relations between a man and women but only theoretically, never before had she seen any practical examples of sex between opposite genders let alone of the same gender. It was oddly exhilarating and sent all kinds of curious thoughts into her head like how two girls could do it? There wasn’t anything a woman could stick into another woman so how could two women do it together? Her thoughts moved to the foot, since its shape was loosely similar to the male genitalia in her mind. But then she considered how stupid that seemed thinking of how it would have to work in terms of positioning. She recalled how Blake was licking up towards the area in question which beckoned the consideration of if that felt nice? She blushed at the idea at pinched herself for thinking such thoughts. “So shameless of me…” she thought to herself and quickly returned from her own thought as Chloe began to speak. “Well…try not to involve yourself in anything like that on the schools grounds again Danni. I’ll let you off this once but that’s only because it’s your first day here” Chloe winked and turned on the spot before walking off. “W-Wait!” Danni called back to Chloe as she reduced the distance between the two by jogging over to her “Who are you? I’ve heard some things that-made me want to speak to you-and I never really got to thank you for earlier…” Danni said with a frantic speech pattern that made Chloe smile a little. Danni was hunched over and tried to retreat in herself, simply talking to Chloe seemed difficult, especially about the subject she wished to raise. “Okay, okay! Calm down a bit! You sound like you’ll explode!” Chloe pulled out a bottle of water, for Danni to drink from, her shoulder-slung bag and led her over to a 3-foot high wall for them to rest on. After letting Danni take a few sips she inquired “Feeling better?” Danni nodded slowly with a worried look “Yes, thank you very much for the drink” Danni took a deep breath and decided if she didn’t ask now then she probably wouldn’t be able to sleep over the idea that Chloe would so easily sleep with other people “I heard…you sleep with everybody…is it true?” Danni asked and Chloe cusped her hand over her mouth to suppress a laugh. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry! I get that a lot but it’s still hilarious how exaggerated people take the rumours” she said and took a more regal position by placing her hands on her lap and looked at Danni “Right. On to the explanation. I’m Chloe Jean, student council president of the entire school” Chloe said with a proud smile and placed her hands on her hips trying to look more impressive. “As for what you’ve heard…I don’t sleep with any of the girls here at this school. I’ve more or less had a fan club created because of how many girls admire me” she chuckled a little at the idea and Danni did too. The worry over Chloe being a promiscuous girl with no sense of love or romance for her partners ebbed away and soon left her with a feeling of relief. But still being beside Chloe made her heart race exponentially. She still couldn’t figure out the reason, she had previously thought it was her worry over what Chloe was like and her potential promiscuousness that had caused her quick heartbeat, frantic speech pattern and overly sensitive nerves, but it clearly hadn’t made much difference even though she had been given the answers she had preferred to be given. “As for thanking me…” Chloe kissed Danni on the cheek very lightly, Danni swung around and stared back with widened eyes “Go on a date with me!” she requested. In a moment of blind fear and confusion Danni doubled back and fell off the wall to a soft thud on the grass below but quickly recovered to stand extremely stiffly while shaking. “A…A….A….D-D-D-D-Date?!” Danni stammered to a yell and Chloe flung her head back in laughter. “Yep! You’re a cutie! Totally my type! What do you say? You can say no, I won’t judge” Chloe said calmly despite her previous laughter. Everything she did made Danni feel strangely happy: her teasing laughter, calm voice, happy expression, even the way she moved her hair out of her eyes seemed to give Danni’s heart peace. “But…” Danni looked scared “I’m a girl…don’t you want a boy to go out with you? And why me?” Danni asked. “Doesn’t matter to me. We’re all human aren’t we? Why should it matter if you’re a girl or if I’m a girl? People are too self-conscious of themselves and too conscious of others, as long as you like the person you’re with it shouldn’t matter” Chloe said with a straight, determined face. Clearly this was a conversation she was used to having with people “As to why you…I don’t know, but I have the strangest urge to want to get to know you. I really think if we do we’ll find out we’ll have a lot in common! Call me crazy if you will” Her logic calmed Danni again she spoke in a calm and positive tone about topics that Danni would too nervous to even consider bringing up. That was something that simply drew Danni in from admiration. Before Danni knew it she moved her hand closer to Chloe’s and felt the warm sensation of Chloe’s fingers pass over and around her own. An amazing sensation, it felt as if Chloe’s radiance had been injected into her just by touching her soft and glittering skin. She took Chloe’s physique in one more time before she gave her answer, her touching and infectious smile, her obvious and well-rounded bust, those curvy hips. Everything seemed all too perfect, and yet, there she was; asking Danni a question she never expected. Her answer was obvious to everyone but herself: “Okay…” she said quietly smiling to herself “I’ll go out with you” Danni still didn’t understand her feelings towards Chloe, they were a mix of admiration, confusion and something that desired for something greater than friendship. “You know, if you hadn’t reminded me that you owed me I wouldn’t have asked you out!” Chloe giggled at her own admission and forgetfulness as she playfully tapped her head with her fist and stuck out her tongue. “Really? Why?” asked Danni. “I’m secretly a very shy person. People just voted me as president because they all admired my beauty and intelligence, I wasn’t even a candidate! I guess that’s the sacrifice you have to make when people adore you” Chloe shrugged. “Gee, try and sound less amazing…” Danni said with a bit or sarcasm that they both laughed at, the idea that Chloe could actually be a regular girl who was on such a high pedestal by subject of the majorities opinion never dawned on her. So far everyone here at this school had something about them that she wouldn’t have expected to see. Whilst caught in her trance of thought, she noticed Chloe staring back with a devious smile and slowly stood up to Danni’s level, closing the gap between them that was already very small. Pressing their bodies together as Chloe wrapped a single arm around Danni’s back to keep her drawn near. Whatever Danni felt, the first kiss they shared right there by that small wall as the sun sank behind them made for the perfect first day of school of the New Year for these two girls. Chapter 3-Chapter ???: "Let's All Be Friends!" Arc Chapter 3: Breaking and Making Bonds Spoiler:The day was the same as it had been when Danni and Chloe shared their gentle and emotional kiss. Danni sat in the room of her house that belonged to her in her casual clothing of a zipped up red hoodie, denim short-shorts and multi coloured socks that went halfway up her shins. Her room was a delicate pink with cardboard boxes from the move, some of which were opened while others remained tightly packaged with duct tape the entre way around. Despite being in her new place of residence for the better part of 4 or 5 days at this point, she had hardly decorated at all. At the most all she had done was unpack some simple clothing (as seen with her current attire), bedding and a desk at which she sat at. More onto her room, it was quite large; like a princess’ personal chamber. Of course it was very bare however. But the items strewn about with no real thought still gave off an expensive and regal atmosphere. Placed against the side of her room was her wardrobe that contained some clothing such as her school uniform. It was a dark purple colour with mirrors for the doors that could be opened and running along the edge of them was linings of crystals of all kinds of colours and shapes: Ruby’s, Sapphires, Emeralds and many others. Danni scribbled away hastily on a piece of paper that had several bullet points above it with lines running through them. The first bullet point was simply crossed through with care and delicacy, but as the number of them increased, so did the frustrated way she eliminated them. Such as crossing back and forth in a blur of annoyance. Eventually Danni let out a singular moan and dropped the side of her head against the table below and took a quick glance at the title she had given it “What should I do with Chloe for a date?” She sighed and crumpled the piece of paper up and threw it carelessly wide of her waste bin before she rested her head upon her arms that were supported by the desk. It was quite simply: frustrating for her. She had never had a close friend before, let alone a situation where she and someone else could be considered dating. “Ahhhhhhhhh! This is going to drive me insane!” She yelled in frustration as she punched the table below her with closed fists. “Why am I trying so hard?” Danni wondered to herself, if anyone, it would be Chloe who would be making the decisions about the date itself so there was no need for her to concern herself with such simplistic worries. Chloe should be taking care of them. “I’ve never been on a date…what do I do? What will happen? Are we even girlfriends-?” Danni blushed at her own question, realising that she and Chloe had not talked a great deal about what roles they had in this relationship or how serious they were about it. Questions like these kept permeating in her mind, she kept reviewing them and tried to figure out what Chloe wanted. This only served to further her own frustration as she had no answers or any leads to answers. The only thing she could think about was how her heart would beat faster whenever she thought about Chloe. It had to have some tie to the feelings she had for Chloe but it offered her no conclusive evidence other than the feeling of anxiety. But then a small smile wrote itself along her face and she covered her small and pretty mouth with the ends of her sleeves as she swayed her legs back and forth while her head remained firmly planted on her desk. A happy giggle escaped her lips “…But I can’t help but feel happy to be so confused about Chloe…nobody but me gets to be like this with her” in any case, she decided that however serious her feelings for Chloe were, she was an extremely lucky person indeed. She looked up to read the time on her clock above her on the wall. It read 10:58 and Danni stretched her arms as she let out a quiet yawn. She rested her head on her arms one more time and let herself drift off to sleep, ready to face whatever the next day had in store for her. The next day came by and Danni waited by the bus stop where she did the previous day, the day she met Blake on the bus itself. Soon after her arrival it pulled up to her and she stepped onto the vehicle that gave her the impression it was trying to push her back and forth. She felt as if the intense reactions the rocking of the bus gave her would never leave. When compared to all of her new experiences and feelings, this ranked as one of the least worrying and most calming. She could just sit back and allow the journey to pass by without worry or issue. She took a quick glance as she stepped on to see if Blake was anywhere to be seen. However, the bus was almost completely empty except for some seniors and the odd individual who took a glance at her and then returned to whatever they were doing. She sat by where she had sat with Blake and sighed quietly “Well I suppose it’s not like she’d take the bus everyday right? I’m sure she has alternative ways to get to school and back” Danni said in a defeated voice. Despite Blake’s brash and somewhat oversensitive speech pattern, Danni considered her a kind and friendly person whose amiability was hidden by a cold exterior that Danni had managed to melt through with the simplest of gestures. It struck her that the reason why Blake had seemed so aggressive was because of how lonely she must have felt simply because people must have been put off by her aggressive and somewhat tomboyish figure. Upon discovering Blake for the first time Danni definitely felt slightly intimidated by Blake’s appearance, let alone her attitude. Perhaps if Blake could refrain from her more cynical nature then she wouldn’t be so lonely. But the same could be said about Danni’s nervousness about interacting with people, if she could push that aside-if only for a moment-then maybe she wouldn’t have to be so lonely. Before Danni knew it the bus ride had ended and she exited the vehicle at her stop. Surprisingly, Danni managed to recall most of the way that Blake had shown her and soon ended up at her destination. She clambered the steps and entered through the main doors of the school building to see a crowd gathered around one end of the hall, listening intently to a conversation that was just out of earshot. She could, however, tell by the tone it was not the friendliest of conversations. “Whatever could be the matter…?” Danni pondered as she made her way over to the crowd and managed to peak her way through a gap in the crowd to see Chloe and Blake stood opposite each-other with peculiar expressions. Blake looked angry beyond belief, arms folded and a slight twitch to her right eye-brow. Whilst Chloe stood with hands on hips and a slightly satisfied smile on her face. She also spotted Melanie stood off to the side holding her arm nervously and refused to take notice of the situation. It felt odd for her not to take control of the situation given the premise she was a rule enforcer. “Whore!” Shouted Blake at Chloe. “Backstabber!” Chloe responded with a more agitated expression. “You’re calling me a backstabber? Please, you’re the queen of backstabbers! You stole that position from me!” Blake retorted. “Oh really? †˜Stole’? Last time I checked I won the election fair and square” “You weren’t even in the running! Everybody here just likes to kiss your ass so you might look their way! If you were a real friend you wouldn’t have accepted the position!” “And if you were a real friend you would have been happy for me!” This last point seemed to stick and Blake turned towards Danni’s directions and walked off down the hall with a monstrous expression of anger. Meanwhile, Chloe also turned the opposite direction and headed off down the hall. As the metaphorical dust settled over the situation and the students went back to their assigned locations or simply talking in the halls (Most likely over what just happened) the only two people left in the location of the argument was Danni and Melanie, who looked oddly sad over what just happened as she twirled her hair around her finger and noticed Danni stood there with a confused expression. And Danni shared that expression, she didn't knew either of them all that well but she could tell be general instinct that neither of them were so naturally full of malice that they would step down to insulting each-other or getting into such a public argument. She considered how there must have been some kind of important reason for this outburst, but nothing came to mind. “You probably want to know what just happened…you are Blake’s friend right?” Danni nodded at the question proposed to her and Melanie gestured for Danni to follow her up some stairs where they sat at the top of them. Melanie sat with her head in her hands and eventually raised her head slightly, albeit in a slumped position. “They used to be the best of friends…” Melanie began. “What? Forgive me for being rude but after that exchange I’m tempted to call you a liar!” Danni thought to herself as her eyes slightly widened at Melanie’s statement “R…Really?” She opted for just listening in and giving short responses that would allow for Melanie to continue without too much pause. “I know. Difficult to believe huh?” Melanie looked to Danni with a cryptic smile, like she had read Danni’s mind and found the thought slightly humorous “It all began to fall apart when Blake wanted to run for student council president” Melanie started up again. “Wait what?! Blake wanted to run for student council president?! That doesn’t seem like her at all!” Danni yelled in astonishment. “I know. Blake wanted to influence the school to have some of the stricter rules abolished. She said that way it allowed for more free-flowing students like in the art departments to achieve greater creations and to place more effort into their works. But as I’m sure you know, people loved Miss Jean over Blake’s idea. Chloe herself decided to not run because she thought it would be unfair to people who could actually come up with good ideas if she got voted in because of her popularity. A little bit hypocritical given what happened. To avoid a public revolt of sorts, Chloe took the position and tried her best to live up to what Blake wanted, but their opinions were always going to differ in key areas. Blake felt betrayed and Chloe felt as if Blake had betrayed her by not standing by her side, harsh feelings all around” Melanie finished her explanation and looked towards Danni to see her reaction. What she expected was a look or response of resignation over the issue, not like there was a lot that could be done to resolve the situation from what Melanie had said. But Danni had a quivering lip of anger and frustration. The idea something so inconsequential in the grand scheme of things could tear a friendship apart so easily made her mad. Beyond mad, livid. “That’s just…just…” Danni shock on the spot “JUST SO STUPID!” Danni stomped her feet on the floor and screamed to the ceiling above “How can two friends come to hate each-other so much?! If you're friends then you should be two people who trust each-other and love each-other no matter what! They’re meant to be someone who you can always…always…” Danni caught her mouth in her hand and began gently weeping into it “Someone who will always stick by you through thick and thin…that’s what a friend is to me…” Danni shut her eyes tightly and wished it wasn’t true that two people she cared so deeply for could be possible of such a tense and hate-filled situation. Melanie looked shocked: Everyone else had simply thought what happened was an unavoidable and unrepairable situation. Everyone except Melanie and Danni. Melanie always thought the same things Danni had just blurted out in a fit of intense emotions. Friends were someone who could forgive each-other for moments of weakness or subject of chance that result in one person being hurt. Because the bonds of friendship are stronger than that. Melanie took Danni’s hands in her own and looked into her watery eyes with her own tear-filled eyes “I’m so glad you feel the same way Danielle. What happened wasn’t right…they were friends! And friends don’t grow to hate each-other like that! We have to do something to help them! So will you help me?” Melanie asked, grasping tightly onto Danni’s hands and begged her with her hopeful and love filled eyes. “Yes! Of course! We can’t stand by while people we care about hurt each-other!” Danni nodded with a determined expression “But…can I request something of you…?” Danni returned to a more nervous disposition as she shuffled on her behind. Melanie nodded slowly “Will you be my friend?” Melanie chuckled to herself and patted Danni on the head and enveloped her in a hug “Of course! But we’re already friends!” Danni gasped in surprise from the statement “Because any friend of Blake’s, is a friend of mine!” Melanie said with a wide grin which, despite being uncharacteristic of her up until this point from what Danni had witnessed, suited her perfectly. “Thank you…thank you so much!” Danni enveloped Melanie in an even tighter hug and let more of her tears flow, but they weren’t of sadness. They were tears of happiness over the first person who had ever agreed to be her friend in such an honest and caring way. An unexpected friendship to say the least, Danni immediately considered Melanie to be a person who would bottle her feelings up and deal with them in an unhealthy way, but here she was being completely honest surrounding herself with amiable qualities, trust in Danni and desire to be friends. But what Danni noticed the most: was the warm embrace they had been sharing, emanating all the way through her body. It felt quite pleasant, to such an extent she never wanted it to end. Melanie slowly ended their embrace and picked up her belongings “Sorry, but we should head to our tutor rooms. Since you’re in Blake’s maybe you can do something to calm her down? I’m in Chloe’s so I’ll do my best, but we can’t go about forming any plans right after another argument between them. So let them cool off for a bit okay? We’ll talk more about what we can do later” Melanie formulated a sound strategy and Danni brought her now clenched fists up to her chest and nodded in confidence as she stood to shake Melanie’s hand in agreement. Danni made her way to her homeroom with a spring in her step, she now had what she had always desire but never had the courage to obtain: A friend. There was no way anything could bring down this great feeling. Or so she thought. Her hand reached out towards the doorknob and upon touching it her entire essence froze on the spot like the temperature had dropped by 200 degrees. She could feel her legs softly bouncing back and forth from some kind of fear. And then it hit her, she remembered what she had saw and how it how been engraved upon her mind forever. “Oh God I saw Blake having sex…” Danni whispered to herself as her face turned pale and darkened slightly at that thought. How could she face Blake now? She could barely look Blake in the eye or talk to her out of fear of Blake getting frustrated with her, now she had to sit next to her with the knowledge of what Blake had done. That knowledge alone made her so nervous it felt like a million of those razor-sharp fingers of Blake were being pointed directly at her. Danni’s hand shook back and forth on the knob and she started hyperventilating. The fear had well and truly set in and wasn’t planning on leaving her system anytime soon. But she would have to put up with it, there was no way out of this situation. She was terrible at feigning illness and would feel even guiltier over doing it. Skipping school also wasn’t an option, if her parents found out she would be well and truly dead. Danni managed to open the door after a minute or two of standing there and walked in. Her immediate hope was everyone would already be in the room and she would be forced to sit far away from Blake. However, she was to have no such luck. Blake sat in the same seat she had the previous day with her legs up on the table as she made a brooding expression of intense rage. Like the next living thing to catch her eye would be exploded from just her desire to kill, and unfortunately, that would be Danni since no other students proved to be in the classroom. Danni nervously made her way step by step over to the seat next to Blake and slowly drew in back so she could place her bags under the table and sit down on the chair. Blake took immediate notice of Danni and stared with an incensed look across her face. She swung her head back to the window and whispered something in a low tone. “I-I’m sorry?” Danni didn’t understand why she inquired, she was not in the correct emotional state to be able to talk to Blake without cracking and yelling out what she had seen the previous day. And if she did in fact do that then she would certainly be Blake’s first victim. “I asked how your morning is” Blake said in a quiet but easily audible voice. It had a dark tone to it, like if Danni deviated from her questions in the slightest and didn’t answer quick enough…well…first victim. “Oh! Um…well…” Danni was still too nervous and felt her entire face increase in heat as she blushed. She looked to the ground with the most awkward smile to try and hide her fear. Not that she thought it would work in the slightest but screaming seemed like and even worse thing to do. “Hey! If I’m going to have the decency to ask a question then at least look at me when you’re going to stammer around like a useless idiot!” Blake turned and yelled. Danni turned her head like it was some kind of old, rusted mechanical device; she turned slowly as it turned back and forth with the direction Blake was in just edging in victory. Blake’s expression eased ever so slightly and turned more curious “Hey, are you okay?” she asked and Danni only managed to nod “I’m not an idiot. I’m at this school for a reason, so don’t try and lie to me like I still believe in Santa!” Blake looked angry, but not an enraged anger, more like she was frustrated with the fact Danni didn’t trust her with the truth. “Is it about Chloe?” she asked looking slightly sympathetic. “Huh?! Oh no!” Somehow the mention of Chloe’s name shot life and confidence back into Danni as she sat upright with her hands on her knees “She told me that it was just rumours, everything with Chloe is good…” Danni blushed as she looked back down with a giddy smile “She even kissed me…” “What did she say exactly?” Danni looked surprised but Blake looked ever so slightly concerned but serious. Danni took a second but recalled the moment they talked. “Umm…something like: †˜As for what you’ve heard…I don’t sleep with any of the girls here at this school.’ Or something like that” Danni recalled and turned to see Blake’s head drop ever so slightly and a saddened look come across her face. “I didn’t want to see a friend get hurt over this…” Blake said and covered her face with her hand. “What?” Danni thought to herself “Hurt by what? Chloe did nothing wrong! Is Blake really that blinded by her hate for Chloe she actually believes Chloe did something wrong?!” Danni grew a little angry and even stood up to Blake and kicked her chair away. “Who the Hell do you think you are to say something about Chloe like that?! She’s perfect! There’s no way on God’s green Earth that she would do anything bad!” Danni yelled with tears streaming down her face. Blake looked up with an expression of shock over the way Danni reacted, but it quickly faded into a wise and pained smile, the one a parent would give their naïve child “I see…so you’re blinded by love then? That’s fine. I’m sure you’ll live in a fake world with her ignoring the past and never growing past that issue. Or…” Blake paused as she considered something “Do me one thing? Or should I say, do something for yourself. Ask Chloe this question: Who is Jazmine?” Blake said and looked out the window with a melancholic look “You should grab your chair. Tutorial will start soon…” They sat there in a painful silence as Blake looked melancholic the entire time, something weighing hard on her mind. An expression that didn’t suit her in the slightest, it looked as if something had finally well and truly beaten her down as far as she could be beaten. “What could do something like that?” Danni thought to herself. She always looked at Blake and was inspired, Blake was someone who wouldn’t give up even when beaten bloody, and so what was so terrible that it looked like she had given up hope? She should have tried to dissuade Danni if anything. It was a most odd change in her personality. But what truly weighed on Danni’s mind, was this †˜Jazmine’ person. Who was she? What links did she have to Blake and Chloe? She certainly hadn’t met someone called that name since coming to this school. Her curiosity had set in. But the answers she would receive, would shock and shatter her world beyond belief. Chapter 4: Live In The Past Or Move Towards Our Future? Spoiler:The day continued on in a slow and mundane fashion. Danni’s thoughts turned similar to the first day she had arrived at the school in the sense that talking to Chloe sent her into a frenzy of terrified emotions. Except this time a more ominous feeling set over her, like this time there could actually be something that Chloe had done that would lesser Danni’s own opinion of her. But she still retained hope that whatever Chloe had done, and whoever this †˜Jazmine’ person was, that Chloe would come up with some kind of intelligent and perfect explanation that would put her worries to rest. Danni waited by the entrance to the school, sat on the 3-foot tall wall where she had shared her first kiss with Chloe, her lips tingled in response to the memories of the kiss. It had sucked all common reason out of her and she didn’t care who saw them doing it, it was the happiest feeling she had ever felt, but the reason as to why she felt like that still had not become apparent to her. Her heart increased in its rhythmic tempo to an even faster beat when thinking of the kiss, she blushed and shuffled nervously to herself at the thought, more anxiety broke out inside of her at the thought of when her next kiss with Chloe would be. More importantly was finding out the answer to whatever had happened between Chloe and Jazmine. After figuring that out, she could enjoy Chloe’s lips more. She was certain there would be nothing to worry about, or at least hopeful. Chloe exited through the automatic doors at the entrance of the school as she played with her hair. It was in a ponytail, which was a new sight to Danni, but she soon pulled off the band around the tail and let her hair flow down to its natural length just below her shoulders as she whipped it clean of any tangles or knots. The light from the setting sun gave off a dark orange glow that contrasted with her bright golden hair that managed to even outshine the sun. The light beams bounced around and close to her but avoided her directly as if they were afraid to darken or damage her beautifully white skin. She played with the creases in her uniform and fluffed it out before she turned her attention to Danni and offered the most gentlest of smiles. “Ahhhh…how can anything look so beautiful…such a crime…” Dannie thought to herself as she rested her chin on the palm of her hand as she rested her elbow on her knees. She had a giddy smile as Chloe waltzed over towards her and offered Danni a hand to pull her up with. Upon doing this, Chloe giggled very quietly to herself and brought Danni in for one of her most gentle and tender of kisses. Tracing the surface of Danni’s lips with her tongue before giggling again, then moving on to kiss the tip of Danni’s nose, then cheek and then forehead before holding her closely in her arms and pressed their two bodies as close together as her thin, dainty arms would allow. “I thought of a great idea for what we could do for our date…” Chloe whispered into Danni’s ear with an ever-so-slightly seductive smile as she teased Danni by blowing into her ear. Danni’s body arched in response to Chloe’s teasing. “WH-What?!” Danni was more than surprised by Chloe’s seductive nature after being kissed by her in a manner befitting a simple and loving embrace. Chloe chuckled to herself and spun off of Danni before taking one of her hands in her own, this time her laugh was slightly louder and more playful at Danni’s expense “I was just teasing! I’d never do something like that so quickly!” Chloe brought herself closer and kissed Danni again. Danni pouted at Chloe’s teasing but kissed her back regardless, an activity she was convinced she would never tire of. They set about their walk home together, the route home that Chloe had showed Danni lasted a little longer back to the bus stop than what Blake had shown Danni but allowed them to stop by Chloe’s house, which was not a long distance from the bus stop that Danni regularly used to shorten the distance between the school and home. However, a feeling of dread passed over herself on the walk home this day, certainly over what she had to ask Chloe. She found herself slowing down more and more as her thoughts began to fix on who Jazmine was and what Chloe had done to deserve such suspicion and treatment from Blake. Eventually, Danni couldn’t force herself to keep by Chloe’s side and fell behind her. Chloe turned, looking worried as Danni kept her eyes fixed solely on the ground ahead of her. “Are you okay Danni? Danni? Come on, what’s the matter?” She asked, moving closer to Danni with each question until she leaned down to try and catch Danni’s frightened gaze. “Do you feel sick?” Chloe asked, placing her hands on Danni’s cheeks before lifting her head so she could rest her own forehead against Danni as to check her temperature. “Wow you are hot!” Chloe exclaimed even though the increase in temperature had come from Danni’s own blushing from Chloe’s own contact. “Here, my house isn’t far from here so you can come inside and rest for a bit!” Chloe grabbed Danni’s hand slightly tighter and lead her off without hesitation. Danni had stopped from how frightened she felt over asking Chloe that question that Blake had told her to ask, but why? She had no reason to distrust Chloe at this point, but no matter how logically she thought about the current situation it didn’t change how fast her heart kept beating or how fearful she was over what Chloe could be hiding from her. Somewhere along the journey, some courage exploded within Danni. “Who’s Jazmine?” Danni asked and immediately covered her mouth in shock over voicing the question. She noticed Chloe’s back straighten, her shoulders tightened up and she clenched her free hand very tightly, like she was trying to crush something. “Did Blake tell you to ask that question?” All happiness and kindness had been sucked out of Chloe in the brief few seconds of silence after the asking of the question. Her voice was cold and somewhat irritated with the question. “Yes” Danni looked down guiltily but glanced above the rim of her glasses to see Chloe had turned back to her with eyes full of tears and a bright smile on her face. Never before had she seen Chloe make anything close to that expression in the short time they had known each other, it was slightly off putting and gave rise to even more anxiety within her being, clearly something did happen with this Jazmine person. The smile on Chloe’s face seemed to reflect something, of both grief and love, a very odd combination to say the least. “I guess you deserve to know about…the only other girl I’ve ever loved…” Chloe said as she turned back around and grabbed onto Danni’s hand, tighter this time as if she was afraid that if she relinquished her grasp in the slightest that Danni would leave her forever. The rest of the walk was in complete silence, bar the pitter-patter of Chloe’s tears falling to the ground, her sniffling and the sound of their feet rhythmically stepping on the concrete pavement below. It was peculiar, despite there being some substance to whatever it was that Blake wanted Danni to learn about, she still hated to see Chloe in a painfully saddened state. It tormented her having to look at Chloe while she was trying her best not to break down right then and there. Danni threw off Chloe’s hand in a fit of guilt and enveloped her in a tight embrace from behind as she started wailing, crying into Chloe’s shoulder “I love you! I know it now! These feelings I have are love! I always wondered why I couldn’t stay calm around you or why my heart beat so quickly! It’s because I love you Chloe!” Danni finally found the right words to confess her feelings, and that’s what it had been this entire time. It wasn’t some close friendship that she was simply afraid of losing. It was love. Plain and simple as that. “So whatever you did, I don’t care! I love you! You could kill a person and I wouldn’t care!” Danni yelled as she cried more and more into Chloe’s back “I wanted to know about Jazmine since I was afraid there was someone you loved more! Or who you might have been with instead of me! But I don’t care! I’ll share you with the world but please don’t cry…I couldn’t bare it…” Danni felt her head fall into the soft surface that was Chloe’s breasts as she had turned around to properly embrace her. Chloe’s soft and long fingers brushed through Danni’s hair and patted her on the head with pure affection. “There’s no-one on this Earth I love more than you. That’s why I asked you out. Love at first sight and all that. It wasn’t just some feeling…it was the strongest feeling I’ve ever felt for anyone…I knew it was love” Chloe admitted with watery eyes, her confession may have been simple but it contained nothing but the upmost amount of love. Danni looked up to the tearful Chloe and closed her eyes while she pursed her lips ever-so-slightly and shared a kiss with her. “But you deserve to know what happened. About the girl who I loved before you” Chloe admitted with a smile, a saddened but joyful smile. It confused Danni how the two emotions could be mixed together so finely, but it didn’t matter. Chloe loved her the most, and those feelings filled her to the brim with happiness, Danni’s smile spread from cheek to cheek and she nuzzled up to Chloe before they set off for her home. The both of them walked hand-in-hand with their fingers tightly entwined around each-other, they walked in complete silence as they had done. But this time the walk did not leave Danni with the tense feeling of distrust, and she had finally managed to express her feelings to Chloe in a spurt of an incoherent admissions that shocked her. She never imagined in the slightest that her feelings were so strong or that they would manifest in the weirdest of ways. It almost embarrassed her that the reason she confessed these foreign feelings was because she was terrified that Chloe could have had someone who mattered more to her than Danni, and although she still wasn’t sure what had in fact happened between Chloe and this Jazmine girl, but she was happy that it was Chloe who was the one who was tightly grasping her hand in love, fear, happiness and all the emotions in between. “I love you Chloe…” Danni leaned on Chloe’s shoulder and gently stroked her arm below with her free hand. And it was true, beyond true, Danni couldn’t imagine sharing this tender moment with anyone else. It was still odd and didn’t make much sense to her but it was a happy confusion, one she wouldn’t trade for anything. “I love you too” Chloe kissed Danni’s head and rested her own head on top of Danni’s as they found themselves by a tall skyscraper in the area Danni’s bus passed by on its way to her usual stop. The area with skyscraper after skyscraper dominated the orange tinted sky. Chloe led her to one of the tall skyscrapers that was just on the edge of the more residential-like district where the rows of suburban houses and schools were located. The building itself was a marble white building with balconies on each and every side with sliding windows that acted as doors which connected the balcony to the insides of the room. Danni couldn’t see that far in because of the angle she and Chloe was stood at, but she more or less could assume what the interior was like. From the spacing between each balcony and the width of each balcony she could easily tell the rooms were quite large. “Do you live in an apartment Chloe?” Danni asked as she looked between the balconies and Chloe, who chuckled at her confusion in a light hearted manner “What’s so funny?” “Oh nothing!” Chloe shook her hands in an almost apologetic way. Her eyes and cheeks still remained puffy and red from crying, but now a happier expression was plastered along her face, seeing that gave Danni her own small smile “I’m just amazed how you can so simply go from a tearful confession to a simple topic like that” Chloe said in an impressed way but Danni simply tilted her head and squinted trying to figure out if Chloe was making fun of her or not “It’s a compliment!” Chloe said slightly defensively and Danni looked away slightly embarrassed. “Sorry…” She apologised and felt a tingling warmth press itself against her forehead, she looked up slightly to see Chloe kiss her in the same place as she had been making a habit of. “W-W-W-W-What was that for?” Danni asked with flushed cheeks. “Couldn’t help myself, when you apologise you look so cute Jazmine-!” Chloe began saying but caught herself on the final word of her sentence and bit down on her lip in frustration. Her shoulders shook and she let go of Danni’s hand so she could clench her own tightly to the point where her skin would go pale. “Sorry…it’s just…” Chloe took a short second to breathe in an out in a calming fashion before returning to face Danni, except her eyes looked away guiltily “I was just thinking about her that’s all…no more substance to it than that…just…a lot of memories came back at once…” Chloe dried her eyes and led Danni through the revolving doors of the building. Danni still wasn’t sure of what to make of the situation, Chloe’s own confession of love felt genuine to her but at the same time what Chloe had just said left her wondering more and more what had happened between Jazmine and Chloe and if Chloe felt a stronger love or not for Jazmine than she did for Danni herself. Chloe now walked ahead of Danni like they had done previously on their walk, always staying several paces ahead of Danni and keeping them perpetually in the same formation by their linked hands, although at this point it was more like Chloe was dragging Dannie by her wrist. The first room of the building was the lobby, off to the sides of the room was some expensive looking red-velvet sofa’s and armchairs that guests could use to sit around, using the coffee table in the centre of these variously placed furniture to rest their drinks if necessary. At the back of the room was a semi-circular desk that was manned by several men and women whom were well-dressed in smart clothing. They all sat at computers and typed in information whilst helping guests, most likely to find their rooms or provide other useful information, Chloe didn’t stick around long enough for Danni to get a decent amount of time to listen in and discern what was being said. As Danni was lead through the long hallway, she noticed how expensive and exquisite looking the halls and furniture were, pillars and professional paintings lined the golden walls on her sides. Regardless of this, Chloe took Danni to the side of the semi-circular check-in desk to where an elevator waited with nobody in it. It had a railing surrounding its walls with mirrors on the upper half of the walls. Chloe pressed a button labelled †˜6’ and waited for the elevator to rumble into action before rising upwards to the floor in question. They stood in absolute silence as Chloe kept her gaze fixed solely on the ground below with the bangs of her hair casting a shadow over the upper half of her face as well as covering it as well. Despite this though, Danni could easily tell it was not a happy or proud expression like Chloe would normally wear, even on their walk to this building she had still worn an expression of pride despite the fact she had been shedding some tears. But it no longer remained and now only a look of guilt was present. After what seemed like minutes of unbearable silence, the elevator dinged and the doors split apart for the two of them to exit. A long hall stretched before them with doors placed along the walls like you would expect from a hotel or apartment complex, except there was only 3-4 doors along a hallway that was easily 30-40 metres in length. At the end of the hall the path divided into two opposite directions. Chloe grasped Danni and brought her halfway down the hall. Stopping at a door numbered †˜6-3’, she took out a golden key that unlocked the door and opened it. Inside was an exceptionally large apartment. There was a coffee table with several pillows around it for sitting, or so Danni presumed. Off to the right of that was a small kitchen area with a refrigerator, counters, dishwasher, oven and cabinets overhead. The rest of the room was relatively bear except for a desk in the corner with lots of papers piled messily on it in addition to the same situation with pens and pencils. Finally at the back of the room was two armchairs in front of a television. They didn’t remain in the room for too long for Danni to think too deeply about the connotations of the apartment except for the fact that Chloe must have had some rich parents in order to afford such a nice looking and large apartment. Chloe started leading Danni off to the left, just a little ahead of the desk to a door labelled †˜Chloe’ except something else was written on the nameplate but had been aggressively scribbled off and dented inwards. “Wow…your parents must have a lot of money Chloe…” Danni said as she admired the room, trying to ignore whatever had been written on the door. “No. My Uncle was the one who paid for this apartment” Chloe took a deep breath before looking over her shoulder at Danni “My parents died shortly after I was born. I’ve been on my own ever since because my Uncle works overseas” Danni felt herself gasp a little at the thought, the more she learnt about Chloe the more tragic everything seemed. Firstly someone who was once considered her friend betrayed her, something happened to the first person she loved and now she had been alone all this time without family? How could she walk around with a smile on her face? She seemed more like the figure who should be acting cold and distant like Blake and yet she shouldered all this pain with a smile. It seemed crazy and yet…somewhat admirable. Admirable to be able to keep up such a kind demeanour despite such a terrible history. “You must have been really lonely…” Danni said feeling sympathetic towards Chloe’s position. “Not really” Danni’s eyes widened at the statement, Chloe seemed to register her shock and smiled slightly “I never knew what it was like to have parents, so I never really knew what it was like to feel the sadness over losing them. It’s like looking at a bird, you’re curious over what it’s like to fly but you don’t feel any great tragedy over not flying. That’s what it’s like being me, I look at people enjoying their time with their parents but not understanding it. I’m curious over what it would be like to have parents…but not sad” Chloe explained and finally opened the door of her room. Inside was a relatively small room in comparison to the rest of the apartment. A few feet in front of them was a rectangular bed with pink sheets, a bedside table next to it and against the opposite wall was a bookcase that spanned the entire room and was lined entirely to its maximum capacity with books of all kinds: from encyclopaedia’s to fantasy stories from famous authors. At the head of the bed was a window with one side of the curtains drawn. Danni could immediately tell why this was case thanks to the orange glow of the sun directly behind it casting the shadow of an object onto the curtain from behind it. It was misshapen thanks to the bends and folds of the curtains but looked somewhat like a book or otherwise similar object. Chloe immediately went for this curtain and drew it back to reveal a photograph in a silver frame. She carefully reached out for the photo like it would shatter from her mere touch and gently lifted it up and brought it over to Danni to show her the image inside. Inside was the picture of a girl, she wore a different school uniform to what Danni and Chloe were wearing, that was what she first noticed. What she then noticed was the figure of the girl, she looked somewhat athletic with a nice think figure with long legs and a small bust. She had long silver hair that reached the end of her back and sparkled in the light of the photo. She looked happy but very pale, beyond the pale any regular human should be. But she was still incredibly beautiful with perfectly proportioned features and a warm amiability that existed even in the form of a photo. “Danni…this is Jazmine…or what I have left of her anyway…” Chloe said with sadness, but a sadness that she had come to accept rather than one that would debilitate her with depression, clearly she had already moved forwards and Danni was experiencing the aftermath of whatever happened. Chloe sat down on the edge of her bed and beckoned Danni to join her. Once Danni sat down Chloe reached out for a box of tissues and placed them between them. “Let me explain. From the start. "For most of my life when I had free time, I would go down to the local park and sit on a bench. All I would do is watch people and observe what they did; having fun, spending time together and everything else. You learn so much from just watching other people, their idiosyncrasies and patterns, how to be social among other things. It was fun for me to observe and learn like this. And then one day someone kicked a ball my way and it hit my arm. I looked over and saw Blake with a timid and shy girl by her side…” Chloe looked over and took Danni’s hand in her own “Quite like yourself” The thought made Chloe chuckle a bit and brought life and happiness back to her face “That was Jazmine. The three of us became very close and the best of friends in our childhood. But Jazmine and I were closer than any of those amongst us, we were very close to each-other and eventually…we fell in love. But like everything else in my life…something had to go wrong…Jazmine had a rare disease where at any time in her life all her internal could shut down randomly and kill her. Not all at once of course. One day her kidneys began to shut down. Fortunately, we could give her a new kidney and save her. And only one of us was a match for her…” Chloe took off her cardigan, sweater vest and then began unbuttoning her shirt before pulling it to one side to reveal a long scar bending along the side of her stomach. “But another organ failed during the surgery that made it all for naught: Her brain. They managed to put my kidney back inside me but…this scar…will always remind me that not even I could save Jazmine…even if I gave her a piece of myself” Chloe took a tissue and wiped her eyes clean of tears before giving a few to Danni, who was crying fountains of tears and hiccuping from her crying. “T-That’s…so sad…” Danni threw herself on top of Chloe in an attempt to try and hug her but found herself falling on top of the now half-naked Chloe and being held tightly to her exposed chest as Chloe softly stroked her hair. “Yes. It was very sad. But I think it was the best way she could have gone. Thinking that I was going to sacrifice a whole piece of myself for her and hearing these last words…” Chloe picked up Danni’s head and looked longingly into her eyes “I love you” and then their lips softly connected with their tongues trading blows and saliva. “It hurt me for a long time. But when I saw you for the first time…I had that same feeling of when I first knew I loved Jazmine. My chest tightened and my hands shook. Danni: I love you now. Nobody else matters to me. Just you” She kissed Danni’s head and made her way downwards before sharing a deep and impactful kiss that left Danni gasping for air. Chloe rolled Danni onto her back and straddled her by the waist before placing her hands either side of Danni’s head and brought herself closer. “Can I show you how much I love you?” Chloe asked. Danni felt trapped, both physically and emotionally. With Chloe being on top of her and having her hands placed either side of her all means of escape were cut off. But she didn’t want to escape, she wanted to be enveloped in Chloe’s love for all eternity. Sweat slowly dripped down her body and her chest heaved up and down whilst her body grew itchier with desire as each second passed. “Yes…I want to know all your love Chloe…” Danni begged and wrapped her arms around Chloe’s head to bring her into another sensual kiss, causing her saliva to leak out the corner of her mouth as their tongues sloshed against each-other, almost like they were competing to see who could kiss better. Despite Danni’s efforts, up to a few days ago she had never kissed anyone whereas Chloe had Jazmine. So she was always on the losing end. Danni began to moan from Chloe licking down her neck and kissing it at certain points, leaving her mark behind, she then moved back up to Danni’s head and nibbled on her earlobe and licked the inside of her ear. Heat erupted from within Danni, causing her legs to spasm in reaction. “Chloe!” She moaned as her entire face turned red with embarrassment after the convulsions of her hips had stopped and she had stopped writhing in pleasure. Chloe immediately understood what this had meant but decided against teasing given how it was Danni’s first time and wasn’t expected to have the longest endurance ever. She led by Danni’s side and cradled Danni’s head in her naked chest “There, there. No need to be frustrated. Happens to everyone” Danni eventually rolled back over and rubbed her cheek against Chloe’s soft bosom. Chloe took the chance to move her hand down and underneath Danni’s skirt and panties before finding the now hard node at the top of her vagina. Danni immediately gasped as she pressed her face hard into Chloe’s chest from the electric surge being sent up her body in response to Chloe’s light teasing of her clit before moving her way lower to slowly stroke the folds and lips below, sometimes spreading them to tease the pink innards of Danni’s vagina. Danni raised her head slightly and with all her strength managed to grab Chloe’s chin and tilt it downwards so Chloe had to look Danni in the eyes “N...N-No fair…” Danni complained as Chloe smirked a little at her bright red face. Danni’s mouth hung perpetually open, only ever closing when she gasped whenever Chloe would tease her more intensely. “I’m sorry” Chloe kissed Danni on the lips with no tongue and locked eyes “What do you want to do?” Chloe asked, taking Danni’s preference into account. “D-Don’t tease me…” Danni said and looked down in embarrassment. Chloe nodded as she moved both hands under Danni’s skirt and removed her silk-white panties and tossed them over the bed before straddling her waist again. Danni unzipped the side of Chloe’s skirt and watched it fall to one side as she eyed Chloe’s black cotton panties. She brushed the back of her fingers against them and took in the softness wondering all the while what Chloe’s skin felt like down there. Chloe manoeuvred herself lower until her head was level with Danni’s pelvic area. She unzipped Danni’s skirt and threw it away as Danni took off her sweater-vest and unbuttoned her shirt to relieve herself of the intense heat her body was now giving off. Chloe eyed Danni’s vagina that was now glistening with moistness. Her lubrication ran all along the inner segment of her thighs and had begun to drip onto the bed itself. An oddly sweat scent was coming off from the region and Chloe stuck her mouth onto the region and began licking the folds of her vagina while slowly caressing her clit. Danni writhed and held onto the blanket of Chloe’s bed as each lick from Chloe’s tongue sent off a small explosion of pleasure all over her body. Eventually she felt the feeling of pleasure and euphoria build up to the point where she couldn’t take it anymore. Her hips tightened, her eyes began to roll back and her entire body went numb before she was washed over in a feeling of pure joy and happiness. Danni was left in a state where she was gasping for air, her eyes were glazed over from the euphoria and her hair was frazzled. Chloe crawled over to her as she rested her head next to Danni’s, entwined their fingers and pressed their palms together as they shared an intimate smile and giggle before a romantic kiss that lasted for ages. “I love you Chloe…” Danni said as her eyes grew too heavy and shut on her as Chloe held her closely, stroking her head and wishing her soft dreams. “And I love you even more” Chloe said and closed her own eyes, but not before stealing a glance at the picture by her window, and letting out a bright smile “Thanks Jazz, I won’t forget you or what we shared but…” She looked down to Danni’s sleeping figure in all its perfection “I love her now” Chloe admitted and closed her eyes, drifting off to sleep. Chapter 5: 10% done. Some writing has been done, using whatever free-time I have to write with.

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DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

Don't worry about it Xenon, I very much appreciate any help you other even if it goes against my style. I mainly write like that since my skill with punctuation like the places you've outlined is lacking, mainly due to the fact I wasn't taught in depth about it at school (creative writing was more of a self-taught thing so speech marks and quotes are of my own tutoring).

Anyway, Chapter 15: A little shorted than previous but an important chapter in terms of Danni and Chloe's relationship.

Chapter 15: Aunt and Cousins

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Nyaraâ™¥

9 years ago

I've read the first chapter~~~! o3o

Spoiler:

Writing my opinions on the fly while I'm reading the chapter (for me, it makes everything more enjoyable)~ Of course editing them after finishing and before posting to be congruent, but expect a at-the-moment feels on it~~~

Normally, a good narration comes from a character or from a more impersonal narrator. I-I-In this case, clearly you're the narrator with your (really cute and cool) personality and everything untouched~ Normally that would end up in a silly and bad result... but this time, considering how is the background and everything, it works, and I liked it, I really did. I especially like that "let's leave things clear" style you use.

As for the chapter itself comes, I disliked a lot the start. The family introduction was a way to long and boring on average. I know it was like "let's do this now so we won't bother with that later", but putting burdens like that on the start isn't too friendly for immersion. After a highly detailed home meet, you made a quick skip until first school day, I liked the style of the skip, but I think it would be good if there were less words employed in the family and more in the skip. The family introduction would have be done more dispersed in the history at the end.

Anyway, after that things gets a lot better. The bus scene felt a bit rushed, but needed and enjoyable at the end. Dani's sloppiness for first day on school seemed a bit weird, though, isn't she so used to starting on new schools already? Ignoring that, the introduction of each girl was really amazing and funny to follow so. B-Blake really made the mood, too~ *Chukles*. The description of Dani's glance to Chloe was really... t-touching, too, *blush*.

The final scene between Dani and Blake was the best scene, too. I-I-It changed everything in a good and interesting way. I m-m-mean... without reading the second chapter yet, I can tell you I'm feeling exactly like Dani right now, uncertainty filled with excitement and interest. And j-just like her... I want to know what would happen if she meets Chloe more.

At the end I want to continue reading and I will do so~ *Smiles as liked it~*.

Xenon FAKKU Writer

9 years ago

DatYuriThough wrote...

Hey, tell me about it. You're talking to a guy who failed freshman English Composition in high school. No joke about that, unfortunately. Most of my knowledge comes from first-hand experience skill-building in writing and role-playing so it's difficult to explain in words the rules of English grammar, but I try.

This chapter gives quite a fright. Let us hope that this "Emily" proves not to be entirely sadistic, but she already seems so. Let the drama commence, I say.

And now for my only noticed fix in this chapter:

DatYuriThough wrote...

“Oh sweet cousin how lovely it is to see you!” he voice dripping with sarcasm as she slammed the book shut with both hands but held it tightly as she stood up.

Should be "her," of course.

DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

Thanks Nyara, glad you got around to it and liked it so much.

Xenon wrote...

DatYuriThough wrote...

I wanted to include some more drama and tension, I planned on certain events leading up to it but it was taking too long to get there (me and my slow build ups lol) so I introduced this segment. Can't be having a perfect life without complications for Danni after all can we? That would get boring after a while for me more than the reader, don't want the same thing Chapter after Chapter where every problem is solved that Chapter, perhaps this might not be solved happily at all? Who knows...?

Thanks for the comments and corrections though. Hope the little explanation to the drama was coherent~

Nyaraâ™¥

9 years ago

I finished reading the second chapter~ *Blush, blush*.

The narration made the start of the chapter specially immersive. The blank girl and the blank halls... an analogy that I will most likely recall for myself in the future... Moving ahead, what was a foreseen argument suddenly became into a not so f-f-forseen... *blushes*.

Oh... The anticipation... One time I had an experience like that with a girlfriend, an argument followed by a lewd, a lewd that took a few tries before starting out. I was like Melanie, annoyed, but excited, waiting to get kissed even if we were arguing, like if in that way I would express myself better at the end. Because she was annoyed, too, she teased me, teased and teased, so I had go beg her, and then... *shivers in excitement*.

Dani watching the scene while touching herself is so exciting... AND WAIT, GETTING SPOTTED BY CLOE, gosh, that's like, like, like, *exalting in emotion*, I... I-I don't have words for it... And then Blake and Melanie continued... They are so lovely... The feelings between the emotions and sentiments crosses in a so touching way. After that a sweet end that melted my heart...

WAIT, A DATE!? That Chloe *chuckles*. Oh, the warming sensation of crossing fingers... it's one of the best sensations I can recall of. Finally a bit rushed and foreseen, yet sweetly narrated kiss, that made a warming closure.

I loved this chapter~! ❤.

crazr

9 years ago

Yes! I've been wanting to read this for ages! I don't read too many Yuri stories, but I definitely enjoy them. As of right now, I've only read chapter one, but I'll be sure to give my feedback once I read them! As fot the work itself, all the pretty girls in an all girls school strongly reminded me of Morinaga Milk's Girlfriends. The school also reminded me of Blackwell Academy from Life is Strange. When I was young, I went to a private school, so I can kind of relate. You're writing and descriptions are top notch. I only caught a handful of spelling errors as well. With what I've read so far, I can see this story turning out to be great!

On a side note, I'm going to take some notes on your characters. I love to write and flesh out female characters, so seeing some made by an actual female is a great way to learn how to write them best! Though, I will say that most of my females tend to be heterosexual, so I might not get everything I want, haha. Either way, I've written out a few tomboyish/homosexual characters before in other stories, so I still get something out of it. Thank you for giving me the chance to not only read a wonderful story, but also giving me a chance to open up my mind to new ideas for characters and possible development.

Edit/Add-in: Yeah! I just read the second chapter! I think your pacing might be a little rushed, but who am I to talk, I rush things too, haha. Even so, it is still quite the interesting and good read. My only real qualm is that you could do a better job with the pacing, which isn't really much of a problem. Plus, that might get better since I've noticed you've written over a dozen chapters. Being a heterosexual male, I was very surprised that the scene involving Blake and Melanie reminded me of a similar situation between me and my girlfriend. The only difference was that we weren't in a very public place. This story is really well written and every chapter I read just urges me to read the next one. Also, for someone who claims their grammar isn't so impressive, your spelling errors are quite minimal. I would say that you make less than me and I spoke english more than my native tongue back when I use to live in my native country! Keep up the good work, Yuri, I can see this story only getting better!

DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

crazr wrote...

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Yes! I've been wanting to read this for ages! I don't read too many Yuri stories, but I definitely enjoy them. As of right now, I've only read chapter one, but I'll be sure to give my feedback once I read them! As fot the work itself, all the pretty girls in an all girls school strongly reminded me of Morinaga Milk's Girlfriends. The school also reminded me of Blackwell Academy from Life is Strange. When I was young, I went to a private school, so I can kind of relate. You're writing and descriptions are top notch. I only caught a handful of spelling errors as well. With what I've read so far, I can see this story turning out to be great!

On a side note, I'm going to take some notes on your characters. I love to right and flesh out female characters, so seeing some made by an actual female is a great way to learn how to write them best! Though, I will say that most of my females tend to be heterosexual, so I might not get everything I want, haha. Either way, I've written out a few tomboyish/homosexual characters before in other stories, so I still get something out of it. Thank you for giving me the chance to not only read a wonderful story, but also giving me a chance to open up my mind to new ideas for characters and possible development.

Edit/Add-in: Yeah! I just read the second chapter! I think your pacing might be a little rushed, but who am I to talk, I rush things too, haha. Even so, it is still quite the interesting and good read. My only real qualm is that you could do a better job with the pacing, which isn't really much of a problem. Plus, that might get better since I've noticed you've written over a dozen chapters. Being a heterosexual male, I was very surprised that the scene involving Blake and Melanie reminded me of a similar situation between me and my girlfriend. The only difference was that we weren't in a very public place. This story is really well written and every chapter I read just urges me to read the next one. Also, for someone who claims their grammar isn't so impressive, your spelling errors are quite minimal. I would say that you make less than me and I spoke english more than my native tongue back when I use to live in my native country! Keep up the good work, Yuri, I can see this story only getting better!

Sorry it took me so long to respond to your comment Crazr but I really appreciate the comments~ ^_^

As for the pacing I feel it gets better later on. Kinda. Guess I'll leave that up to you but I'm glad you're feeling so compelled to read on.

Hopefully I'll find some time to stop (Momentarily) on my current project and write the next chapter.

crazr

9 years ago

Yeah! I just read up to the special birthday chapter involving Danni. I'll say it now, the way Chloe kissed Danni right after school reminded me of all the stupid kisses my girlfriend and I do. It really puts a smile on my face every time I can relate to something. It's proof that acts of love don't differ no matter your sex or gender identity. I'll have to agree with Xen, however, there were quite a few errors this time around.

Now regarding the story itself, the drama certainly is building up. I didn't expect Chloe and Danni to get it on so fast, but hey, love at first sight right? If that's the case, anything can happen, haha! Your pacing has also improved. Even though it's ended on a happy note, I expect plenty of drama and tragedy to come. You said this was loosely based of your own life experiences correct? If that's the case, you've had a pretty eventful life, Yuri, I'm quite jealous! Haha! Anyway, I will keep reading because your characters really draw me in. I once mentioned to Xen that I love to get in touch with my feminine side. I'm probably in the half a percent of guys that actually like listening to women's stories. The characters you've made are compelling to the point that I would love to meet them if I ever saw them in real life. Though I'd doubt they'd give me the time of day since I'm a man. Hahaha!

P.S. Your new avatar is awesome! I just changed mine to Miss Belladonna a little while back. Rest in piece, Monty, your inspiration will never leave our hearts!

DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

crazr wrote...

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I always take pleasure in my work when someone can relate to it, even with the most tenuous links at times xD

Well I'm glad you think the pacing improves~

Very eventful life actually, fortunately it avoids a lot of the bad things that happened around that time. Won't go into details but think of this as my life 'lite' in many ways lol. Not without drama or certain levels of tragedy though.

I thoroughly enjoy the characters myself, it's one of my few works where I love to swap perspectives at times because of how diverse they can be from each-other and yet equally interesting to write as. That being said I'm really glad you like them, that is one of my hopes when I write them after all ha~

Mmm, Monty was my inspiration for coming up with my own story. It was so cool how he made his dream come true, and now I want to do the same with writing. I carry Monty's dedication and love for my work within myself and if I could 1/1000 as good as him I'd be delighted. May he find peace.

crazr

9 years ago

I undertsand the eventful life. I myself had a very troubled past. I've obviously moved on from it and it no longer troubles me, but it doesn't change the fact that I sometimes still think of it. As for the rest of my life, I'd say it's pretty lackluster with only a few defining moments. Haha!

It's good to hear that you enjoy your characters. One should never make a character unless they can connect to them. Whether it be hatred or love, it is emotion that fuels a character's qualities. It you truly did not like a character, you would feel no connection whatsoever. Hatred, love, joy, anger, fear, these are feelings that well written characters can elicit from readers. I believe you have done a spectacular job doing so.

Also, who's to say you won't be on Monty's level or above if you continue? Monty is a great inspiration. He inspired me to write my adventure story which is based off of a character I made in a campaign of Dungeons and Dragons. Everyone has equal right to creativity, others can just express it easier. What I'm trying to say is, at your level, you might potentially already be as good as him, you just haven't gotten the opportunity to show it yet. Monty and many like him once said that anyone can achieve anything if they strive towards a goal and never look back.

DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

crazr wrote...

Also, who's to say you won't be on Monty's level or above if you continue? Monty is a great inspiration. He inspired me to write my adventure story which is based off of a character I made in a campaign of Dungeons and Dragons. Everyone has equal right to creativity, others can just express it easier. What I'm trying to say is, at your level, you might potentially already be as good as him, you just haven't gotten the opportunity to show it yet. Monty and many like him once said that anyone can achieve anything if they strive towards a goal and never look back.

Call me an eternal pessimist lol I'll be the first to criticise my own work (aren't we all?) and say it isn't good enough, I'm my own worst enemy like that. That being said its my goal one day to be able to tell myself if offered a story of mine to him that he'd be impressed and say I did well. Obviously that can't happen now, so I guess I gotta keeping taking every step I can until I feel satisfied.

With that all out the way I'm almost done with Chapter 16, should be up Friday or Saturday~

crazr

9 years ago

I've got so much free time that I'm juggling too many things at once! Anyway, I just read chapter 5 and it's a great setup. I can't wait to see (or I guess read) all the adventures (or are they misadventures?) and shenanigans this marry band will get into. Their group psychology is wonderful. You can feel how well their quirks and idiosyncrasies play off of each other. The last moments were definitely my favorite. As Xen has told me, I write a lot of cliffhangers as well as situations where one has to imagine what came next. The fact that I'm not quite sure what Blake did to Melanie to elicit such noises is lovely. It really stirs thee naughty thoughts more than just reading and actual lemon sometimes. Speaking of Blake, she really is a bold girl. I would also say the same for Melanie. I remember I almost got caught a few times by family and fiends and the last thing on my mind was to continue doing raunchy things with my significant other. Kudos to people brave enough (or shameless enough, hahaha!) to do this.

DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

And finally a new Chapter. Hope you all enjoy~

Chapter 16: Walking Out the Closet.

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Xenon FAKKU Writer

9 years ago

Wow, well done with this chapter. I'll tell you I did not expect that kind of reaction at all and if I was homosexual, I can guarantee you that I most certainly would not make out with my choice of a significant other in front of someone I was fearful would have an explosive reaction. My face contorted when Chloe sucked Danni's face, very unsure how that action would be perceived. You really threw me for a loop with that one!

Great job once again.

crazr

9 years ago

I just read up to the part where Chloe and Danni are about to go ghost hunting. My, my, this is getting so good. Their relationship is absolutely wonderful. That said, I completely understand Danni not telling her parents about their relationship. My Dad is quite against any kind of same sex relationship, and sad to say, most people are. I say it was a smart move for her to do that. But with Chloe being so reckless, I wonder how long they can keep it a secret? Also, I'm surprised Danni's family isn't questioning here about being gone for a few days without so much as a warning to them. If I did that, my parents would crucify me. Actually,I'm pretty sure most people's parents would get worried and or upset. As usual, great job, Yuri-sama, your writing is stellar. Your works inspire me and it's the reason I've been writing so much as of recently. Thank you!

On a completely off topic note, I saw the Avengers! If anyone here is a fan of Marvel, I highly recommend watching it.

Also, if your having maintenance problems with the length of what you can post. The usual cause is because of a gateway error due to an overbearing load in comparison to your connection. In other words, most of these problems can be fixed just by relocating to a place that has a better internet connection. Obviously, there is a limit to how much you can put on a post, but you should rarely be troubled by it. I mean, my chapter lengths go from anywhere between twelve to sixteen pages and I have little issues. I hope this helps.

DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

*Clear throat* So um...procrastination is thing...but to make up for that have a lovely, 4000+ chapter featuring the domestic life of our main heroine. So with out further Ado...

Chapter 17: Her Family, Her love.

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Xenon FAKKU Writer

9 years ago

What a nice chapter. You could really feel the expression of closeness and humor within the family, as if there yourself, having a good time laughing with the whole group. I really enjoyed this segment for that reason. Also, you get a touch more insight as to Danni's family's past and history, where they immigrated from and the customs and norms they had to deal with there. She held up Danni's skirt and made a comment, and even though you didn't mention the length of the skirt she was wearing, I could tell that no matter if it was upwards from the middle of the thigh or down to the shins, it wouldn't be long enough in that sort of culture. The sociology behind those experiences is all too interesting to me.

Still, it's nice to see you keep the humor, genuine feeling, and cute lovable feeling within the characters, even though it's been much too long since your last entry. So, I'm very happy to see you're still alive. Oh, and thank you kindly for helping crazr out on his yuri story. He's told me you've been a big help.

Hope things are going well for you personally, and if you ever want to drop by, the Writers' Lounge is always there to use.

Finally, it wouldn't be a proper post from me without mentioning the places that could use editing:

DatYuriThough wrote...

“I wanted to stay in Riyadh, the capital, since the job was easy and paid quite a lot. The company I work for now contacted me and asked how much they would need to pay me to work oversees.

Overseas.

DatYuriThough wrote...

Astonished at the time already he looked over to Chloe with wonder as to what she would.

As to what she would what?

DatYuriThough wrote...

“Dinner’s ready everyone! Take your seats!” Everyone rose from their seats and headed towards the dining room, with Audrey’s wonderful and filling food that made Danni salivate at the mere mention of the food, and she finally got to share the food she had always boasted about with the love of her life.

I'd recommend a rewrite. You use the word "food" three times and "seats" twice. They're simply too close in proximity that it jars the flow.

DatYuriThough wrote...

On the other side of the bed to her was Chloe, sat on the edge while she was busing herself with tying her hair back into a loose ponytail to sleep with.

Busying.

DatYuriThough wrote...

Moving with a form of graceful awkwardness that could only be best described as Chloe-esc.

-esque.

DatYuriThough wrote...

Danni swung her legs of the edge of her bed, eyes firmly fixed on the hypnotising rhythm of her limbs as they swayed back and forth.

Off.

DatYuriThough wrote...

“…that your room is incredibly girly-girl my love.”

Missing comma after "girly-girl."

DatYuriThough wrote...

“No silly. A lot of authors tend to leave hidden messages within the story of a book itself, the plot is more of a tool designed to deliver entertainment while inside the structure and narrative lies contextual and personal reasoning and philosophy. Fair to say a lot of writers are more like walking talking propaganda machines, with their works as a literary means to spread their messages to those intelligent enough to decipher them. Though people often get it wrong.” Chloe explained, leaving Danni’s head spinning.

Inception. A character in a story speaking about hidden messages written within stories. We must go deeper.

DatYuriThough wrote...

Chloe called out sarcastically in an exaggerated tone before turning to do holding up one of the doilies

May want to adjust that. Plus, no punctuation.

DatYuriThough wrote...

Danni begged as Chloe feathered a kiss against her lips, resulting in Danni tilt her head into the kiss and moan in the desire for more.

Tilting.

crazr

9 years ago

Never actually commented on here since I gave my opinion to you on Skype, but this was a well written chapter, Yuri. I could feel the genuine emotion and it was definitely written from the heart. I've been bothering you about this for months, and I apologize for that. Either way, this was a sight to see since I've had a pretty awful day which you also helped me through. Between you and this story, you really perked me up. Thank you so much.

Also, @Xenon, I hate to say this but this story's close to it's end apparently. I believe it will come in three chapters.

Xenon FAKKU Writer

9 years ago

crazr wrote...

Also, @Xenon, I hate to say this but this story's close to it's end apparently. I believe it will come in three chapters.

Shhh. Don't spoil it, crazr. That's not nice. I wouldn't know if you didn't tell me and now I know so I can't unknow. Sheesh.

Though, if you've had a rough day, you too can feel free to use the Lounge to vent. We're here for you when you need us. At least I am.

DatYuriThough Goddess of Nature

9 years ago

Xenon wrote...

Thanks for the comments as always Xenon, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm fine, ever since my exams finished I've just embraced my laziness and that's extended to my writing. I'll get cracking on the editing you suggested, I just couldn't be bothered with all of that at the time lol. I think crazr may be over exaggerating my influence or aid in his story but I'm happy to help.

And I'm sorry about crazr telling you about the remaining chapters >.>

Though that's just all I have planned, it could go on longer, it might not. Hopefully the uncertainty is enough for you xD

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