[Locked] :The H- Adventures of Fakku's Sexually Active: [Up'd 5/8!]
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Wow you do a great job a describing everything! Im already waiting for the next story so i guess im a fan now. Ur sex stories sound so nice compared to anything ive done =(
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Damn! That was amazing! Incredible writing! Jaw dropping hot intense action! If it was a book, I'd buy it right off the bat, no shame, in public, in a freaking book store! Look forward to reading more.
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Nice writing there. I've never actually read any stories from a woman's point of view. I'd give you a +rep but mine is already spent for the day.
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A good lemon writer! As an author myself it's good to see really good lemons from time to time.
Are these based off personal experience?
Are these based off personal experience?
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godotccf wrote...
A good lemon writer! As an author myself it's good to see really good lemons from time to time.Are these based off personal experience?
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I'm going to pretend you didn't say that.
Please reread the OP.
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Lollikittie wrote...
godotccf wrote...
A good lemon writer! As an author myself it's good to see really good lemons from time to time.Are these based off personal experience?
......
I'm going to pretend you didn't say that.
Please reread the OP.
Sorry sorry, just a little worked up from you opening story.
It is very good stuff and I hope you can continue writing magnificent nuggets of greatness :D
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godotccf wrote...
Sorry sorry, just a little worked up from you opening story.
It is very good stuff and I hope you can continue writing magnificent nuggets of greatness :D
Hmm...
I wonder if I should write up the story of my first time..
Do you think it would matter how recent the story is?
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Nah it doesn't really matter actually, as long as it's shown on a personal level, has some depth and shows what your conveying then it's all good :D. Also make sure your syntax, grammar and spelling is correct then you got yourself another great work :D
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godotccf wrote...
Nah it doesn't really matter actually, as long as it's shown on a personal level, has some depth and shows what your conveying then it's all good :D. Also make sure your syntax, grammar and spelling is correct then you got yourself another great work :D Grammar is my bitch.
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[color=green]I'm not a virgin
But i've never had a gf so I'll be reading a few more of these for future referene
Really like the way of your writing, You really make he readers get engulfed in your writings.
I think you'll make an excellent aldult. BOok writer[/color]
But i've never had a gf so I'll be reading a few more of these for future referene
Really like the way of your writing, You really make he readers get engulfed in your writings.
I think you'll make an excellent aldult. BOok writer[/color]
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mantisprime1250 wrote...
[color=green]I'm not a virginBut i've never had a gf so I'll be reading a few more of these for future referene
Really like the way of your writing, You really make he readers get engulfed in your writings.
I think you'll make an excellent aldult. BOok writer[/color]
Typos forgiven as you are using a cellular device.
And are just that awesome.
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Hmmhmmm meh it's fine this really isn't a fanfic website, because if it was you'd be flamed like a bitch.
And to answer your previous question it's fine to post your first time ^_^
And to answer your previous question it's fine to post your first time ^_^
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I just read your update...... damn.... I want an experience like that my first time. Although I want it to be with a lady, and I'll be the one being inside... but I digress. Great job and I look forward to the next one.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
I thank the person who started the thread for delivering two wonderful stories I can relieve myself to. They are either as good or almost as good as most of the material provided on this site. Allow me to express my thanks by giving you this wall of text which I am afraid is nowhere as erotic:
What follows from here is an encounter between two persons who will be named 'A' and 'B'. 'A' had the honour of chauffeuring 'B' back home after spending some time clubbing. 'A' was bleeding in the head which explained why 'A's head was swimming.
As to why 'A' sustained that injury, it is best to say that this is a near inevitable consequence of clubbing. 'A' gave 'B' a penetrating and a what-could-be-mistaken as a passionate glare to 'B'.
'B' on the other hand, had a swimming head too! However unlike 'A', 'B' is inebriated, intoxicated, not sober or to put it succinctly, drunk.
'A' and 'B' made their way up to 'B's apartment in what could be called a limp. Upon entering 'B's apartment, 'A' was greeted with a horrendous clutter of items, rubbish and other unidentifiable objects. 'A' responded by hissing at 'B', "You ought to apologise to me for this mess." That proved to be extremely unwise, because 'B', being in a state of stupor, responded by pulling 'A's head and gave 'A' an almighty headbutt sending 'A' flying off to 'B's bed.
'B's bed should be quite ancient, considering that 'B' grew up with the bed. And if 'A' caught a whiff of some pungent smell of sweat and other body fluids together with feeling a slimy sensation as 'A's skin came into contact with the bedsheets, 'A' ought to know very well who to blame for this.
'B' continued the assault by giving 'A' a body slam whilst 'A' was writhing on 'B's bed. This continued with 'B' violently taking hold 'A' legs, wrapping it over 'B's waist in preparation to do execute a piledrive.
'A' yelled of course. "WHY DO YOU HAVE TO DO THIS??" 'B' responded by chuckling creepily.
Now, consider 'A's disposition. He was engulfed in 'B's scent and felt the whole magnitude of 'B's weight as his body was plunging towards the floor. One can be quite sure that 'A' was hearing voices. These voices must be that of the choir sung by Hell's Angels. And the heat that wrapped 'A' must originate from the furnaces of 'A's conceived hell-on-Earth.
Of course, 'A' sustained further head injury but not yet amounting to a concussion. 'A' mustered some strength to whip out some needle that was laced with either a laxative or a sedative. That needle was put to good use on many an occasion especially occasions that involved clubbing.
Seizing the shaft, 'A' plunged it deeply into 'B' filling 'B's insides with either a sedative or laxative. Either way, that seemed to subdue 'B' somewhat. And the day ended with 'A' collapsing against 'B' on the floor with 'A' finally succumbing to head injuries and 'B' either sedated or feeling a powerful urge to go to the toilet.
THE END
PS: The author of the above text is bitter person who has recently left his teenage years and has never tasted forbidden fruit. At the point of writing he is near delirium and happens to think that the above wall text that is of his creation can be considered somewhat amusing. Frankly, any attempt to admonish or piledrive him into concrete floors would be most welcome.
PPS: The author of the above text would like to express his/her thanks to Lollikittie for starting this thread.
PPPS: You may be wondering what is the gender and sexual orientation of the two protagonists, 'A' and 'B'. To that, the author leaves that to the reader's imagination.
What follows from here is an encounter between two persons who will be named 'A' and 'B'. 'A' had the honour of chauffeuring 'B' back home after spending some time clubbing. 'A' was bleeding in the head which explained why 'A's head was swimming.
As to why 'A' sustained that injury, it is best to say that this is a near inevitable consequence of clubbing. 'A' gave 'B' a penetrating and a what-could-be-mistaken as a passionate glare to 'B'.
'B' on the other hand, had a swimming head too! However unlike 'A', 'B' is inebriated, intoxicated, not sober or to put it succinctly, drunk.
'A' and 'B' made their way up to 'B's apartment in what could be called a limp. Upon entering 'B's apartment, 'A' was greeted with a horrendous clutter of items, rubbish and other unidentifiable objects. 'A' responded by hissing at 'B', "You ought to apologise to me for this mess." That proved to be extremely unwise, because 'B', being in a state of stupor, responded by pulling 'A's head and gave 'A' an almighty headbutt sending 'A' flying off to 'B's bed.
'B's bed should be quite ancient, considering that 'B' grew up with the bed. And if 'A' caught a whiff of some pungent smell of sweat and other body fluids together with feeling a slimy sensation as 'A's skin came into contact with the bedsheets, 'A' ought to know very well who to blame for this.
'B' continued the assault by giving 'A' a body slam whilst 'A' was writhing on 'B's bed. This continued with 'B' violently taking hold 'A' legs, wrapping it over 'B's waist in preparation to do execute a piledrive.
'A' yelled of course. "WHY DO YOU HAVE TO DO THIS??" 'B' responded by chuckling creepily.
Now, consider 'A's disposition. He was engulfed in 'B's scent and felt the whole magnitude of 'B's weight as his body was plunging towards the floor. One can be quite sure that 'A' was hearing voices. These voices must be that of the choir sung by Hell's Angels. And the heat that wrapped 'A' must originate from the furnaces of 'A's conceived hell-on-Earth.
Of course, 'A' sustained further head injury but not yet amounting to a concussion. 'A' mustered some strength to whip out some needle that was laced with either a laxative or a sedative. That needle was put to good use on many an occasion especially occasions that involved clubbing.
Seizing the shaft, 'A' plunged it deeply into 'B' filling 'B's insides with either a sedative or laxative. Either way, that seemed to subdue 'B' somewhat. And the day ended with 'A' collapsing against 'B' on the floor with 'A' finally succumbing to head injuries and 'B' either sedated or feeling a powerful urge to go to the toilet.
THE END
PS: The author of the above text is bitter person who has recently left his teenage years and has never tasted forbidden fruit. At the point of writing he is near delirium and happens to think that the above wall text that is of his creation can be considered somewhat amusing. Frankly, any attempt to admonish or piledrive him into concrete floors would be most welcome.
PPS: The author of the above text would like to express his/her thanks to Lollikittie for starting this thread.
PPPS: You may be wondering what is the gender and sexual orientation of the two protagonists, 'A' and 'B'. To that, the author leaves that to the reader's imagination.