[Locked] :The H- Adventures of Fakku's Sexually Active: [Up'd 5/8!]

gotta give you credit: you certainly know how to build your way up to a climax.

and yes, that pun is intended.

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I am quite certain you are referring to the first two stories of real-life intimate moments. The one by Leonard267 however is simply out of place and a classic example of shoddy writing.

although i don't think you meant for it to be this way, the story came off as being humorous, in a good way.

your writing isn't bad. it may not be as poetic in its flow as lollikittie's writing, but your use of third person perspective and simple storytelling was actually rather interesting, and it made the story a worthwhile read.

shoddy writing would be something along the lines of "I went clubbing with this person. We got back. We fucked. I felt like taking a shit," or something along those lines. you put some thought into it, and it definitely reflected.

He already said it was a parody. D;

Naw... I'd like to think that it was an attempt in manslaughter or homicide rather than a case of sexual assault. Moral of the story: Never go clubbing. Don't accompany anyone to go clubbing. Especially if it involves real clubs.

I think I almost busted my ass from laughing at this last part.

But yea, I personally didn't find your writing bad. Maybe I just have a really loose definition of good writing, I dunno.

When I go clubbing it involves real clubs and real baby
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Rhinovirus hit the both of us pretty hard.

Will post an update once we are both recovered.

Heaven knows when that will be... Fufufufu..

I am so far from this
Haven't even had first kiss yet
But amazing story, I loved it :3

Good story!
(But it somewhat reminds me of something I have read before.)
Nevertheless, i liked it!

Unless someone somehow managed to document my escapades before I did, that is an impossibility, my good sir.

glad you liked it, though. :3

I was waiting for the server to get fixed and i saw your link. It's truely a masterpiece. You should be proud of yourself. It's like im reading a pro adult author. Keep it going! ;)

Out of plain curiosity, who are "both of us"?
I really look forward to your next update.

Hope the two of you feel better and uh...good job....at having sex and sharing with us? I guess?

Her boyfriend? The "James" she's nailing in her stories? Duh?

This. xD

Also,

It's more like he's nailing me.
The chain of command is very clearly defined. xD

No no. I thought she may be roping in other people to write similar stories. Thanks for clarifying though.

I thought you wore the pants.

I don't think any pants are being worn, apparently.