Nice Guy

Knowing that she's willing lying to him about having a boyfriend knowing it makes him jealous and fuck her harder.... damn she's a little masochistic ball of sexy!

IMHO, FMC's mind is way more than just "broken", ..... it's folded, spindled and mutilated.

Moving along, then .....

Really hot, honestly. Right up until page 20. This was almost a believable mind-break. The thing that started to crack the facade was him getting increasingly abusive. The reaction was not normal for that level of crazy and he started being possessive and weird. I think if he had maintained the energy in the first half I’d totally understand.

The second she stopped having her own justifications for the sordid affair she stopped being a character. Many such cases.


Still! Hot as fuck. Saving for a rainy day.