Kurumi is an omega who agrees to meet her potential alpha husband. Can an alpha who's rough around the edges and a nerdy omega be a fit for each other?
I was honestly surprised to see one of Kazuma-sensei's works here, but it was a welcome surprise. Considering she comes from a BL background, something like this is probably not what the Fakku audience is used to and you'd be more likely to find it on a site like eRenta.
Still, the story itself is pretty nice. The sex scenes aren't as intense as some other works on this site but it feels very loving.
The art style itself leaves a bit to be desired. There are some scenes where Shizuru's hands look way too big for comfort (Yaoi hands as they call it). As well, his nails aren't clipped. I can't imagine any woman enjoying being fingered by such claws. Even the scummiest of NTR protags will have their nails clipped. It just really takes you out of it.
Overall, not a bad read. I might check out the next chapter if it releases. Though, I don't see myself recommending it much.
The story was pretty good! Very heartwarming at the end. 😊
The art was very pretty. Lots of random flowers and bubbles (check the sample pages) It KIND OF reminds me of the shojo manga style from a few years ago. Very nice. I love how the author expressed Kurumi's arousal lol (p.14-15) It was very cute and so over the top ðŸ¤
(Heyobromo is right. Shizuru has very long nails. I MIGHT be imagining things, but judging from the thickness, length and the width...I think he has press-on nails. The artist might've been inspired by a celebrity who rocked the look? That's what I am guessing.)
Anyway, cute story. The characters get along very well. They may have rushed into things, but they seem to love + respect each other very much. 😊 Good detail. Nice ending. The little joke at the end with the pork bun...🤣🤣🤣
Loved it.
Very good story. If you liked the sample pages, JUST DO IT!!! ADD IT TO YOUR LIBRARY!!! :D
Still, the story itself is pretty nice. The sex scenes aren't as intense as some other works on this site but it feels very loving.
The art style itself leaves a bit to be desired. There are some scenes where Shizuru's hands look way too big for comfort (Yaoi hands as they call it). As well, his nails aren't clipped. I can't imagine any woman enjoying being fingered by such claws. Even the scummiest of NTR protags will have their nails clipped. It just really takes you out of it.
Overall, not a bad read. I might check out the next chapter if it releases. Though, I don't see myself recommending it much.
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